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Offline ReeNa

Re: Poems
« Reply #45 on: April 27, 2017, 07:51:06 AM »
Vipu ty for your comments ma  ;D :)

Losh sis you always encourage me to write....ty sis. 8)

Yes sis misunderstanding can destroy everthing we have built in a min.  :(

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Re: Poems
« Reply #46 on: April 27, 2017, 08:02:55 AM »


A silent cry forms
Beyond the boundries of norms
A wounded heart raging the storms

The lonely night he tries to defy
Says real men don’t cry
Now the future he can’t descry

He tries to preoccupy
Not wanting to magnify
What others vilify and justify

His strength lays in his heart
Though its being torn apart
And always want to depart

After every battle
He is a little more fragile
Often coming out with a rappel

Suffering in silence
He makes sure there are no sirens
His reliance has become his defiance

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Re: Poems
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« Reply #50 on: April 28, 2017, 10:20:43 AM »


I know her not
I never knew
She wasn’t there
When I was there

She had to leave
But she loves you they say
Something my little mind
Could never comprehend

I wanted mommy’s hugs
I wanted mommy's kisses
I wanted her tender loving care
But like a wild flower
Without care I am just growing on

To long for love that might never be
Yells my heart for the pain it bears
When loneliness becomes my only accomplice
My own shadow becomes my darkest fear

Now I have grown and have my own
Yet my heart longs for what is unknown
Weeds in my pasture were long ago sown
The cry of the child within me still lives on unknown.
« Last Edit: April 28, 2017, 05:15:06 PM by ReeNa »

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Re: Poems
« Reply #51 on: April 28, 2017, 11:01:24 AM »
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Re: Poems
« Reply #52 on: April 28, 2017, 11:42:20 AM »

~ !! Love U Reens Baby!! ~
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Re: Poems
« Reply #54 on: April 30, 2017, 07:27:49 AM »
Hi ree sis :D really a heart touching poem   :'( Amma na pidikathavanga yarum illa :) I luv this poem as much as I luv my amma :) super ree sis :-*

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Re: Poems
« Reply #55 on: April 30, 2017, 10:35:22 PM »
Well written Reena !

The world is getting tured by some elite to be parched for their jealousy self upliftment.

I wonder, whether they care to think about their progeny who by any chance has to witness the menace.

your word selection and knowlege of expression is good. please keep up the good work.

with humble regards,

Rain


 

The Parched Land






Mother earth mourns and cries
Yet you her children despise her counsel and rebuke
You have become like a prodigal son
Forgetting the one who nourished you

Who can match the wrath of nature
Unleashed to awaken the selfish generation
Sun has creeded judgement on you
Water has refused to flow on you

Tears of farmers flow like streams
Yet she does  not yield  and refuse to be consoled
She has embraced dust as her companion
Consuming skeletons of life in to her belly

She has become a barren woman
Her womb has been shut
Parched and cracked has become her robe
What remains are mirages of hope

Once adorned now she is scorned
Her only possession are portraits of a season long forgotten
Laying barren and forsaken she whispers in the hot dry wind
The story of her unrepentant children.


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Re: Poems
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Re: Poems
« Reply #57 on: May 01, 2017, 04:49:33 PM »


Thank you for ur comments and encourging words Rain  8).


I am glad you love this poem vipu sis. Thank you for ur comments,
True amma va pidikatha vanga yarum illa  :)


The love of a mother for her child is undeniably the strongest emotion in a human soul.....i agree losh sis.

but in this poem the mother left the child  :( the child longs for the mother's love but never received it.
Thank you sis for ur encouraging comments  :).



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Re: Poems
« Reply #58 on: May 07, 2017, 04:12:14 AM »
Hi Reena
nice poem keep it up

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Re: Poems
« Reply #59 on: May 07, 2017, 04:23:40 AM »
excellent writing skill Reena .  Congratulation