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The invincible mind
« on: November 22, 2018, 02:41:03 PM »
The invincible mind

The voracious mind's unfathomable quest,
Feeds on vanity, vengeance and lust.
Prompt reminders of pitiable past,
Of unsaid words and silent tears...
Endless chatter of Angels and Demons,
Fighting battles of love and hate.
Irrevocably, vice triumphs in debate
Feeding poison to the purest of souls.

Is our life nothing but a puppet show?
Dancing to the strings of the untamed mind,
Loosing our actions in impulse-confined...
Making foes out of friends in seconds.
Shouldn't intellect be the fuel of perception?
And mastering the mind, the highest of ambitions?
Yet, we stand caged in delusion
Allowing our conscience to be preyed...

-Mirage

« Last Edit: November 25, 2018, 11:06:59 PM by Mirage »

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Re: The invincible mind
« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2018, 06:49:44 AM »
Wow wow.. Wonderful Enigs!  Reading this poem first thing in this morning. I am just sinking to the depth of this poem. Admittedly, we all sin with our tongue driven by our invincible minds. The precision of this poem hurts this vulnerable mind. At the same time leaves the mind perplexed, with hell lot of unanswerable questions.
« Last Edit: November 25, 2018, 09:33:35 AM by ChikU »

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Re: The invincible mind
« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2018, 09:18:36 AM »
Wow Enigs one of your best attempts. Love your poem and the choice of words.
Simply amazed!!...... just love your work. Keep writting my dear sis.

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Re: The invincible mind
« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2018, 11:37:23 AM »
Thanks a lot chiku and reena sis for your time, encouragement and valuable comments! :)

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Re: The invincible mind
« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2018, 09:46:07 PM »
i  see 10 william wordsworth, and 100 shakespeare in you... how and when u got this thought and topic ..
simply mersalayitten ....ha ha ha.. well done my great sister :) :) :) :-[ :-[ :-[

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Re: The invincible mind
« Reply #5 on: November 25, 2018, 11:11:02 PM »
@poigai bro - tysm bro...enaku ulla ezhura kelvigala dhan eludhiruken and all the crime i witness around me..all the pain..how every human commits a mistake by leaning towards negative aspect of mind..how we judge people without knowing idhu pola neriya...