Author Topic: Rainbow  (Read 1700 times)

Offline SweeTie

Rainbow
« on: December 30, 2018, 09:09:20 PM »
She slowly came out after the rain stopped
Wearing a shimmering dress with lines of colours
Looking like a beautiful multi-colored painted portrait 
I was stunned by her beauty and praised the God

Her eyes were elongated up to the ears and   
Were as blue as a peacock’s  neck
Drops of the rain fell on her eye lids and
They were dancing like fireflies

Her strawberry red lips were glittering and
Shining in the evening sunlight’
Did she bathe in the sandalwood or
Born in the tender yellow fire

A proud woman with orange skin and
The Evening sun fell in love with her and
Her tender fingers were looking like the
Young leaves of a banana tree 

She was carrying an orange rose flower
On the purple hat she was wearing
The beauty she was carrying was unexplainable
The beautiful rainbow


 

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Re: Rainbow
« Reply #1 on: January 01, 2019, 03:17:17 PM »
nice jo... :) keep writing more! nice comparison of a rainbow to a girl's beauty..

Offline SweeTie

Re: Rainbow
« Reply #2 on: January 03, 2019, 07:55:50 AM »
Thank you Mirage.   I just translated one of my poems in Tamil.  I will try my best to do more in the future.  I appreciate your comment.