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« on: September 06, 2016, 11:49:11 AM »
Written by Jezzy

Love_1



Ipo indha stry oda first lead role ah parkalam..

Role1:

As usual ana day.. Epodhum na mrng alarm adikuradhuku munadi enthirichi adha off panidu pakadhula ulla park la walking poidu Konja neram manam pressurekaga yoga panuven.. Apdi ena en life la nu ninaikuringa.. Ipo time 6.30 dhan.. Enoda pressure epdi jasti agumnu 8.45 ku soldren.
Apo enna nu kekuringala.. Today en clg la document submit pananum. Epovum nama punctual ah irundhalum mathavanga punctual illana namaku pressure era dhane seiyum.. :P Epdi venavum vazhalam nguradhu en life ila ipdi dhan vazhanum nguradhu dhan en life. Some set of rules and regulation.. ;)

Ufff... Parunga adha pathi pesuna enala yoga panama poidum. So indha speech ku full stop vachidu na yoga continue pandren. Crct ah ungala 8clk meet pandren adhan na clg ku pora time.. Apo parkalam bye.. :P :D

Role2

Edhu rules n regulation ah apdi elam enaku edhuvum illa.. Manasa cool ah vachikita edhuku nga indha yoga elam.. Epovum eladhukum kodu potu vazhvena engey nimathi nu thedi azhiyanum. :P Pressure cooker mari kathite irukanum  :P ;D

Na elam alarm adikuradhuku munadi alarm adichu thunga vachidu nanum serndhu thungiduven.  :P Last neradhula adichi pudichi clg ku getha elarukum munadi poi nikkuradhu la dhane oru thani kick ye iruku.. Enna na choldradhu.. ;) :P ;D

Ipo ena ninga free ah vitingana nalla oru azhagana thukam en darling koda duet paaditu varuven.. Tata.. C u soon at 8 clk..  :P ;D

8'O clock

Role1

Hey wait ya.. Nanum varen..
No way.. Time achi.. Dept la theduvanga.. Bubye..

Hey..
Haa.. Last min la kilamburadhu namala late pandradhu idhula enaku pudikadhu.. hstl entrance vandhuten oru attendance ah potu2 polam.. Inga attendance book iruku..

No 1 name #Aditi Roll No RS10Soc01 Leaving Time 8.00 sign panniyachi ;)
Evening crct ah 4.30clk ku attendance podanum..

In College

Im aditi Master of socialogy pandren.. National level workshop kaga elarum ready panidu irundhanga. Nanum enoda doc ah eduthudu poidu iruken..
Ipdi crct ana time ku elam seiyum bodhu oru sandhosam kadaikadhan seiyudhu..

Hey Beauty Princess, good morning..  ;)
Aditi- (enoda class advisor) good morning sir.. :)

C.A- documt ready ah.. Hod kita submit panidu..
Aditi-Sure sir..

C.A- bye beauty princess.. Presentation mudichidu vanga.. Class la parkalam..
Aditi- ok sir.. (Haa.. College beauty princess concert la win panadhula irundhu ena mostly beauty princess dhan kuptuvanga but oru sila peruku matum naan pressure cooker :P ) ohh god  :o
8.30

Role 2

Aiyo time achi.. Time achi..
inaiku na andha pressure cooker kita matunen enna sagadichiduva..
Hmm idhu velaike agadhu.. Dress la spray panidu odita vendi dhan..
Elam paniyachi.. Oda vendi dhan micham.. Start.. 3rd floor la irundhu ground floor ku 2min la travel agiyachu.. Inum 5 mins la clg..
Hey thambi, attendance podu po pa..
As usual yday last name irukum parunga adhaye potrunga anna. En sign yum podrunga..
Hmm last min la kilambi odradhu, nama uyir ah edukuradhu..
Daily avardhan fill pandradhunala nalla therinji irundhuchi..

No:45 Name: Vishal Roll No: RS10Soc23 Leaving Time 8.40 avare sign potaru.. Enna hindi la ena thittivaru..adhuvum sirichite..

Vishal Mobl ring anuchi.. Kandipa andha pressure cooker dhan irukum..

"Aditi calling"

Ipo attend panuna kilichi eduthuruva.. Konjam pullaiku pressure koraiyatum apurm pardhukalam.. :P

Aditi and Vishal Narration

Aditi-Call attend panama ivan enna panidu irukan.. ivan enthirichi irupana nu koda therilaye.. God save me.. Uff relax aditi..

HOD room vandhuchi. Adha open pana ponen.. Apo yaro open panidu vandhanga..

Aditi- good morning sir.. (Hod)
Hod- enna aditi idhu dhan vara time ah.. Evlo seekram tharanum nu theriyadha..

Aditi-sorry sir.. Last min la dhan presentation mudinjidhu dhan..
Hod-i dint expect from u beauty princess :P chumma una tease panuna.. Ne dhan fst submit pandra..

Aditi-Oh thank god..
Hod- Ne dhane today present pana pora..

Aditi-no sir.. Adhu..
Hod-Vishal (doc pardhutu sonnaru)where is he?

Aditi-Sir adhu.. (watch pardhen..Time crct ah 8.45.. Na sollala enoda pressure erum nu adhuku avan dhan reason..)
Sir Im here.. - Vishal (moochi eraika odi vandhan apo dhan shirt ah in panidu hair ah kaiyala sari panunan.)hey.. ;) ( im present nu soldra mari kai ah lite ah thugi hod irukaru nu lite ah smile panunan.. But enaku adhu koda varala) hello sir good morning..

Hod- no.. Its bad.. Ivlo perfume adichidu vandhu iruka.. functn ka pora..
Vishal- sir im just.. nu start agi avara ice vachidu irundhan..

Avan hod ah compromise pandradhu cmdy ah irundhuchi.. Avana avaru nalla vangu vangidu irundharu.. Enoda yoga ku apurm idhan enaku pressure ah koraichidu..

Hod- u want to learn abt punctuality from beauty princess vishal.. (edho pogaiyura smell vishal kita irundhu vandhuchi avan ena moraichi pardhan.. Na avana kandukadha mari thirumbiten..)Rendu perum presentation nalla panunga.. All the best..
Both:thank u sir..  :)

Documentry ah vishal kita kuduthudu poitaru..

Vishal-happadaa... Epdiyo thappichen.. (Ava kaila irundha water ah kudichidu avala pardhen.. Kovadhoda uchila irundha.) Happy ah beauty princess.. :P Chii pressure cooker  :D
Aditi- idhu dhan vara time ah.. (avan kai la irundha water bottle vanga vandhen tharama emathunan)

Vishal-hey thavicha vaayiku thani kudukama sagadichidatha di im paavam..
Aditi- adhuku seekram kilambanum. Ipdi odi vandha.. Inaiku presentation iruku nu koda unaku nyabagam illaya.. yday solli dhane anupunen..

Vishal- ohh god indha pressure cooker kita irundhu ena save panunga.. :P (avala mari panunadhum kadupayita)
Aditi-listen vishal, inaiku na unkita sanda poda virumbala..

Vishal- amma thaaye apurm vera continue panalam nu irukiya..edhavadhuna ipove mudichidu ma.. aiya ku niraya vela iruku..
Aditi-room la vetti murikuradhu dhane.. Nalla 8.30 varaikum thungidu.. Kulika koda illama perfume ah spray panidu vandhu nikkura..  ::)

Vishal-(aiyo manatha vangurale) hey adhu en istam di.. Na ena venavum panipen..
Aditi- chi po da..ne epdi pona enaku enna. Presentation time achi..

Hey aditi, inga vishal koda sanda poda dhan ivlo seekram ah ena vitu2 odi vandhiya, pavam vitru di-(aditi r.m)
Aditi-vaaya mooditu podi..

Vishal-hmm avaluku koda theriyudhu en kastam..
Enna machi pressure cooker kita sikki kitiyaa ensoyy..-(vishal r.m)

Vishal-deii po daa.. (Avana thorathi vitan) ivanungala enga irundhu varanunga nu therilaye.. (Aiyo moraikurale) aditiii..
Aditi-pressure cooker nu ne soldradhu illama avankita um solli vachi irukiya..( avankita ans koda ethir parkama pona)

Vishal-hey illa adi, adhu nama ipdi sanda pota yaruku dhan kekadhu.. (ivalunga questn ketu2 poiduvalunga nama avalunga pinnadi poganum. Vera vazhi ila poyidhan aganum)
Aditi- yaru ipo sanda iludhadu na venam nu sonen.. Ne dhan vaai vita..

Vishal-ok ok.. En mela dhan mistk.. Na panunadhu dhan thappu.. Ipo presentation wrk parkalam pressure cooker.. Sry sry aditi.. :P na onnum pesa maten va.. (Vaai la viral vachikitan)
Aditi-hmm.. (Epdi dhan ivanunga thappe pannadha mari build up kudukuranungalo..hmm) (Rendu perum conference hall ku ponom.. Anga ella clg la irundhum vandhu irundhanga.. Engaluku konjam payama irundhuchi..) Vishal...

Vishal-hey ivlo peru epo di vandhanha..
Aditi-ahhh elaraiyum una pola thungu munji nu ninaichiya..   >:(

Vishal- sari sari chance kadaikudhu nu ottadha.. idhula namaku prize kadaikuma..
Aditi- prize mukiyama.. namaloda concept mathavangaluku poi serdhale adhu oru success dhan vish..

Vishal- manasu la mother teresa nu ninaipu.. Panni kutti odayum pani la um kadandhu na dhane.. (enakulle munagikiten)
Aditi-ahhh enna..

Vishal-sonna matum apdiye kulu kulu nu ans panitra mari dhan :P( pressure cooker :P)
Aditi- solli dhan paren.. ::)

Vishal-dei vishal iva venumne vaaya ilukura da vaaya vitradha.. :-X( vaai la kai vachidu silent ah ninnan)onum illa announcement ah kavani di.. ::)
Aditi-haa  :D (pavam vishal avan idhukaga romba kasta padu irukan and enalayum, enakaga um.. Enakaga ila nalum avanukagavadhu prize kadaikanum. na vishal pardhen epovum thona thona nu pesura vaai moodi irundhuchi.. God ninga dhan avan koda irukanum  :) )

Vishal-( god sothapida kodathu.. Enakaga illanalum aditi patta kastadhukavadhu indha documentry selt aganum.. And indha doc elarkita um poi seranum.. cuz adhukaga dhan aditi kasta patta.. :) Ena silent ah iruka.. Avala pardhen.. Ava kanna moodi angaye kai kuppi pray panidu ninna.. kanna thorandhu ena pardha..)
Aditi-what? (sound dhan vegama vandhadhe thavira manasula onum ila)

Vishal-ahh nthng..
Aditi-sari..  :)

Vishal-na announcement ah ketu2 irundhen apurm avala pardhen.. Romba silent ah ninnudu irundha apovum ava kaiya pisachidu dupatta va pudichidu irundha.. En kai enaye meeri pudichidu.. Ava kannu enna nu kekkura mari ena eraduthu pardhuchi.. Ava pechi thonila vara mari hard ah illa enaku matum puriyura mari..) I ll take care of it.. :)

Enga rendu peroda kaiyum eduka engaluku 56sec anuchi.. But adhu solla mudiyadha unarvu..
Iva enaku vera yarum illa.. Na uyiruku uyira nesikura oru ponnu.. Enoda #Love  ??? Ava mind set la ipdi dhan irukum nu ninaichitana adha mathuradhu romba kastam.. Enaku mathanum nu thonala.. Ipdi patta ponnunga epovum mara matanga.. Avungaluku pudichavangala Nesiguradhulayum.. ???
Idhu varai engalukulla 32 break up vandhu iruku.. Sila time ava sila time naan.. 7times serious break up.. Inum ethana break up iruku nu therila.. Ethana break up vandhalum athalam udaichi avalum nanum piriya matom nu enga kadhal mela nambikai iruku.. Rendu perume diff nature ullavanga nanga.. Enaku black ah avaluku white.. Enaku cricket ah avaluku shuttle.. Enaku tv ah avaluku books.. idhula perusu ila idha perusa anuchina life complicated dhan.. But Modhal dhane Kadhal oda aarambam.. Modhal ah dhan enga kadhal um start anuchi.. ???

College 1st day avala pardhadume enna avakita tholaichiten.. Avaloda andha kova pazha mooku inum nyabagam iruku..

1 year 4 months 17days ago
Punjab University, Chandigarh

Socialogy pana inga dhan counselling la kadaichadu.. Enakum new place la poradhu romba pudikum.. So College start pandradhuku three days munadiye inga suthi parkuradhukaga hstl vandhuten.. Apdiye seniors koda mingle ayiten.. Enaku therinji clg start pandra 1st day dhan 8 clk vandha mari nyabagam iruku.. Adhuvum girls varuvanga nu room mates kuttidu poitanga..

Apo crct ah 8'O clk...

Apo avala pardhen.. Enoda #Kadhal..  ??? White chudi red dupatta la.. Border la gold jamiki.. Adhoda weight thanga mudiyama adhu kila vizha adha kai la suthidu odi vandha.. leg la silver strip la oru flat slipper adhula light ah heel vachi.. Cuz ava konjam short  :P Punjabi Rasakulla mari irundha.. avaloda kaal viral la red glitters la match ah nail polish.. Enaku back ground la yo yo honey singh song ketu2 irundhuchi.. Idhu lam slow motion la enaku therinjidhe thavira ava odi vandha speed ku ava anaiku full ah thanni kudichi eraichadu inum nyabagam irundhuchi.. ???

Apo dhan enga first meeting nadandhuchi..
Ava enkita vandhu pesum bodhu ava kannu butterfly siragadikuradha vida athigama adichidu.. Adha evlo time venavum parkalam.. ???

Idhuvarai Unaradha Unarvu Nenjinil Vara
Tholainthen Aazhiyil Vizhundha MuththuPole
IruVizhi Simitalil Indha Ilainanum Ingu
Kavinananen Ilikkiyam Yethuvum Katrakamale ???
Ezhuezhu Jenmangalanalum Maradhu UnMele
Undana Kadhal Adhu Endrum Ondre ???

(Love To Be Condt...)

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« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2016, 01:34:50 PM »
Is this like a serial mys... or a short stry...

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« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2016, 02:35:39 PM »
Hi SRN  :) :)

Ithu thodarkathai  :) :)
« Last Edit: September 06, 2016, 03:33:38 PM by MysteRy »

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« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2016, 04:00:38 PM »
Wow mystery story super and my fav pair dp ipdiye story continue pannunga..next epi seekirama update pannunga

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« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2016, 08:10:58 PM »
Sanviya thankiu  :) :)

Tho next epi vantachu  :) :)

Ensoi reading Sanviya  :) :)

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« Reply #5 on: September 06, 2016, 08:13:06 PM »
Love_2



Vishal Narration

Clg first day anaiku elarukum munadi clg kilambi seekram poidu ponungala sight adika ninnudu irundhom. Apo dhan avala pardhen.. Vegama odi vandha..
Apo dhan en frnd nala enga meeting nadandhuchi.. Cuz avala na matum dhan pardhutu irundhenu ninaichen. En gang ye avala dhan pardhutu irundhanga..

V.frnd- hey hello mam, ruku rukku, where r u going at this speed?
She- ahh bhaee im searching my class room..?

V.frnd-enna da sudden ah anna nu solita.. Indha ponnungale ipdi dhan machu.. Neye deal panu.. (avan enkita munavunan)
Me-hoo junior? First salute to seniors..

V.frnd-senior ah.. ::)
Me :P

She-excuse me, u dont ve sense.. Apdi nu start pani hindi la engaluku theriyadha words la solli thittuna... last la hereaftr u did like this to anyone i ll complain u all to principal.. Get lost nu sonnadhu matum dhan purinjidhu.. sari ana pressure cooker ah irupa pola.. Ena tensn la vandhalo.. eladhaiyum kottidu poita..

Me-enna machi ipdi poriniji thallidu pora endha ooru kari nu therilaye..
V.frnd-kandipa idhu punjab kara ponnu dhan da..

Me-epdi da soldra..
V.frnd-apdi dhan en 7m arivu solludhu da.. enna irundhalum nama tamil ponnunga dhan da ponnunga.. Oru vardha pesuvangala.. Oru amaithi adakkam andha nalinam elam tamil pengal dhan da nam kangal.

Me-ennamo soldra vandhu thola.. Ava vera fst year nu ninaikuren nama class la poi utgarndhu iruka pora..
V.frnd-machi ivalam socialogy la edukura ponnu mari ah therira kandipa edhavadhu engg apdi dhan eduthu irupa machi..

Me-idhuvum un 7m arivu sonnucha..
V.frnd-yes machi..

Me-niraya vishyam therinji vachi iruka machaan..
V.frnd-yeah yeah.. Ne inum enkita therinjika vendiya vishyam niraya iruku machi.. (apdiye pesite class kulla enter anom.. First bench la ye thanni kudichidu utgarndhu irundha.. Avalum ena pardhuta.. Apurm moraicha)

Me- ivala..  :o ne enkita vanga vendiyadhu niraya iruku machi. Avana apdiye velila iludhu vandhuten.. Dei ava nama class da..
V.frnd-ama da..  :o ipo ena pandradhu da..

Me-ipo enkita adi vanga pora nu un 7m arivu sollala.. (Avana thalai la ye naalu poten)
Hey what u doing here? Oru staff ketaru..

Both-nothing sir..
Staff-then go to ur class.. Nu moraicharu.. Ulla etti pardha ava still moraichidu irundha..

Me-ingana ivan moraikuran angana ava moraikura..
Staff-what happen? Go..

(Rendu perum ulla odi vandhutom.. Avala cross pandra varai ava engala moraicha.. Avaluku left side la second row la corner dhan en place.. Na avala pardhene thavira ava ena parkave illa..)

Apo staff vandhanga.. Elarum enthirichi wish panunom.. Avunga utgara sonanga.. Attendance edhuvume edukala.. intro edhuvum kekala..

Hi guys, im jasmeen, now im going take ur socialogy first class nu Stri8 ah class eduka poitanga..
Elarum notes eduka note pen edukum bodhu dhan nyabagam vandhuchi vandha avasaradhula eduthu varala nu.. Poochi first class ye maanam poga pogudhu.. pakadhula pardha en frnd note pen oda notes eduthukitu irundhan

Me-dei machi note pen eduthu varala da.. paper pen vadhu tha da..
V.frnd-dei pudhu note da.. First day ve kilicha nalla irukadhu da.. enkita oru pen dhan machi iruku adhula um konjam ink dhan iruku machi (nu pre kg paiyan mari oppari vachan)

Me-dei ipo na una kilika poren olunga tha da.. (Avan note ah na iluka avanum thara mudiyadhu nu iludhan.. Apo mam silent guys nu thirumbi parkamale board la eluthi potukitu irundhanga.. Nan anga parkum bodhu en frnd note um pen eduthudu thalli poitan..)dhrogii >:( (apo mam pardhutanga)

Mam-hey hello y r u sitting without take notes..?where is ur note? (Na edho kola panuna mari elarum ena pardhanga. Pinna master degree pana vandhutu ipdi vetti ah ninna epdi parpanga)

Na ena ans soldradhu yosidu irundhen apo.. ava dhan ena kapathuna..

She-mam his note n pen fallen down? Nu note um pen um en desk mela vacha..
Mam-hoo kk.. sit down.. carry on.. (Sollidu thirumbi eludha arambichanga.)

Ava enkita ans edhuvum ethir parkama ava velai la mulugita.. Adhuku apurm koda ava thirumbi parkala.. So nanum eludha note open panunen.. #Aditi_Elkanah nu name irundhuchi.. adhaye epdiyum 3mins 40secs pardhu irundhutu irupenu ninaikuren en frnd en kai ah idichi disturb pandra varaikum..

Apurm na notes eduka arambichen.. Sudden ah parkum bodhu dhan.. Ava avaloda bottle la eduthu gaali ah irukuradha pardhutu sad ah utgarndhu irundha.. Avaluku romba moochi vangite irundhuchi.. Help pananum nu thonuchi.. Nama dhan note pen ye edukama vandha aala ache water la enga iruka pogudhu.. But enoda rasakulla melt aguradha parka enamo kastama irundhuchi.. Adha realize pandradhukulla en vaai summa ila..

Me-excuse me mam.
Mam-yeah what..? (Na edho doubt keka porenu enna pardhanga.. Avunga matum ila whole class um.. And avalum)

Me-water..
Mam-go.. (Apdi nu velila kattunanga.. Elarum sirichalum velila vandhen.. But ava matum ena pei arainja mari pardhutu irundha.. Na velila vandhen.. Anga irundhu canteen ku eduthen ottam.. anga oru glass thanni kudichidu oru water bottle vangidu Next 6mins en class ku vandhen.. mam ena pardhadum ulla vara sonanga.. Na varum bodhu ava desk mela water bottle vachidu en place la vandhu utgarndhen.. Ava bottle ah eduthupala eduka matala nu therila.. Na pardhapo Ava water ah eduthu kudichidu irundha.. Apo dhan ava ena thirumbi pardha.. Lite ah smile panidu bottle ah en desk mela vacha.. Apo dhan enakum eraikudhu nu enaku therinjidhu..)

Frnd-enna da nadakudhu inga..
Me-class machi.. Adha kavani..

Frnd-neyum dhan da..

Avala oru vatti pardhutu class ah kavanichen.. but ava notes edukuradhula dhan kuriya irundha.. Epdiyo oru vazhiya andha class mudinjidu..
Apurm asusual elarum intro agikitom.. Ava kita pesalam nu thonuchi.. Na thirumbunen. Already ena pardhutu irundha..

Aditi-hi.. Thanks.. :) (avale pesuna)
Me-hi.. Sorry for what i did befr.. :)

Aditi-its ok na adha apove marandhuten.. Neyum marandhutu..
Me-sari marandhuren.. Marand..hey tamil ah nee..

Aditi-ipo matum na english la ya pesunen.. :P
Me-en frnd ah pardhen.. Avan thalli poitan..

Aditi-anyways im aditi from Theni.. Ne. (kai neetuna)
Me-im vishal from coimbatore (nanum kai kuduthen)

Frnd-dei enna marandhutiye da..
Me-aditi, idhu en close frnd nithish same coimbatore..

Aditi-hi nithish.. U lookin like my brthr.. Adhan bhae nu kupten..
Nithis-its ok ma.. Neyum en thangachi mari dhan irukanu..(ena oru looku vitan)

Me-unaku yedhu da ivlo azhagana thangachi..
Nithis-frnd sight ah namaku thangachi mora dhane.. Apo ava en thangachi dhane..

Me-machaan..
Aditi-ena ungalukulle pesikiringa..

Me-ahh adhu epdi nanga tamil nu theriyum.. Tamil therinji um yen hindi la thittuna..nu..
Aditi- haha un frnd ah bhaee nu sonadhume avan indha ponnungale ipdi dhan nu unkita sonadhu nalla ketuchi.. Tamil la thitti irundha ne thirupi thitti irundha anga kevalam agi irukum adhan..

Me- adipavii oru vela na hindi la thitti irundha..
Aditu-elam thirupi thitta mata nu oru nambikai dhan.

Me-hmm sariyana aalu dhan ma ne..
Aditi- epovum ipdi dhana..

Me-epdi?
Aditi-pora varavangakita vambu iludhutu.. notes eduka koda pen paper edukama..

Me-apdi elam illa.. Chumma sight adika vara avasaradhula marandhuten.. (Nu thalaya sorichite oru asadu siripa sirichen.. But ava perusa edukave ila)
Aditi-ohhh.. Girlfriend ilaya..

Me-ipooo illa.. (apdiye enoda past days ku ponuchi en thoughts..)
Aditi-apo munadi irundhangala..

Me-yeah schl padikum bodhu onnu, ug padikum bodhu onnu..Diya 10th to 12th Anu ug sec sem la irundhu 5th sem.. Schl, clg mudichadum kalati vitu poitanga.. Sari dhan ponga di nu nanum vituten. Enaku nu oruthi ilamala poga pora nu.. (En munadiye irukale.. Apurm ena feel.. Namakita matum questn kekura.. Ivakita kekalam ah)unaku boyfriend irukangala?
Aditi-boy frnd ila fiancee irukaru.. Enoda cousin Nikhil canada la work panidu irukan.. Studies mudinji marg nu soli irukanga.. Inum three years venum nu solli iruken..

Me-(start pandradhuku munadiye end card ah potuta.. Idhu dhan enakulla nadandha first break up) Ohhh.. apo marg pani canada la settle ayiduva nu sollu..
Aditi-may be or may be not.. Enaku india dhan pudichi iruku.. Inga ulla place niraya parkanum.. Inga ulla Villages ku elam enala mudinja help pananum..

Me-hmm super.. Keep it up.. Canada la elam kulurum nu solluvanga pardhuko.. Ena dhan nama india mari varadhu.. adhuvum canada pasanga romba mosam inga irundhu marg panidu anga poi vithuduvangalam.. Careful.. anga french irundha dhan polaika mudiyum.. (edho chinna pullaya payamuruthura mari avakita sonen.. ipo enaku canada mela oru veruppu vandhuchi.. Koda andha Nikhil mela um)

Aditi-enaku french, spanish, hindi, sanskrit,tamil, malayalam, kannadam, telugu theriyum..
Me-adangappaa.. Idhula epdi..

Aditi-amma canada citizen so french theriyum.. Appa adikadi spain ku business vishyama poradhunala avaruku spanish theriyum adha solli kuduka solli kathukiten.. bangalore la irundhom clg anga panunen.. So kannadam telugu malayalam frnds koda serndhu kadhukiten.. apurm higher sec la hindi, sanskrit kadhukiten..
Me-apo tamil ku time ye irundhu irukadhe..

Aditi-illa appa theni kararu nala tamil ah epovum vitu kuduka mataru.. Matha lang elam summa dhan solluvaru.. Epovum tamil tamil nadu ah enaku romba pudikum.. :)
Me-phaaah.. Semmma po.. romba padips ah.. Enaku elam english,tamil dhan.. Telugu, malayalam pesuven, hindi pesuna lite ah purinjipen.. But ne pesuna hindi unmaya purila..

Aditi-haha na pesunadhu jaipur hindi..ovoru states kum diff ah agum nama tamil slang ovoru ovoru districts la um diff agudhu la apdi..
Me-idhu vera iruka.. So una enga vitalum thappichiduvenu sollu..

Aditi-sari ottadha.. Nu sollidu water kudicha..
Me-adutha bottle um gaali agiduva pola..  :P

Aditi-last min la kilambuna ipdi dhan uyira kuduthu odi varanum. Nikhil ku na inga padikuradhu pudikala.. Na povenu oru argument pani last min la kilambunadhu.. Adhan enga class miss paniduveno nu tensn la dhan odi vandhen..
Me-na mattikiten..(iva indha nikhil puranadha vida mata pola)

Aditi-yeah.. Class nalla pogudhula..
Me- yeah.. ne nikhil ah love pandriya.. love pani dhane marg panika pora. (ava ena keta en mind edhuku pogudhu. ipo indha nikhil en mind kulla vandhu utgarndhukitan)

Aditi-adhu (ava edho soldradhukulla adutha staff vandhutanga)

Kadhal Vidhaiyai thuvi sendra Penne
Un Kadhal Yar endru Solladi Indre
Otrai Kadhal nee thandha Pinbe
Ulagamelam Sirusai theriyumadi Kan Munbe  ???

(Love to be contd...)

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« Reply #6 on: September 07, 2016, 07:10:07 AM »
Story nallaruku ipdiye fast fast ah update pannunga jez..vishal char knjm rude ah iruntha rmba nallarukum

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« Reply #7 on: September 07, 2016, 07:47:51 AM »
Hey awesome story:) i really luv it. Rmba intrestinga iruku.
daily ckrm updt panungapa!

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« Reply #8 on: September 07, 2016, 08:02:47 PM »
Dankiu Sanviya  :)
Yeah writer daily update panuvanganu soli irkanga ;)

Hi Vipurthi  :) :)
Danks ba for the comment :)

Gone update now  ;) Ensoi reading

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« Reply #9 on: September 07, 2016, 08:03:11 PM »
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Vishal Narration

Na avakita nikhil ah love pandriya nu keta questn ku ans varala.. Ava solla varum bodhu staff vandhutanga..

Rural development class nadandhuchi.. Inga Monday, wednesday and friday matum dhan class.. Adhuvum three class dhan. Afn library la book refer pandradhuna panalam.. But na anga poga maten. Play ground dhan.. Football Clg team la join pana ponum afn.. Adhuku idaila ivakita pesanum. Na avala pardhutu irundhen.. Ava eludhama pen ah orae edathula pudichidu irundha.. Apurm ena ninaicha nu therila.. class listen pana arambichita.. Nanum class notes eduthu2 irundhen.. Bell ring anuchi..

Idhoda class wednesday nu solidu poitanga.. Avakita pesalam nu poradhukulla avale thirumbi pesuna..

Aditi-hey vishal, im moving.. :) (ava things la eduthudu irundha hostel poga)
Me-hey hstl dhane pora..canteen la saptu polam..

Aditi-illa mrng vandhadu tired so.. Konjam rest needed.. C u wed. (ava face ah venumne pavam ah vachidu sonna.. Konjam cmdy ah irundhuchi..)
Me-ohhh..

Hey vishal... Coach calls u.. -enoda senior room la ullavaru kuptaru.. Class velila irundhu..
Aditi-coach ah..

Me-one min.. (Saigai kattunen)college sports la join pana poren. Adhuku..
Aditi-oh super.. all the best.. :) (Ava kai neetuna)

Me-hmm thanks.. :) (nanum kai kuduthen) unaku edhulavadhu interest iruka.. Ne elam chess, carrom, Sudoku dhan viladuva crct ah..
Aditi-haa not bad.. U r genius.. but free time la shuttle viladuven..Ok im moving..bye..

Me-(enga da na vera edhavadhu ketruveno nu mundhikita)ok bye.. (Na sonnadhum ava anga irundhu kilambita.. Ava kudutha note um pen um irundhuchi.. Adha pudichidu ninnutu irundhen..
Sen-aare vishal.

Me-yeah coming bhaee.

Nanum avalum opp opp mudhuga katra mari nadandhu ponom.. Na avala thirumbi pardhen.. But epovum pola ava thirumbave illa..

Sen-who is that girl? (nu na thirumbi parkura pakkame avarum pardhu ketaru..)
Me-(enakulla undana unarvuku artham serka porava iva dhan nu thonuchi but nikhil)

Sen-hey..
Me-ahh both r from same place.. :)

Sen-hoo she also from madarasi?
Me-yeahh..

Sen-looking cute..
Me-(andha nikhil mela ulla veruppu inga transfer achi)she having boyfrnd..

Sen-hoo noo..  ::)
Me-(avan munji 7 muladhuku ponuchi.. Adhula enaku oru sandhosam..)

Coach ah poi pardhen.. Already enoda certificate elam submit pani irundhadunala Ground ku poga sonaru.. Anga ponadhum andha clg punjabi pasanga koda vilada sonanga.. romba morattu thanam ah vilandanga.. Sports la concentrate pana start panadhum En rasakulla oda ninaipu parandhu poochi.. 3 goal poten.. Game over achi.. Final ah selt panunanga.. Andha punjabi pasanga ena hug pani nalla panunen nu encourage panunanunga..

Nithis-semma match la machaan.. but elarum namaku mela irukanunga da..
Me-ama machi..

Rendu perum hstl vandhom.. Nithis en pakadhu room.. Bye solidu avan ponan.. na enoda room ku vandhen.. Avaloda note um pen um eduka marakala.. Adha en study table la vachidu enoda fav tshirt ah theditu irundhen..

Hai machaan nu nithis en bed la vizhundhan.. Tshirt mathite avanuku dei va da nu solidu..study table la utgarndhen.. Ava note pen.. First page ah open panunen.. Ava name..)

Nithis-Tmrw la irundhu coach practice ku varanum nu sonnaru..
Me-hmm..

Nithis-(sudden ah avan andha note ah pudingitan)
Me-deiii..  :o

Nithis-paraah.. Name koda adika manasu varalayo.. Love ah..  :P
Me-dei neye yen da kilapi vidra..

Nithis-pardhen da ne avala fst time vacha kannu vangama pardhapove.. Adhan oru meeting arrange panunen.. But adhu ivlo thuram pogum nu therila.. ahh ahh..
Me-apdi elam edhuvum ila da..

Nithis-avale valiya vandhu pesuna.. Ena sonna un aalu..
Me-ava aala pathi sonna..  ::) fiancee irukanam (andha note ah avan kai la irundhu vangi study table la vachidu utgarndhu irundhen)

Nithis-ohhh solitalaa.. Vera ena sonna..
Me-avakita avana love pandriya.. Love pani dhan marg panika poriya nu keten.. Silent ayita.. Adhan purila..

Nithis-fiancee irukaru nu sonnava.. Idhukum pattu nu ans pani irukanum la da.. Apoooo..  ;D
Me-apo...  ;D

Nithis- ava love panala..
Me-(enamo semma happy ah irundhuchi.. Enoda break up break ana mari irundhuchi..) but idha ava sollanume..

Nithis- avalukulla indha confuse vandhadunala dhan da ava reply panala.. Solluva paru..
Me-ava love panala.. But ava en parents soldravana dhan marg panipenu sonna..

Nithis-ena pardhan..
Na avana pardhen..
Nithis-illana ne lucky amana avan lucky.. ;)

Me-deii unaa... (anga irundha pillow eduthu adichen)
Nithis-ahh ava unaku dhan da.. hey solla marandhuten.. Amma una call pana sonanga. Adhuku dhan vandhen solla marandhuten..

Me-deii una.. Epo soldra paru..

Mobl eduthu pardhen.. Ammakita irundhu 7 calls miss agi irundhuchi.. idaila appa um.. silent la irundhadu nala therila and inaiku en manasu vera onnula sikki kitu nu thonuchi..
Amma ku call panunen.. First ring la attend anuchi..

Dei eruma madu enga da poi tholanja enthana time call pandradhu.. Inga oruthi saptama utgarndhu irupenu theriya venam..
Hello koda ethir parkama enga ammakita irundhu thittu vandhuchi.. Adhula konjalum serndhu..
Me-ma inaiku practice irundhuchi adhan parkala.. Yen inum saptama iruka.. poi saptu fst..

Amma-ne fstu saptiya..
Me-ahh saptu2 dhan vandhen. Ne saptiya..

Amma-hmm inum illa unkita pesidu apurm saptalam nu ninaichen.. Clg, hstl la pudichi iruka en chlladhuku..
Me-hmm romba pudichi iruku.. fst poi saptu..

Amma-deii.. Nama oorula clg pogave aluva.. Inga ena pudichi iruku nu soldra.. Ponnungala nalla azhaga irukangalo..
Me-yeh sudha un paiyankita pesura mari ah pesura..  :P

Amma-apurm na pesama vera yaru pesuva.. :)
Me- sari sari pesu..

Amma-soldra..
Me-hmm azhaga irundhanga podhuma.. (Sollum bodhu en rasakulla dhan white n red la odi vandhadu nyabagam vandhuchi)

Amma-dei un anna pesanumam.. en paiyakita pesave vida matanunga.. Indha da..
Anna-avana konjam free ah vidu ma.. Dei vishal..

Me-soldraa.. (enoda anna kunal.. Marg ayidu.. Love marg.. Anni romba nalla type.. 2 vayasula oru ponnu iruku.. Enoda chlm shreya. Avala vitu vara dhan manasu illa.. Appa bombay la bank la mgr ah irukanga.. Romba frndly.. Anna nala dhan family Coimbatore la irukom.. Idhan en family)
Anna- elam set acha da..

Me-achi na..
Anna-edhavadhu thevai na call pandra.. Kasa kanjam panadha.. Edhavadhu vangi vachiko.. paisa illana munadiye call panu da.. Nalla healthy ah saptra.. Sports la join panitiya..

Me-paniten da.. Tmrw la irundhu practice..
Anna-ok da all the best.. Indha anni pesanum ah..

Me-hmm..
Anni-thambi epdi iruka.. Saptiya..

Me-inum illa anni.. ammakita solliduthinga.. Kathuvanga..Nalla iruken.. Shreya epdi iruka..
Anni-sari sari but olunga saptu thambi.. tho ava dhan ph ah pudingidu iruka.. Mama kita pesu di..

Me-adiye ena pandra..
Shreya-mam..ma..

Me-  ??? sollu di.. Inga variya..
Shreya-vishuu.. Michchyew.. mmahh (Vishal miss u nu sonna.. Anna anni solli kuduka..)

Me-  :-* miss u di kutti..
Anna-deii

Me-soldra..
Anna-appa una free ah irukum bodhu miss call kuduka sonaru.. Call panu.. Seekram thungu da. Late night mulikadha.. Frnds koda irukura nu beer la over ah adikadha.. (Adhu matum silent ah sonan.. Na beer kudipen. Adhu avanukum theriyum.. Veedula solla matan..)udamba pardhuko..

Me- sari pardhukuren da.. (Adhukulla appa call vandhuchi..) Dei appa call pandraru..
Appa-sari na cut pandren ne pesu..

Me-sari da.. (Avan cut panunan.. Appa call la attend panunen..) appa..
Appa-ena da vandhadum unga amma call pani kathunala..

Me-haha ama pa..
Appa-enakum panuna.. Pesuningala nu.. Sari udamba pardhuko da.. First day dhane..

Me-ama pa..
Appa-sari sari.. Cooker la paruppu vachidu vandhu iruken da.. Kolainjita pogudhu.. Nyt pesalam.. Illa ne poi thungu.. Saptala..

Me-inum ila pa.. Ipo dhan saptanum pa..
Appa-sari hstl la sapadu apdi ipdi dhan irukum adjust paniko.. Thevai ah velila vangi saptu.. Ipo 1000 ah potu iruken.. Next week potu vidren da.. Saptu thungu..

Me-ahh sari pa..
Appa-apurm nama ooru pasangLa koda padikurangala..

Me-ahh nithis irukan pa.. Apurm oru ponnum..
Appa-hmm sari pardhuko.. Ne poi fstu saptu.. Na pesite iruken.. Good night da..

Me-ha sari pa.. Good night.. :)

(Avaru vachitaru.. Idhan en family.. Padipa pathi pesave matanga.. Socialogy eduthadu koda na relax ah irukanum nu dhan.. Adha mudichidu job adhaiyum appa ve vangi thandhuruvaru.. Elame en appa dhan.. En family ipdi cool ah irukuradhunala nanum apdiye irundhuten.)

Nithis- deii heroo pasikudhu da sapta va time achi..
Me-yeah da..

Rendu perum sapta ponom.. Vera vera states la irundhu vandha pasangalum frnd ayitanga.. Seniors koda mingle anadhunala inum semmaya irundhuchi.. Nyt elam tv pardhu aratta adichidu irundhom.. Punjabi songs potu dance la aaditu irundhanga.. Idhan first time na family vitu hostl ah irukuradhu.. But eladhaiyum marakadichidu..

Apurm elarum good night sollidu paduka vandhom.. Enoda senior nalla koratta vitu thungidu irundharu.. light off panidu bed la vandhu utgarndhen. Window open la irundhuchi.. close pana vandhen.. Andha side girls hstl.. Sila room light erinjidhu.. Sila room off la irundhuchi.. Adhula edho onnu dhan.. Ava room um irukum nu ninaichidu paduthuten..

Next day

9mani varai thukam.. Nithis pillow aala adichi elupunadhum dhan enthirichen.. Brush panidu foot ball practice ponen.. anaiku enoda rasakulla nyabagam varala.. Anaiku day apdiye poochi.. Nxt day..
8.30ku enthirichen..enoda senior kulichi mudichi kilambidu irundharu.. Avaroda beard ah athana time seevi vitaru.. Na en kannadha thottu pardhen.. Oru vazha vazha nu irundhuchi.. En thalai la nane adichidu.. Vegama kulika ponen.. 3mins la kulichidu.. Note pen elam edukum bodhu dhan ava nyabagam vandhuchi.. Adha eduthukitu.. Aasai ah.. Avala parka odunen..

Class kulla entry aanen.. En kannu first bench pardhuchi.. Enoda rasakulla va kanum..

Me-Ineram ava vandhu irukanume.. Ava varala nu parka turn panunen..
Owwwchh...-adhu ava dhan.. Ava palingu kai en shirt mela irundhuchi..

Aditi-hey.. Nee ah.. Payandhuten..
Me-hello mam, pardhu vara matingala.. Enna idichidu.. Neeya.. Sorry keka matingala.. (Chumma verupethunen)

Aditi-ahh sorry vishal.. Library poi book eduthu vandhena.. Adhan lecturer vandhutangalo nu..
Me-hey hey pressure cooker.. Payapadatha.. Chumma chumma dhan tease panunen..

Aditi-Me, pressure cooker..  :o
Me-ssshh manasula ulladhu velila vandhutu..  :P

Aditi- haa u idiot vishal.. :) (Ava ena adichidu ava place la poi utgarndhutu ava velaya crct ah panuna.. Thanni kudikuradhu dhan.. Thanni kudikum bodhu na cross aguradha andha rasakulla oda kannu suthi pardhuchi oru naughtiness oda.. Na en place la utgarndhadum water bottle neetuna.. Today bottle konjam perusa irundhuchi..)
Me- im cool.. Vachiko unaku dhan thevai padum..

Aditi-adhan bottle change paniten.. Ne moochi eraichi thanni eduthu vara vendi irukadhu.. ;)
Me-(ne enakaga edhuvum pana thevai ila nu Symbolic ah soldrala) hmm ok.. :) (peruku smile panen..

Avalum smile panidu thirumbi ava velaya parka arambichita.. Book ah poratidu irundha.. Idhuku apurm ava epo thirumbuva nu irundhuchi..)

Oru murai un thalai en pakkam saiyadha
Endra yekkam En nenjinai Adaidhu Nindrana..  ???

(Love to be contd...)

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« Reply #10 on: September 07, 2016, 09:29:10 PM »
Vishal-aditi pair so cute pa and thanks for ur rply mys..i like this story

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« Reply #11 on: September 07, 2016, 10:39:28 PM »
Story super ba:) i luv this pair
V-A & jezz's story. Pls mystery jezz a ckrma epi updt pana sollunga!

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« Reply #12 on: September 08, 2016, 01:54:08 PM »
Superb stry mys......i love the pair....nxt epi update pannunga pa......

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« Reply #13 on: September 09, 2016, 07:26:50 AM »
Hii mys! New storya interestinga write panra writters elarkitayum (mukiyama jezz kita) daily ckrm updt panuvanga endu agreement eluthi vangunga mys :P
apathan mys inna oru bayam irukum :D

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« Reply #14 on: September 09, 2016, 09:29:26 PM »
Hi Sanviya , Vipurthi & SRN :)

Thankiu for the comments :) :)

Update will tk place once writer did it  :) :)

So athu varaikum be patience  :) :)

Now gone update new epi  :) :) Ensoi reading !! :)