It is a very different poem or is it only me? Lol. Your creativity of writing that syncs to link with the choice of words goes hand in hand and related every line. I liked the entire poem, may be there can be a better title. I find that this poem is written in a very conscious or may be that it is inspired by someone to u etc😊 thanks for the share mirage😊may be if I have said anything wrong let me know😊