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♥ Nee Enbathe Naan Thana Di... ♥
« on: February 17, 2018, 01:34:17 PM »
Written by Danu Loganathan

Episode - 1



“yei elunthuru di...mani 8 agituchu...innum elunthirukama irukka.....evlo nerama naan kathitu iruken... un kathula vilutha illaya..?

Daily morning ellorada vedulaium intha subrapatha tha kekalam....
But inga oru chinna change....intha subrapatham veedla illa ladies hostel la kekuthu...
Ippadi kathitu irukurathu namma leka than...

Leka: ayyo kadavule.... naan yerkanave 54 kg than....ippadi iva kitta kathi kathiye 34 kg agituven polaye...

(kathium pathachu....adichum parthchu....face la thanni oothium parthachu....ini ivala epadi elupurathu nu yosichite nimirnthu partha...
Ahhhhhhhhh nu alaruna....)

Ava kathuna kathula thoongikitu irunthava alari adichu kitu enthiricha...

(hey namma heroine intro agitanga pa... ellarum clap pannunga.... oh sorry sorry ellarum hero Intro anathan clap panuvangalooooo....sari atha vidunga pa namma heroine ah pakalam ivanga name – Lakshitha...)

Lakshi: adiye yendi ippadi mid-night la enthirichu pisacu mathiri kathura...?
Leka: ennathu mid-night ah...?

Lakshi: pinna?
Leka: clock ah parudi mundam....

Lakshi kanna kasaki kite wall la iruntha clock ah partha...

Lakshi: ohh....time 8 agitucha..? he he.... sorry di...konjam late..
Leka: mmm konjam illa di romba late...

Lakshi: atha vidu chellam nee ethuku ippa kathuna...?
Leka: karumam...kalailaye antha make-up paithiyam enna pathara vachuta di...
Anga paru avala...

Lakshi avaluku opposide bed la paduthu iruntha shivani ya partha....
Face full ah etho cream potutu cool ah head-set la song ketu tu iruntha...

Lakshi: ppppppppaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh..... enna kandravi di ithu...
Leka: ithu kooda parava illadi... panratha ellam pannitu evlo cool ah pose kuduthu paduthuruka parthiya?

(sollikite ava kitta poi head set ah pidungi veesuna...)

Shivani: hei pisacungala yendi ippadi pacha pullai ya kopa pada vaigureenga..?
Leka: adiiiii naye.... kalailaye ippadi pei mathiri vanthu ninutu... nee engala pisacunganu vera solriya..?

Lakshi: itha ellam kekanumnu namma neram di...
Leka: ayyo time ippave 8.30 agituchu di....

shivani: athuku enna di?
Leka: unga la ellam enna solli.....kadavule...intha 2 pakkinga kittaum naan mattikitu padura avastha irukke ayyaayyoooo....

lakshi: yei endi ipadi oppari vaikura..?
Leka: mmmm....mudiyala....

Apdeenu solli kite nenju mela kai vachu chair la utkarntha

Shivani: ennadi ethum feaver ah illa.. heart ethum valikutha?
Leka:Amandi unga kuda kuppa koturathuku kandippa enakku heart-attack seekiram vanthudum.....

Lakshi: hey cool baby... whats your problem..?
Leka: mmmm vaila nalla vanthudum...

Shivani: ennathu....vamitah..?
Lakshi: summa irudi ava etho intha ulagathuku solla vara la?

Leka: kadavule....enaku thalaiye suthuthe... inaiku namma college poganum diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...
apdenu kathuna.
Lakshi: ada ama la.... ayyooooo itha first ye solli tholaika vendiyathu thana di..

Leka: enga di enna pesa vidureenga...
Lakshi: ok naan ready agitu varen..

(ok friends ivanga ready agitu varathu kulla ivangala pathi oru chinna Inro pathudalam...lakshitha, leka, shivani nra intha 3 idiots um close friends....native Madurai...ore school... ippa Chennai la ore college la seat kidaichu irukku... so 3 perum ladies hostel ku one weak munnadiye vandhutanga....ethukunu kekureengala...? vera ethuku oora suthi paka than....
Intha one weak um nalla oora suthi parthutu nalla saptu thoongi kite irukurathala college first day kuda theriyala... Lakshitha ava veduku ore ponnu... anbana family.
Leka pavam...avalukku appa, amma kidaiyathu... maduraila irukura oru home la valarntha...but ava ithai ellam veliyila katikka matta... konjam maturity ah thing pannuva....
Shivani veedla ivala thavira oru anna and sister irukanga....anytime make-up panrathe ivaloda job...ethavathu face la apply panite iruppa..studies ellam kuda next than ivaluku)

Ini evanga enna panna poranga nu pakalam.....

Leka: lakshi.....shivani....sekiram vangadi....neenga varathukulla college eh mudinjida poguthu di

3 perum ready aagi oru vazhiya college ku poitanga.
College over anathum 3 perum pesikita class ah vitu veliya vanthanga.

Shivani: hey ponga di intha college rompa bore
Lakshi: oiii enna di inaiku than 1st day...ippa ve salichukura?

Leka: ama di... inaiku lesson kuda start pannala ye... appuram enna?
Shivani: yennoda feelings ye vera di...

Lakshi: appa di enna feeeelingsssuuuu?
Shivani: illa di.. athu vanthu...

Leka: ok 2 perum pesitu methuva vanga...naan munnadi poren
Lakshi: hey enga di s aga pakura...naan mattum intha fm ta mattikitu mulikava?
Ayyo kandu pidichitale...

Leka: vanthu tholaikuren...
Shivani: yeiii naan solratha kekama anga ennadi thaniya pesitu irukeenga?

Leka: onnum illa nee fm ah stat pannu.. vendam nu sonna vida va pora?
Shivani: mmm antha payam irukatum

Lakshi: thu...
Shivani: ok ok en dream ah solren. Vaya mooditu kelunga.

Leka: solli thola.

Shivani ava dream solla start panna

Shivani: naan mattum thaniya oru tree kitta nadanthu varen... appo antha marathula irunthu poo ellam en mela mazhai mathiri kottuthu....
Naan enoda 2 kaiya um virichu apdiye suthitu iruken...
Thedeernu naan suthuratha stop panren
Because oru paiyan ennaya ve parthutu irukan...
Avan enkita nerungi varan...
Naan avana pakka... avan enna pakka....
Appuram...

Sollikite 2 peraium thirumpi partha shivani.
Leka vum lakshi um kathula irunthu kaiya eduthanga.

Leka: why blood?
Lakshi: same blood

2 perum oruthar mathi oruthar kai thatunanga

Shivani: hey naan en feelings ah epdi emotional ah solitu iruken..
Enna vadivelu akitu poreengala....irungadi ungala...

Sollikite shivani avnaga 2 peraium adika thorathuna..
3 perum school ah vilaiyadura mathiriye....college ah vittu odi veliya vanthanga...
appa oru bike avanga 3 perukum munnadi vanthu ninuchu...

...To be continue...
« Last Edit: October 31, 2018, 11:16:10 PM by MysteRy »

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« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2018, 09:28:05 PM »
Hayy new storya? indrduce elam semma:x stry daily updte aawum tane? endra edir parppuhaludan ikrm... nxt epiki wa..ng:)

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Re: ♥ Nee Enbathe Naan Thana Di... ♥
« Reply #2 on: February 18, 2018, 08:45:57 AM »
Wow mys na intha story already read panirukan ipo again ftc la read panra semma happy keep writing danu

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« Reply #3 on: February 18, 2018, 09:11:57 AM »
Hayy new storya? indrduce elam semma:x stry daily updte aawum tane? endra edir parppuhaludan ikrm... nxt epiki wa..ng:)

Haha ha Farooza sema hppy pola new story parthu :D

Dankiu Farooza n will try to update daily :)

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« Reply #4 on: February 18, 2018, 09:13:36 AM »
Wow mys na intha story already read panirukan ipo again ftc la read panra semma happy keep writing danu

Hi Sanviya  :)

Oho sanviya read pani irkiringala  :) :) nice nice

Marupadiyum read pana poringa solrathila puriyuthu tis story interestingnuu  :) :)

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« Reply #5 on: February 18, 2018, 09:14:33 AM »
Episode - 2



3 perum oruthar mathi oruthara parthanga
Antha boy helmet potu iruntha thala yarun nu kandu pidikamudiyala
3 perum vilagi nadaka ponanga. Marubadium antha boy munna la vanthu bike ah stop pannan

Lakshi: hello yaar neenga?
Leka: kekuralaa sollunga..first antha helmet ah remove pannunga

Shivani: oooiiii ivanga tamil ah thana solranga....kathula vilalaya?

Antha boy 3 peraium oru look vitutu helmet ah remove pannan.
Avana parthathum shivani oodi poi avan thalaila ye kottuna

Shivani: eruma ippa mattum ethuku da vantha?

(evan da ivan...nu neenga yosikurathu puriuthu friends... ivan vera yarum illa namma shivani yoda borther Gowtham. )

Gowtham: yeeiii kutty pisacu yen pakki ippadi kottura valikuthu
Shivani: nalla valikattum da

Gowtham: yen loosu en mela iflo kolavery?
Shivani: pinna unna nambi thana 1 week munnadi ye naanga inga kilambi vanthom?

Gowtham: hey sorry pa...en friend marriage ku munnala bachelor party kuduthan chlm athan...sorry
Shivani: bachelor party one day thanada... 1 week enga pona?

Gowtham: yeeiiii goa ku kooditu ponan loosu...
Shivani: ada da nalla enjoy paneengala..?

Leka and lakshi 2 perum ivanga pesuratha vedikai parthutu ninanga.

Lakshi: hello bro inga naanga 2 per irukom kannu theriutha..?
Gowtham: hey sorry ma intha pakki enga enna pesa vidura....vantha udane 100 ques kekurala...?
Epdi irukeenga 2 perum...?

Lakshi: mmm fine bro...
Gowtham: yen unga friend enna mouna virathama?

Leka va ora kanna la partha padi kettan.

Shivani: leka enna di kopama enga anna mela?
Leka: hey athellam onnum illa di...

Gowtham: atha enna pathu solla sollu shivani.
shivani: avana pathu than solli thola yendi

leka: onnum illa ok va?
Gowtham: ithuku pesama ye irunthirukalam

Leka kobama avana morachu patha..

Lakshi: hey endi ipdi kopa padura...bro than goa poitu sema busy ah irunthiruparu namma nabagam enga vanthirukum?
Shivani: adra adra porumasali lakshi ye unna kavuthutale....

Gowtham: you too lakshi...?
Lakshi: ponga bro.. neenga lum enga kuda intha 1 week irunthiruntha nallairunthirukum theriuma?

Leka: athan mudinju pochu la ippa yendi time waste panra?
Gowtham: ok cool cool girls..vara Sunday veliya kuditu poren ok va?

Shivani: ayyo da ivan kuditu pogalana engaluku ethuvum theriyathu paru...naanga le intha 7 days la Chennai la oru idam vidama suthitom theriuma..?
Gowtham: athana pathen..nenga ellam than rowdy ache...

Shivahi: vidu da vidu da athellam public pannatha...
Gowtham: ok oru help venum enaku

Lakshi: enna bro?
Gowtham: en friend marriage coming Friday.. so gift vanganum...

Shivani: ennathu gift ah? Naan varen... Naan varen....
Gowtham: hei adangu...loosu unna kuditu pona marriage ku present panra mathiri gift vanga matta...marriage ku apuram vara pappa vuku present panra mathiri teddy bear... barbie doll ah select panni enna kollu va...

Shivani: asinga patal shivani. dai enna ne insult panita.. pathuku future la ennoda help unaku kandipa theva padum
Gowtham: atha appo pathukalam pakki

Lakshi: appo bro naan venum na..va...

Ava solli mudikurathu kulla

Gowtham: leka nee vayen... ne select panra ellame super ah irukum nu enaku therium
Lakshi: mmm paru da..

Leka: ayyo naan varala enaku neraya vela iruku
Shivani: enna vela.?

Leka: athu athu... Ipdi patunu ketta naan enna solluven di...?
Athu poi patha than therium
Gowtham: summa seen podatha olunga vanthu bike la yeru... enaku ekapata work iruku

Lakshi: hey podi. Bro than vela irukunu solrangalla.

Leka vum vera vazhi illama gowtham kuda bike la eruna
2 perum anga irunthu kilambitanga

Shivani: lakshi..intha leka vuku enna achu? Yen Oru mathiri iruka?
Lakshi: ne atha ava kitta than di kekanum. En kita ketta?

Shivai: ok ok varuvala vanthathum avala kuruku visaranai panalam.
Ippa va hostel ku kilampalam
Lakshi: ok di va polam

Shivani: achachooo maranthutene
Lakshi: enna di?

Shivani: illa di papaya la new face cream vanthiruku di... add la pathen..Atha vangitu vara sollalamnu ninachen. Cha maranthuten..ok ph la solituren
Lakshi: thu...vaila ethavathu vara poguthu. Olunga va

2 perum hostel ku poitanga.
Gowtham, Leka 2 perum bike la poitu irukurappa

Leka: stop stop gowtham nipatunga...
Gowtham: hey iru di inum mall varala

Leka: ayyo ippa ethuku enna kuditu vareenga
Gowtham: athan sonen la gift vanganum nu

Solli kite oru ice cream parlour munnadi bike ah stop panan.

Leka: ithu than mall ah?
Gowtham: plz ulla va di... konjam pesanum

Leka: athan eppa vum pesiye kolreye...

Nu methuva vaaikulla sonna

Gowtham: enna sonna?
Leka: onnum illa

Gowtham: mam romba hot ah irukeengalla so cool ah saptalam nu kooditu vanthen Athu thappa?

2 strawberry flavour ice cream order panitu leka va parthan

Gowtham: yendi enna paduthura?
Leka: atha naan than kekanum

Gowtham: ok oru mudivuku va
Leka: enna mudivuku?

Gowtham: athan di....
Leka: inga parunga summa summa di potu pesatheenga appuram enaku ketta kopam varum

Gowtham: ha ha ha....
Leka: ippa ethuku ipdi sirikureenga?

Gowtham: illa intha dialogue ah oru 1000 times nee solli irupa.
Naan than keka matenu theriuthula apuram yen?

Appo waiter ice cream kondu vanthu vachanga.

Gowtham: chlm first ice cream saptu. Apuram cool ah pesuva
Leka: enaku ethuvum venam first enna hostel la vidunga

Gowtham: inga parudi ne Chennai ku varenu therinjathum naan evlo happy ah irunthen theriuma? Intha one week nee inga irunthum unna paka mudiyama goa la naan konjam kuda santhosama irukala theriuma?

Nu sollitu avala oru mathiri ekkama pathan.
Avlo neram silent ah iruntha leka appa avana parthu enna nu? Puruvatha uyarthuna

Gowtham: apdi pakatha di intha parvaiyila than di naan vizhuthen
Leka: ipdi loosu mathiri pesite iruntha ice cream table la irukathu unga moonjila than irukum
nu table ah irukura ice cream ah parthute sonna.

Gowtham: adi kalli athukulla mama moonjila ice cream kotti taste pannalam nu aasai ya?
Leka: ayyo ippa enna than venum ungaluku?

Gowtham: naan enna solluvenu unaku theriyatha?
Leka: ....

Gowtham: first saptu nama kilampalam

Leka ethuvum sollama vegama enthirucha...

Gowtham: hey nillu di Nu ava pinnadiye ponan

Appa waiter vanthu oru rose bouquet ah leka kai la kuduthu

Waiter: thanks for coming our parlour mam.
Enga parlour ku vara lovers ku naanga kudukura chinna gift nu sollitu poitan

Leka thirumbi gowtham ah partha
Gowtham sirppa control panna mudiyama face ah vera pakkam thirupi kitan.

Leka: ellam en neram nu thalaiyila adichukitu veliya vantha

Gowtham bill pay panitu veliya oodi vanthan
Leka kaila rose bouquet ah vachurukatha parthu ava kitta vanthu athula iruntha oru rose ah eduthu ava munnadi netunan

Gowtham: I love u chlm

Leka antha rose ah pidunki kela thooki potta

Gowtham: mmm athana pathen...
Leka: neenga thirunthave mateengala?

Gowtham: yen baby thirunthanum? naanum oru 10 times ipdi rose kuduthu propose panrathum, nee atha thooki podurathum than valakamache....
Leka: ayyo ippa enna than solla vareenga?

Gowtham: nothing. Va polam

2 perum bike la hostel porathuku kilampunaga.

...To be continue...

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« Reply #6 on: February 19, 2018, 06:27:02 AM »
Wow alea bby ...new story ...
semmaya iruku......
seekiram next epi update panungoo baby  ;) ;) ;)

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« Reply #7 on: February 19, 2018, 11:20:34 AM »
Dankiu Rithi Sis  ;) ;)

Ahem next epi ah  :o :o mmm potralam Sis  :P :D

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« Reply #8 on: February 19, 2018, 11:22:31 AM »
Episode - 3



2 perum bike la hostel porathuku kilampunaga.
Pora vazhi la gowtham thona thona nu pesite vanthan.
But leka reply pannve illa.

Gowtham: hey enna di naan paatuku pesite varen.. ne onnume reply panna matengura?
Leka: ....

Gowtham: oiiii unkitta than pesuren
Leka: ....

Gowtham bika ah oru tree pakathula stop pannan.

Gowtham: ippa yen pesama irukka?
Leka: ....

Gowtham: leka plz pesu di... en mela kopam na sanda podu. Illa enna adikka venalum sei. Atha vitutu ipdi pesama kollatha plz
Leka: en friend oda brother nu oru reason kaka than neenga panratha ellam poruthutu iruken. Athukaka neenga over advantage eduthukureenga

Gowtham: ippa naan enna pannen?
Leka: neenga ellam purinjutu than panreengala..? illa puriyama panreengalanu enaku theriyala

Gowtham: enna puriyanum enaku?
Leka: naan yaaru? En background enna nu ungaluku nalla therium la?

Gowtham: therium.. ippa athuku enna?
Leka: appuram epdi enna love panreenga?

Gowtham: inga paru leka nee china vayasula irunthu shivani, lakshi yoda friend. Enga veduku pala thadava vanthiruka. Un mela enakum oru pasam irunthuchu. Athu konjam konjam ah mari ippo love agituchu. Athukaga unmel parithapa patu unna naan love panala. Ne +2 mudijathuku apuram sollalamnu naan wait pannen. Itho naan ippa unta en kadhala solli 2 months achu...
Unna enaku romba pidikum di. Unaku ella uravugaluma naan oruthane irukanum nu aasa paduren. Unna eppavum happy ah vachirukanum nra karanathu kaka than naan UG mudicha udane job ku try pannen ippa nalla oru job um kidaichituchu. Naan iflo seekiram life la settle aaganum nu ninaikurathu unakaka than.
But nee inum oru mudivu sollathathu mattum than manasuku kastama irukudi
Leka: stop it gowtham... yen ipdi enna kolreenga? naan oru anatha...

Ava solli mudikurathukulla ava kannathula gowtham palar nu oru arai koduthan

Gowtham: nee anathai nu yaaru di sonna? Naan illaya? Illa nee than uyir nu ninaikura shivani, lakshitha illaya?
Leka:......

Gowtham: ipdi muttal mathiri pesatha inimel. Appuram naan enna panuvenu enake theriyathu. Va vanthu bike la yeru.

Leka ethuvum pesama bike la yeruna
Gowtham um athuku apuram ethuvum pesala
2 perum hostel ku vanthu reach anathum shivani, leka kita konja neram pesitu gowtham kilampunan.
Konja thoram ponathum thirumpi parthan, leka vum avana thirumbi partha.

Gowtham: adichathuku sorry di nu ava la parthu methuva sollitu nadanthan.

Leka avanaye parthutu iruntha.

Lakshi: leka yendi angaye nikura ulla va
Leka: itho varen

3 perum avanga room ku ponanga

Shivani: vara vara iva pokke sari illa di
Lakshi: ama di enakum apdi than thonuthu.

Leka: hey neenga patuku ethuvum karbanai panatheenga di. Apdi ellam onnum illa
Shivani: mmm etho solra but nambura mathiri illaye chlm

Leka: nee namburathukaga naan soodam ethi sathyam panna mudiyathu
Lakshi: aiiii athuvum nalla thana irukum

Shivani: ennathu ava kai venthu poguratha?
Leka: ama di atha thana neega 2 perum ethir parkareenga?

Shivani: che che naan apdi ellam ninaipena..? lakshi thandi un mela oru kanna iruka. So ava ninaika chance iruku.
Lakshi: adi pavi kadaisi yila en pakkam thirupi viduriya nu avala adika pona.

Oru vazhiya 2 perum moochu vangi kite bed la vilunthanga.

Shivai: pothum di enna la mudiyala
Lakshi: enna la um thandi

Aana anga nadakura ethulaum sampantham illathava mathiri leka jannal pakathula poi ninutu iruntha

Lakshi: leka yenna di yen ipdi irukka?
Shivani: inga paru leka unaku enna problem nu sonna thanadi engaluku therium

Lakshi: ok shivani nee class ku poganumnu sonnela kilampu time achu
Shivani: ayyo ama di maranthe poiten. Naan kilampuren and leka naan varapa konjam siricha mathiri irudi... yenna un face ah ipdi ummunu pakka sakikala...

Chellama leka kannathula killitu shivani kilampuna.

Lakshi: leka ippa sollu enna than un prachanai?

Leka avala katti putichu azha arampicha
Lakshitha ava azharatha parthu shock agita.

Lakshi: leka plz di azhatha.. enna nu sollu di..
Leka:.......

Lakshi: inga paru ippa nee azharatha stop panalana nanum azhuthuduven.
Leka: illa lakshi naan azhala....nu ava kaiyala kanna thodacha.

Lakshi: mmm intha intha water ah first kudi

Leka water kudichutu konjam relax aana.

Lakshi: ippa normal agitiya?
Leka: mmm

Lakshi: ippa sollu un azhugaiku karanam gowtham anna thana?

Leka takunu lakshi ya nimirnthu partha

Lakshi: enna di enaku epdi therium nu yosikuriya?
Leka: ama...aana unaku epdi...

Lakshi: leka oru paiyan namala epdi pakuranu avan parvaiya parthe nama kandu pidichidalam. Gowtham enga 2 pera pakurathukum, unna pakurathukum diff iruku.
Athukaga naan gowtham anna va pathi thappa solla varala.. sollu unga 2 perukum naduvula enna iruku?

Lakshi kekavum leka vala ethaium maraika mudiyala... avanga 2 perukum 1 hour munnadi nadantha varaikum ellathaium sonna

Lakshi: so gowtham anna unna sincere ah love panrar...appo madam..?
Leka: illa athu vanthu naan love ellam panala

Lakshi: appo nee love panala
Leka: ama panala

Lakshi: ok athu irukatum naan gowtham ah bro nu kupituven.. nee matum yen apdi kupta matika?
Leka: athu...athu... enaku per solli kupte palakituchu

Lakshi: ok appo inimel anna nu sollu ok va?
Leka: yen?

Lakshi: athan nee love panala la?
Leka: athu vanthu...

lakshiL yei yei en kanna pathu pesu di
leka: kanna pathu pesuna than unmaiya sollituvene..?

lakshi: apdi va di vazhiku
leka: illa di enaku konjam yosika time venum

lakshi: yosi chlm nalla yosi....ithu un vaalkai prachana.. so nee than oru mudivu edukanum.. and onnu mattum sollikuren
leka: enna

lakshi: gowtham bro mathiri vera yarum unku match aga matanga
leka: mmm ok ok unga bro ku support panathu. Ama intha lusu shivani enga poiruka

lakshi: pecha mathurathula than unna yarum minja mudiyathe
leka: oyyeee ketathuku answer

lakshi: ava yerkanave make-up paithiyam.. ithula evalo oruthi pakathula basic beauty course class daily nadakuthunu sollita... avlo than ivala kekava venum....aal escape. Enaku therinju antha centre la iva than first poi utkarnthirupa nu ninaikuren
leka: ha ha podi pavam di ava

lakshi: amma di chlm sirichutiya... ippa than un face summa jolikuthu...
leka: ok di naan varapa warden kitta etho pesitu irunthiye enna di?

Lakshi: athu va naalaiku blood donor day la so naan blood kudukanumnu solitu irunthen. So kalaila hospital ah irunthu yaro kutitu poga varatha solli kitu irunthanga.
Leka: hey appo nee naaliku collage ku varalaya?

Lakshi: yeei enna di one day fulla ah vacha ennoda blood ah eduka poranga.... lusu one hour thandi. Mudinjathum naan collage vanthuduven.

Apuram shivani um class vittu vantha. 3 perum eppavum pola aratai adichu kitte saptu thiongunanga.
Next day morning
3 perum college ku kilampitu irunthanga
Appo oru girl avanga room ku vantha

Girl: hey lakshi unna thdi yaaro oru boy vanthirukan. Waiting hall ah irukan poi paru
Nu sollitu poita
Leka: yaru di athu?

Lakshi: theriyalaye...
Shivani: poi partha thane therium di lusu

Lakshi: ok arivali nee um leka vum college ponga... naan poi athu yaarnu parthutu apdiye hospital poitu varen ok va?
Shivani: seekiram vanthu seru... illa ithu than chance nu collegu ah cut adichitatha

Leka: atha nee seiyama iruntha sari vaa polam..
Lakshi: bye di

Leka: bye poitu va
Shivani: bye di

Leka and shivani college kilambitanga
Antha boy yara irukum nu yosichu kitte waiting hall ku pona

...To be continue...
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« Reply #9 on: February 19, 2018, 12:00:41 PM »
ppaaahhhhh enna arai...
rmba vegamathan arainjirupangalo :o :o ;D ;D ;D
seekiram leka love accept panniduvanga nenaikiren...

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Boy waiting ah...
u mean hero introduction ah aduthu .... :D :D :D :D :D
( mind voice : hero introduction nu arvapattu zero introduction aagame iruntha seri )
super super alea bby ...
leka lakshi shivi friendship nekku
romba pidichiruku..love this story bby ...seekiram
seekiram nxt epi update panungoooo!!!!
                                                 
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« Reply #10 on: February 20, 2018, 08:20:45 AM »
IVN mari  athuvum sema story alea sis :D lovely friendship :D and enaku shivani a romba pudichiruke ;D sema sema :D adutha epi ckrm podunga :D Ithukum lock potrathinga :D enga poy aprm nan ungala kelvi kekurathu :P

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« Reply #11 on: February 20, 2018, 09:35:52 AM »
ppaaahhhhh enna arai...
rmba vegamathan arainjirupangalo :o :o ;D ;D ;D
seekiram leka love accept panniduvanga nenaikiren...

N

Boy waiting ah...
u mean hero introduction ah aduthu .... :D :D :D :D :D
( mind voice : hero introduction nu arvapattu zero introduction aagame iruntha seri )
super super alea bby ...
leka lakshi shivi friendship nekku
romba pidichiruku..love this story bby ...seekiram
seekiram nxt epi update panungoooo!!!!
                                               

Dankiu dankiu Rithi Sis  :D :D

Hero zerova agurara iliyanu parthu therinjiko adutha epi  le ;D ;D

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« Reply #12 on: February 20, 2018, 09:39:37 AM »
IVN mari  athuvum sema story alea sis :D lovely friendship :D and enaku shivani a romba pudichiruke ;D sema sema :D adutha epi ckrm podunga :D Ithukum lock potrathinga :D enga poy aprm nan ungala kelvi kekurathu :P

Kilambithangaya kilambithanga ( vadivelu version )  :o :o ;D ;D

Dankiu Vipu  ;) ;)

Lock panulama venama yosika arambichiten :P :P

Neenga kodutha entry parthonae Vipu  :P :P ;D ;D

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« Reply #13 on: February 20, 2018, 09:43:14 AM »
Episode - 4



Antha boy yara irukum nu yosichu kitte waiting hall ku pona
Oru boy mattum waiting hall ah ninutu irunthan
Avan shirt la ‘’Blood donors are life savers’’ nu oru badge pin panirunthan.
Ok appa warden ivana than solli irupanga pola.
Antha boy appo than avala parthan

He: hello neenga than lakshitha va?
Lakshi: ama naan than

He: naan....
Lakshi: therium.... ok enaku time achu polama?

He: (ivlo speed ah irukale) mmm polam

Lakshi veliya vanthu angaium ingaium partha

He: enna thedureenga
Lakshi: illa auto onnum kanome...?

He: auto va? En bike iruku la
Lakshi: bike ah?

He: yenga bike la lam yera mateengala...?
Lakshi: illa athu vanthu...

(Epdi munna pinna theriyatha aal kuda porathu..? ok aabathuku pavam illa..
Ippave late agituchu...college ku vera poganum)

He: ungaluku virupam illaina.....
Lakshi: ok vanga polam

2 perum bike la kilampuranga

Lakshi: inum evlo time aagum?
He: theriyalaye....ethana per vanthirukanaglo? Yen kekureenga?

Lakshi: illa mudinjathum naan college poganum
He: ennathu collegu ka?

Lakshi: ama en iflo shock ah kekureenga?
He: illa inaikuma college poganum..? athan...

Lakshi: hey ithu ellam sappa matter pa.
He: (ennathu sappa matter ah? Sariyana thilalangadi ya irupalo)

Lakshi: enna pecha ye kanom?
He: onnum illainga...

Lakshi: ok intha work eflo year ah panreenga?
He: ennathu...? hello just unga la kutitu poga than vanthen. Ithe velaiya naan onnum alayala...

Lakshi: (ippa enna ketten nu iven iflo kopa paduran..?)
Ava yosichitu irukum pothu Avan bike ah stop pannan
Hospital vanthuruchu pola nu kela eranguna

He: va ulla

Ivan enga kupituran? Hospital eh inga ethuvum illaye. nu Lakshi nimirnthu partha
‘’Register office’’ nu name board minuchu...
Lakshi ku onnum puriyala....
inga ethuku ippo kutitu vanthirukan..?

He: hey enna parthute irukka time achu ulla va.
Lakshi: yee..yeeiii enna enga kutitu vanthiruka..?

He: unaku padika theriyatha..? Register office ku than vanthirukom
Lakshi: ayyoooo athan yen nu kekuren

He: mmm kaaikari vanga vanthirukom....
Lakshi: yeiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii solli thola

He: apuram Register office ku ethuku varuvanga? Marriage panna than
Lakshi: yaa..yaruku ippo marriage?

He: unaku than
Lakshi: ennathu....

Apdeenu sollite avan mela viluntha
Avanuku onnum puriyala... evaluku enaa achu?
Pakathu kadaila irunthu water pocket vangi ava face la thelichan
Lakshi kanna mulichu partha.

He: oiii enna kalaila saptala ya?

Lakshi avan thol mela sanchu kidakuratha parthutu avasarama avana vitu vilagi enthiricha.

Lakshi: inga parunga inga enna nadakuthu enaku ethuvum puriyala
He: oh....ethuvume puriyala ya?
Yen friend Ravi ya ne love panitu avana avoid paneela athu theriyatha..?
avan life ye nee than.. nee illa tha life theva ye illanu
nethu avan sucide attend pannan athu theriyatha..?
illa antha ravi yavathu theriuma illa avanum yaarnu theriyatha?

Avan pesa pesa lakshi ku enna solrathu ne theriyala

Lakshi: hey enna da ipdi lusu mathiri pesitu iruka nee ye yaarnu enaku theriyala. Ithula un friend ah vera theriyanuma?
He: athana ungaluku boys ah kalati vidurathu than kai vantha kalai aache..?

Lakshi: hey mind ur words...antha ravi yaarne enaku theriyathu and naan evanium love pannavum illa..
He: athana pathen.. eppa di neenga ellam thiruntha poreenga

Lakshi: inga paru enga veduku intha vishayam therinja enna agum nu theriuma?
He: love panum pothu itha yosichu irukanum. Ippa marriage nu varapa mattum veedu, appa, amma nabagathuku varangala?

Lakshi evlo sollium kekama avan ava kaiya pidichu iluthutu ulla kutitu ponan.
Ulla yarum illa avanoda friend mattum irunthan
Lakshi avan kaiya thati vitutu antha room ku veliya ninutu iruntha

His friend: dei unaku ethana thada va da ph panrathu?

Avan appo than ph eduthu parthan 28 missed calls..

He: sorry machan konjam late agituchu.
His friend: apdi enna da mukiyama vela unaku?

He: machi enga da ellaraium kanom....mala vanga poirukangala?
His friend: dei nee first yen late nu sollu

He: machi ippa naan solratha ketta apdiya shock agituva
His friend: shock aagura alavuna... enna machi unaku corrent shock adichitucha?

He: dei vaya kaluvuda...
His friend: appa solli tholada

He: Ravi yoda aala epdi thookurathunu ellarum plan poteengalla..
His friend: ippa athuku enna da

He: machi sathame illama naan ponna thookiten da
His friend: ennathu thookitiya

He: epdi machan en plan..?
His friend: un plan la petrol oothi kolutha...

He: enna da ipdi posukunu peseta...
His friend: apuram enna da...ravi yoda aalu avan sucide attent panathu therinju avalave vanthuta da avangaluku marriage nadanthu one hour achu...ippa ellorum pakthula irukura hotel ah 2 round mudichurupanga da.

He: dei enna da solra..? iflo nadanthuruku oru ph panniyada nee?
His friend: inga paru naan yerganave pasi la kola very yoda iruken. Apuram ethavathu sollida poren. Mavane ethana vati da unaku naan ph panrathu?

He: ayyo appa iva yaaru da..?
His friend: atha naan than da kekanum.... dei enakennavo un mela santhegamave irukuda

He: ethuku da?
His friend: unmaiya sollu da theriya ma than kutitu vanthiya illa ravi yoda marriage mudiavum kaiyoda un marriage um mudichita lamnu kutitu vanthiya?

He: dei naan yerganave kulapathula iruken. Ithula ne vera kadupethura mathiri comedy panna tha da....
His friend: enna machi naan comedy panrana? Va antha ponnu enga da iruka? 2 perum poi ava kalula vila vendiyathu than vera vazhi..

Avan enna seirathunu puriyama apdiye ninan.

(haha ipdi mokka plan potu bulp vangitu nikurathu vera yarum illa friend... namma hero Yaswanth than. And avn friend name Rohith)

Rohith: dei anga veliyila oru white sudi potu nikurale ava thana?
Yaswanth: mmm ama da....

Lakshi oru orathula ninutu kopathula ava kai viral nagatha vetuk vetuku nu kadichitu iruntha

Rohith: dei ava kai viral ah kadikura vegatha patha... kopathula namma la um kadichitu va pola da.
Yaswanth: dei enake payathula kai kaal ellam otharuthu...ithula nee vera summa vada

Rohith: otharum da otharum... itha munna ve nee yosichu irukanum da..
Yaswanth: neenga thana da soneenga antha hostel ah katti anga than stay panni iruka name lakshitha nu.

Rohith: athellam ok than. 2nd year B.Sc maths ah nu ketiya?
Yaswanth: ayyo dei naan first year nu solli kuptu vara sonnen da

Rohith: dei unna yaaru da intha theva illatha velaya pakka sonnathu...
Yaswanth: dei ravi feel pannatha pathu ennala summa iruka mudiyala da...

Rohith: ippa paru da nee matum matikitu thaniya feel panna pora....
Yaswanth: enna ne nu enna mattum pirikura...nama feel panna porom nu sollu

Rohith: athana ipdi adi vangura vishayathula mattum pirika mateengale...

2 perum lakshi nikura room kitta payanthute ponanga...

...To be continue...
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« Reply #14 on: February 20, 2018, 12:51:59 PM »
HaHa.. semma twist alea..lakshi ipo kolaveri la kadichu kothara poranga namma hero ah.. romba jolly ah poguthu story.. keep updating alea.. waitingzzz..