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Title: ~ Kadhal Vandhuchu > A Short Story ~
Post by: MysteRy on March 28, 2015, 07:50:37 AM
Written by Rajesh‬

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Oru maalai neram..
Kootma irukura oru bus..
Summer veiyilala oru kuzhandha puzhukathala azhudhukitu irundhuchu..

Bus'eh andha azhugura papa'vaiyum adha samdhanam pannura amma'vaiyum avanga pakuthula ukadhu samadhanam pannuravangalaiyum parthukitu irundhuchu..

Apo dhideernu..

" I am So Cool
Baby Honey Sweetie Pie
Never Wanna See You Cry
If That Happens I Will Die
Baby Honey Sweetie Pie
Baby Honey Sweetie Pie
Never Wanna See You Cry
If That Happens I Will Die
Baby Honey Sweetie Pie..
I am so Cool.."

Oru paiyanoda mobile Paaduchu..
Avan attend pannan..

In call..

Opp:- Deh kutty enga vandhukitu iruka..
Boy:- Idho vandhuduven ma.. Innum 1hr'la..

Opp:- Seri pa..

(Actual'ah indha paiyanoda kadhaiyathan naama paka porom.. Ivankuda pesunadhu avanoda amma'than.. Ayya chennai'la work pannuradhala week'ly once avar sondha uurana Tiruvannamalai'ku varuvaru.. Apdi oru weekend varapo nadakura vishayamtha idhu.. )

Call cut anadhu ayya thoongitaru..
Coz avaruku muzhichukitu iruka oru kaaranamum kedaiyadhu..
Ayya still single..
So no phone calls & chattings..
Avaru pesura ore phone call veetku mattumthan..

Nalla thoongita namma Jegadesh Tiruvannamalai vandha piraguthan kanna thirandharu.. (oops solla marandhuten.. Namma hero peru Jegadesh pa.. )

Appothan Jegadesh evlo periya thappu pannirukantu unarndhan..

Foot board pakkathula oru ponnu Kattaiya kuttaiya Kambili poochi madhuri moodiyoda oru ganamana pinnal potukitu kadhula edho oru kammal potukitu yellow colour dress'la ninnukitu irundha..

Ava yedho oru vagaila jega gavanatha kavarndha..

Anneram avalum thirumbuna..
Pppphhaaa..
Ponna iva...  Ava kanna ennala paka mudiyala..
Adhuve already avlo azhga iruku.. adhuku innum maskara potu.. puruvatha trim pannikitu..
Oh.. lazer beam madhuri ennakulla thakuchu.. Andha parvai.. Urunda urunda kannu..

Aal konjam Dimma therinjalum avaloda kannu.. Uyiroda konnudum..

Apo ava lips'ah ashaicha..

Edho pesura pola..

Ana enna pesuranu en mandaikulla pogala.. Coz enakulla avaloda mugatha padiya vaikura process'la irundhuchu..

Driver oru brake potaru..
Naan muttikama iruka mun seat'la support'ku pidichen..

Ava yeno kanparvai vittu vilaguna.. Bus brake potadhula sanjuta pola..

Ana konja neram agiyum ava theriyal.. Endhirichu etti partha ava irangi poikitu iruka..

Ulla solluchu.. Iva pinnadi poda.. Iva vera yaarum illa.. Nee thedikitu irundhavathan.. Odu odu.. Pidi pidi. Vidadhanu..

Jega:- Oooh.. Stop stop.. Naanum iranganum oru nimisam..

Move aga irundha bus again ninnuchu.. Kandoctor'um drive'um avangaloda paaratu mazhaiya therivichanga Jegadesh'ku..
Avanum adha sirichukite vangitu vegama odi bus'ah vittu irangi odunan ava pinnadi..

Jega:- Yenga.. Hello.. Yenga..

Ava poikite irundha..

Jega:- Hello yellow chudithar..

Ava ninnutu thirumbi partha..

Jega:-  :)

Ennaiyanu ava partha..

Jega:-  ungalathanga..( Kita ponan..)

Ava yaar ivangra madhuri partha..
Jega kitta vandhu ninnutu enna pesuradhunu puriyama moochu vangura ava nenja thatti koduthukite kizha parthukitu irundhan.. Apro few sec ana piragu..

Jega:- Hello.. En peru Jegadesh.. Nan chennai'la work pannuren.. Uru idhuthan..  thiruvannamalai..
Girl:-  idhellam yen enkita sollurenga.?

Jega:- Vishayam iruku..  Naan ungala kadandha rendu nimishama romba athmathama uyiruku uyira love pannurenga..
Girl:- ennadhu..  hahaha..

Jega:-  sirikadheenga.. Naan unmaiyathan solluren.. Enaku ungala kalyanam pannikanumnu thonudhu.. Wat do u say??
Girl:- Hello hello excuse me..

Jega:-  yes me..
Girl:- Neenga romba aniyayama pesureenga.. Ipotha partheenga.. Adhukulla.. Love'ngureenga marriage'ngureenga.. Enna idhellam..

Jega:- Ennanga pana vera.. Naan ungala follow masakanaka follow pannikitu ungala impress pannitu apramlam love sollamudiyadhunga..  naane epovothan indha pakkam varen.. So naan ipditha panna vendiyadha pochu.. Udane enna kevala ninachuradheenga..  Naan idhuvarai ipdi behave panadhillanga..
Ungala parthadhumthan enakulla solluchu.. Neengatha enakanavanu.. Adhanga unga pinnadiye irangi odi vandhuten.. Adhukaga unga veedu varaiku ungala follow panni vandha nallavum irukadhu.. And enaku ipo neramum illa.. Adhan.. Wat do u say??
Girl:- Neenga nalla pesureenga.. Pakavum decent'ah irukeenga..  But enaku idhella konja over'ah theridhu.. Filmy'ah iruku..

Jega:- Seringa idhu ungaluku filmy'ah therinja naama pazhagi parpom.. Hm??
Girl:- venam vidunga pazhagave venam..  bye..

Jega:- Hello.. One sec.. One sec..

Ava thirumbuna...
Jega oru paper eduthu avan mobile number ezhudhi koduthan..

Jega:- Idhu en number'nga... Ungaluku enkuda pazhagi pakalamnu thonuchina enaku call pannunga.. Hmm

Ava adha vangi vachukitu smile panna..

Jega:- Unga name sollave illa..
Girl:- pazhaga thonuchuna solluren..

Ava apro anga nikkave illa.. Ava thirumbi pakama poita..
Ava konja dhooram pona piragu jega sathama sonnan.. ''yenga.. Naan ungala nalla sandhosama parthupen.. Ulagathuleye needhanda best hubby'nu solla vaipenga.."

Ava poita..
Ivan ivanga veetuku anga irundhu auto' la poitan..
Ava ninapulaiye konja neram irundhutu thoongitan..
Next day morning..

J Amma:- Deh endhirida.. 8agudhu innum thoongikitu..
Jega:- (kanna moodikite) yen ma.. Naan iniki oru naal nalla thoonguna porukadha unaku.. Idhuku naan angaiye irukalam..

J amma:- Nee evlo neramnalum thoongikada.. Ana iniki ennanu marandhu innum thoongikitu irukka..
Jega:- (ennanu marandhu thoongurana) ennama iniki..??

J Amma:- Deh iniki ponnu paka pogalamnu sollirundhenlada..
Jega:- ponnupakava.. (ayyo adha marandhutene.. Anga poiy avanga force pana.. Night avala vera parthu apdi pesitu vandhen.. Naan enna seiven ipo)

Amma:- (mugathuku nera soduku potu) deh ennada pei aranja madhuri pakura..
Jega:-  ma.. Ponnu paka poga venam ma.. Innoru naal poikalame ma..

Amma:- Deh ennada unaku.. Ithana naal ok sonna ipo enna..
Jega:- ma adhu... Vandhu.. (night oru ponnukita appadi pesunenu sonna kevalama ninaipangalo..) ipothaiku vename ma..

Amma:- Deh endhirichu ready agu.. Poi parthutu pidikalana sollu.. Adha vitutu ponne paka venamnu solladha..
Jega:-  (andha ponna parthiu ivangalukellam pidichpoita enna pannuradhu.. Ivalukaga naan oru naalkuda wait panna mudiyama pogume..)

Amma:- seekram ready agi va.. (amma poitanga)

Jega narration..

Night avakitta naan apdi ketutu vandhuten.. Inga amma ponnu paka koopdranga.. Naanvera unga istamnu solliten...  ipo andha pakapora ponna pidichupochuna enna seiya.. Ivalum enaku call panna.. 
Konja neram yoshichitu..
Oru peru moochu vangitu..
Ava night'eh adhellam venamnu sonna.. Ava paka vera azhga irundha..
Mokka figure'eh namma pasanga suthu poduvanunga.. Iva vera super figure'ah iruka ivala evanum love pannamala irupan..??
Illa illa ava apdi edhum sollalaiye.. Love pannuradha irundha sollirupalla naan vera oru paiyana love pannurenu..
Oru vela yaaro ivan. Ivankita naama yen namma personal'ah sollanumnu ninachirundha..??

Ipdiye kandameniku ninachukite medhuva ready agitu irundhan..
Ready agi veliyavum vandhutan..

Amma:- paka ipove mappla madhuri irukada nee..
Jega:-  :)

Apo mobile ring achu..
Atten pannan..

Jega:- hello..
Opp:- happy morning..

Sweet'ana oru girl voice ketuchu.. Adhu idhuku munname keta madhuri irundhuchi..
Heh idhu night pesuna yellow chudithar'la..

Jega:- Heh yellow..
Opp:- Hahaha..  semma sharp jega neenga..

Jega:-  ennanga ennala nambave mudiyala.. Neengala enaku call pannirukeenganu..
Opp:- Nambupa..

Jega:-  :)
Opp:- thonuchu.. Pazhagi pakalam thappilla.. Neengalum paka nalla paiyana irundhenga.. Adhan call panniten..

Jega:-  :)
Opp:- hello hello.. Edhum pesunga jegadesh..

Jega:- adhu.. (adhukulla avale pesita kurukala)
Opp:- Heh hello hello enna appa koopdranga nan vandhu call pannuren..

Jega:- yenga unga name sollave illa..
Opp:- Nandhini..

Call ended...

Jega:-  yaaaaa uuuhh... Yes yes yes yes.....

Jega'ku solla mudiyadha alavuku sandhosam.. Thulli gudhichan..

Amma:- ennada achu.. Yen ivlo sandhosapadura.
Jega:- amma ponnu paka poga venam..

Amma:-  yenda??
Jega:- Naan love pannuren ma.. (avanga ammava hug pannikitan)

Amma:-  ::)
Jega:-  :)

Kadha mudinjiruchu over..  :P 8)
Title: Re: ~ Kadhal Vandhuchu > A Short Story ~
Post by: Praveena.. on June 09, 2018, 06:34:13 PM
Hlo ji tatz al ah.. Stry oru finishng'eh ilayaee