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« Reply #120 on: August 07, 2015, 07:47:13 AM »
Part 69



Vinay’s Narration :

Shivani ah indha nelamai la enala paka mudiyala  :'( 4 hours aachu avala operation theatre kulakootitu poitu… time aga aga enaku bayam jasthi ayitey irundhchu kadavul ah pray panitey irundhen… 4 hours kalichu doctor uncle dhan first operatin theatre la irundhu veliya vandhanga… Na poitu avarkita ketan..

Vinay : Uncle enachu? Shivani ipo ok la.. avaluku seri ayitu la… epo uncle nanga pakalam? Ivlo time aachey nu nan bayandhuten uncle… solunga uncle…

Avaru edhumey enta pesala… enayea pathutu irundharu… Avaru edhum pesama irundhadhu enaku innum bayam ayitu… Arjun um avarkita ketan… apayum avar pesala…

Arjun: Uncle please solunga enachu.. yen ipdi silent ah irukenga… engaluku rombah bayama iruku… edhunalum solidunga.. avaluku onnum illa la ?
Uncle: Nenga rendu perum konjm enkooda O.T kula vanga…

Nanum arjun um avarkooda O.T kula ponom… anga shivani silent ah paduthutu irundha… avala pakavey engaluku kastama irundhuchu… Adha vida uncle edhumpesadhadhu innum bayama irundhuchu.. nanga ula poitu uncle ah pathom… avaroda eyes la irundhu tears vandhudhu… enaku oru nimisham edhumey yosika mudila...apo arjun avarkita keatan…

Arjun: sir please.. edhuku azhareenga? Enachu… pls solunga ..
Uncle: am sorry Arjun nd vinay… Na edhu nadaka koodadhu nu nenaichano adhu nadandhutu… Vinay unkita na sonamadiriyea shivani ku operation apo BP increase agitu… Almost operation mudiyara nerathula BP rise ayitu.. adhanala odaney engalala operation ah stop pana mudila… irundhalum enagalala mudinja varaikum BP ah kami pani operation ah mudichitom… Ana avaluku heart beat kami ayitu irukuk ipo… naga evlovo try paniyum ava heart beat ah normal aka mudila… nenga pesunuga ava kita… avaluku normal heart beat nega pesina dhan varum..pls….avakita edhana pesunga…  :'(

Avar apadi solum podhey enaku thalayea vedichidum pola irundhuchu.. kanulam irutuchu.. apo n arjun ah pakla… oru two mins la azhara sound ketuchu… adhu arjun dhan… avan shivani kai ah pudichikitu azhudhutu irundhaan…. Enala idhu edhayum paka mudila  :'(

Arjun:  :'( yen de ipadi panra? Epa pathalum ena azha vachi pakara… ne enaku venum de please de vandhudu de… na iruken de unakga…. Ipdilam nadakum nu therinji irundha na una operation theratre ku pogavey vitu iruka maten de… Ammu pesu de edhana pesu de enkita.. thitu de… una pesa venam nu chuma dhan de sonen…. Adhukaga ipadi total ah pesama irundhu ena konudadha de… Ne iladha oru life ah enala ninaichukooda paka mudila de… Una enaku rombah pudikum de chelam… Ne pesardhu … enkooda sandai podradhu.. ena thirtadhu.. china china kurumbu senjitu edhum seiyadha madiri apavi ah moonjiya vachiakrdhu…. Vaalu thanam panradhu… un eyes… siripu… voice… idhalam ilama enala mudiyadhu de.. enkooda sandai poda… ena thita adika… kandika… kalaika…. Love pana… ne venum de enaku… Una vida ena vera yaralayum love pana mudiyadhu de pls de.. kana thorandhu paaru de….  :'(
Paaru de epo pathalum Vinay vinay nu kathitu irupiyea de… avana paru de… epdi okandhu iurkaan paru de… Un annan di… ne ipdi irukardha paka mudiyama epdi okandhu irukaan paru de… Engaluku ne dhan de mukiyam… please de vandhuru de… va de.. un annan azharaan de… Avana kalaikalam va de… veliya engana polam de… ne dhan de en uyir please de elundhu va de please de…

ipdilam avan shivani kita pesitu azhudhutu irundhaan… Apdiyea pesitey avan shivani kai la mayangitaan…. apo dhan na shivani oda face ah clear ah pathen… romba amaidhiya irundhuchu… Na ava kita ponen… ava kita pesinen…

Vinay : Ammu…. Na vinay de.. un annan de… ana nama apdi illa de… close friends ah dhana de irundhom.. Ne dhan de nama veetu dhevadhai… Amma,appa kita na enanu de soluven… ne elundhu vandhudu de… Enaku endha problem nalum ne dhan help panuva.. please de nama family ku ne venum de… Paaru de una matumey urugi urugi love panavan ipo mayangi irukaan.. Avanuku ne venum de… na aniki sonen unaku edhum agadhu nu… en varthaya poi akiradha de… vandhuru de… Neyum Arjun um happy ah rombah naliku irukanum de… please de…  :'(

Na pesitu irukum podhey arjun elundhutaan… avanum pesinan shivani kita…almost nanga 45 mins ava kita azhudhutu irundhom… time aga aga enga nambikai konjm konjma koranjitu irundhuchu… ana arjun ava face ah ae pathutu azhudhutu irundhaan… Nanga azhudhutu irundhom… apo shivani oda kai leasa shake achu… ava kan la irundhu tears vandhutu…

Engaluku apo dhan uyirey vandhuchu…. Ava kasta patu kan ah thoraka try pana… avalalamudila… Apo arjun avaloda kai ah irukaama pudichaan.. ava leasa kana thorandha.. ava kan la irundhu tears vandhutey irundhuchu… Eyes ah thorandhutu leasa siricha… apo dhan engaluku full ah nambikai vandhuchu…

Ava edho pesa try pana.. ana avalala mudila…. Analum pesina..

Shivani : h…h….h…h…hi…Hie da… How r yu ?
Arjun: hey chelam love yu de… bayandhutom de nanga… ne ena de cool ah how r yu nu kekara…iru na doctor ah kootitu varen..

Avan veliya poga ponnan… apo door ah thorandhutu doctor uncle ae vandhanga… avanga pinadiyea amma um appa um vandhanga…. Enga moonu perukum (me(vinay),shivani,arjun) ena poandradhuney therila.. uncle dhan cal pani vara soli irupanga nu nenaikaran… appa kum amma kum edhum theriyuahu nu avanga varardha vechey therinjikiten…ula varumpodhey amma enkit a pesinanga…

Amma: hey vinay.. ne inga ena da panra… ne dhan uncle kita soli engala vara soniya… ammu enga da.. edhuku da engala vara sona?
Vinay: amma… adhu vandhu… ammu… (nu solitey na bed ah pathen… anga ammu irundha… amma um appa um avala pathanga.. aavangaluku onumey purila.. azha aramichitanga…. Uncle avangala veliya kootitu poga songna… nanum arjun um avangala veliya kootitu vandhom.. avanga kita elathayum sonom including arjun shivani love mater sonnom… amma um appa um rombah azhudhanga…avangala pathadhum enakum arjun kum rombah azhugai vandhutu..  :'(

 Apo doctor uncle vandhanga…

Uncle : Vinay …arjun azhadhenga da.. don’t wory shivani ku ini edhum illa… she s perfectly alright ini ava rombah naal nala irupa… unga kastathuku lam palan kidaichidichu da..

Solitu avaru poitaru… adhuku apramum nanum arjun um azhudhutey dhan irundhom.. Amma kum appa kum doctor sonadha ketu rombah happy…

Amma : Adhan shivani ku seri ayitu la da.. inum edhuku azharenga?
Appa : avanga azhatum vidu ma… namaku ipo dhan idhalam theriryum… ivanga almost 6months idhalam manaskukulayea vachitu kasta patutu irukanunga.. azhunga da.. nala azhunga… Arjun azhudhu mudichitu unga amma appa ku cal pani vara solu

Enakum arjun kum idhalam unmaya nu therila.. ana rombah sandhosama irundhuchu.. aprm nanga shivani ah paka ula ponom…. She s alright now.. ana avalala pesa mudila.. adhu onum ila mayaka marundhu kuduthadhu nala dhan ipadi… konja nerathula seri ayiruva nu doctor sonanga…

Aprm oru 3 days la shivani ah discharge panitom… veetuku kootitu poitom… Arjun oda amma appa kita enga amma appa pesinga… avangalum othukitanga…Appa avangala one week kazhichu veetuku vara sonanga…

Payanam thodarum

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« Reply #121 on: August 07, 2015, 03:29:28 PM »
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« Reply #122 on: August 07, 2015, 10:59:20 PM »
Oru nimisham aadi poiten ala poiten... Na vidama read pandra stry idhu...

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« Reply #123 on: August 08, 2015, 07:57:13 AM »
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Thanks dear  ;) ;)

Story on the way ... coming soon  :P :P ;)

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« Reply #124 on: August 08, 2015, 07:58:53 AM »
Oru nimisham aadi poiten ala poiten... Na vidama read pandra stry idhu...

Apdiya Farah  :) :)

Thanks ma for continously reading this story  :) :)

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« Reply #125 on: August 08, 2015, 08:08:03 AM »
Part 70



Operation lam mudinjitu.. Nanga veetuku vandhutom.. Ipo shivani is almost alright.. enaku life la idhukumela edhumey illa ngra alavuku na avlo happy ah irundhen… En thangachi happy ah irundha adhu podhum enaku.. enga veetoda sandhosam engaluku thirumbi kidaichitu  :D

Shivani’s stry continued…

Operationmudinji enaku edho ayitu nu arjun soli na therinjikiten… enakaga arjun um vinay um rombah azhdhudhu irukanga En mela arjun um vinay um rombah pasam vachi iruikanga… life la ini edhukagavum ivanga rendu perayum vitu kudukamatan…. Indha kolapathula en love mater lam amma,appa kita solitanga  :o Nanga discharge agi veetuku vandhadhum appa enkita vandhu pesinaru…

Appa: ammu… ulla varalama da…
Shivani: ahmm… vanga appa…ula vanga.. naney keela varalam nu irundhen.. adhukula nengaley vandhutenga…

Appa: paravala ma.. irukatum unkita konjm pesanum adhan vandhen.. ipo pesalama ?
Shivani: ahmm.. solunga pa… yeduku permission lam ketuttu irukenga… nanum konjm pesanum pa…

Appa: seri ma.. unkita na oru appa madhiriya ma nadandhukiten.? Yen Accident anadha enkita irundhu maraichitenga?
Shivani : appa.. apidilm illa pa… unga kita sona nengalum amma um kasta paduvenga nu dhan solalal pa.. na dhan sola venam nu sonen vinay kita… matha padi vera edhum illa pa.. sorry pa..

Appa: sory lam soladha da.. seri nanga kasta paduvom nu adha maraichenga.. neyum arjun um love panradha yen ma maraichenga? Adhukumnanga kasta paduvom nu maraichengala?
Shivani : apa.. adhu vandhu…

Appa: Inga paaru da.. enaku en pasanga sandhosam dhan mukiyam.. Epo arjun oda family ah neng aveetuku kootitu vandhengalo anikey na mudivu paniten avan dhan unaku nu… but adha neyea soluva nu nenaichen… its okie ipayum no problem… naliku avanga veetla irundhu elarayum vara soliten… happy ah unaku…
Shivani : Appa…… nijamava? Thnk yu pa.. thnk yu so much pa sorry pa.. edhayum maraikanum nu illa pa… nenga edhana thapa eduthuka porenga nu dhan pa solala…

Aprm next day ….

Arjun oda amma,appa,akka,anna lam veetuku vandhanga… irunga irunga…arjun oda amma,appa na sonen.. sory.. en athai,mama lam veetuku vandhanga  :D Enga amma,appa um athai mama um discuss pani enakum arjun kum engagement fix panitanga… Innum one week la engagement nu mudivu panitanga..so Engagement mudichitu polam nu enga veetlayea elarum thangitanga… Arjunoda akka um anna um matum ooruku ponanga luckage lam kondu vararthuku…

En family ae oru sorgam madhiri irundhuchu… En arjun enaku matum dhan… adhu inum one week la nadaka pogudhu.. elarum keela pesitu irundhanga… na tired ah iruku nu room la irundhen… apo arjun anga vandhaan…

Shivani: hey.. ne ena inga.. elarum keela irukanga.. ne yen inga vandha? Yarna patha problem ayirum… ne po keela…
Arjun: keela porathuka de ivlo kasta patu elarayum salamichitu un room ku vandhen… aprm ena keata?? Na yen inga vandhen nu dhana?? En pondati room de… na varama vera yar varuva…

Shivani: pondati ah.. sir.. adhukulam innum time iruku.. one week kalichu dhan engagement…. En studies mudinja aparam dhan marriage… adhukula avasara padadhenga
Arjun: Hey epo na unkita propose panano apothila irundhu ne en pondati dhan de.. idhuku na yarkitayum permission vanga venam.. innum one week la full rights oda koopduven de… ena de panuva de…

Shivani: ohh apdiya da.. iru en mama va koopadren.. avaru vandhu soluvaru…
Arjun: hey ena ne purushana vada poda nu koopadra? Ipadilam koopda koodadhu theriyadha unaku? Purishanuku konjm achum mariyadha kudu de…

Shivani: ne matum ena de solra la da… apo nanum apdi dha da solven .. ena da panuva da…
Arjun: ena panuvena? Unna… apadiyea….

Solikitey ena kis pana vandhaan… apo elarum heyyyyyy… nu kathinanga… thirumbi patha door kita en amma,appa,vinay,athai,mama,anni,chandru mama ealrum ninutu irundhanga… Ena pandradhu nu theriyama nanga rendu perum naala asadu valinjom… Apo Athai vandhu arjun kaadha thirugitey avan kita pesinaga..

Athai: yen sir.. ivlo naal wait panenga la.. inum kojm naal wait pana mudiayadha? Adhukula inga ena panra da?
Arjun: adhu onnumilla ma.. chuma dhan ma.. ava kan la dhoosi vilundhutu adha eduka dhan kita ponen.. vera onnum illa ma…

Athai: apadiya marumagaley… ivan solradhu lam unmaya? Nu enkita ketanga..
Shivani: ah.. ahm.. ama athai… kanla thoosi vilundhutu adha eduka dhan avanga kita vandhanga…

Vinay: parra… ipovey avanuku support ah ? rytu.. ne nadathu de thangachi…
Shivani: hey vinay.. konjm vaaya moodriya… una param pathukaran iru…

Elarum nanga panra comedy pathu sirichitu irundhanga… veedey rombah sandhosama irundhuchu… en life la enaku kadaicha ela relationship rombah pure  :D

One week kalichu enakum arjun kum engagement mudinjitu… aniki elarum busy ah irundhanga…. Nan dress change pana room ku ponen…door lock panitu thirumbina anga arjun irundhaan..

Shivani: hey arjun..ne inga.. hey relations elarum keel airukanga.. aniki madiri yarna vandhura poranga… poda…
Arjun: seri seri kathadha… na veliya pooren… adhuku munadi.. onu solitu poidren... saree la ne sema azhaga iruka de… kolra de enna… Chancea illa… apadiyea unna… nu solitey enkita vandhu ena kiss panitaan…  :-* mmm.. ipo veliya pogava?

Shivani: ahmm… po.. ana adhuku munadi…  :-* (na avana kiss paniten  :D )
Arjun: parra… mm love yu de… ne en pondati de.. idha solradhuku ena evlo perumaya iruku theriyuma?

Shivani: love yu da purusha..

Aprm avanga lam ooruku poitanga…

After 2 years.. en studies lam mudinjitu… innum two days la enakum arjun kum marriage… Marriage ku elam grand ah arrange pani irundhanga… rombah sandhosmaa irundhuchu… andha two days um seekirama poitu.. inum 20 mins la mugurtham…. Avlo neram enaku iladha oru nervousness apo enaku vandhuchu… ela ponukum life ae change agara andha situation la dhan nanum iruken… apo arjun en kai ah irukama pudichaan…

Arjun: ena de… enachu… nervousness ah iruka? Don’t wory dear.. na iruken… epayum unkooda… love yu

Nu sonnan.. adhuku aprm enaku rombah relaxed ah irundhuchu… arjun en kaluthula thaali katum podhu enaku irundha feeling aah words ala solamudiyadhu.. avlo happy ah irundhen… rombah sandhosmaa enga life ah nanga elaroda blessings odavum nanga start panom….

Arjun <WEDS > shivani

Na ipo Mrs.arjun .. solavey evlo hapy ah iruku theriyuma?

Adhuku aprm enga love ku gift ah engaluku rendu kolandhainga irukanga… oru paiyan peru Abinay Oru ponnu peru Prathiksha

Enaku marriage ana 3 years kalichu vinay kum marriage ayitu… avanuku oru ponu peru Ananya
Epayum Abinay, prathiksha,ananya elarumona dhan vilayadituu irupanga… Innum enakum arjun kum ula kaadhal payanam mudiyala ….

ARJUN  ??? SHIVANI

The End

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« Reply #126 on: August 08, 2015, 08:35:10 AM »
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« Reply #127 on: August 08, 2015, 10:42:01 AM »
Avalothana..mudinjudha....so good story

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« Reply #128 on: August 08, 2015, 10:44:44 AM »
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Yeah story over  8) 8)

Naala paadiya rendu perum sertuthanga  8) 8)

Thanks unga supporttku  :)

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« Reply #129 on: August 08, 2015, 11:14:04 AM »
Avalothana..mudinjudha....so good story

Thank u Kavi  :) :)

New storyoda tomo parpom  ;) ;) :D

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« Reply #130 on: August 08, 2015, 11:18:40 AM »
Aii jolly..super. Waiting for next story. :P

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« Reply #131 on: August 08, 2015, 04:52:50 PM »
Yeah jolyaa irpom  ??? ???

Next new story vara pogutu  8) 8)

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« Reply #132 on: June 09, 2018, 04:49:56 PM »
Suprb stry.. Nyz arjun nd shivani



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