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Title: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 25, 2017, 01:11:22 PM
                                     
                                       (http://i.imgur.com/5yswz3M.jpg)


Aaranya(Aarani): Maaaaamaaaa :)
Karthik: ingayum vanthutale  :(
Aaranya: dai maams ene da odi oliyura? ???
Karthik: Mohiniya kanda odi oliyama sirichukite welcome panuvangala? :o
Aaranya: Apo nan avlo azhagunu solriya? ;D
Karthik: (Adada iva epdi ball potalum six adikurale) :o
Aaranya: Solluda maams ;D
Karthik: Aarani unaku oru thadava sonna puriyatha? Ene ipdi torture panra? Cha >:(
Aaranya: Apo unaku enna nejameve pidikalaya? :-\ Illa veeta enna solluvanganu bayapaduriya? :'(
Karthik: Enaku yarukum bayam illa ok enaku un mela love illa avlo than
Aaranya: So ithu than un mudiva? :-[
Karthik: Aama Aarani ::)
Aaranya: Ok ivlo naalum ungala kashtapaduthunathuku oru sry :-[  oru ponnu vanthu propose panurale nu enna neenga kevalama nenachiruntha kandipa u will feel for it :(
Karthik: Aarani apdi…
Aaranya: Thayavu senju pesa venam nan kelamburen :(
Karthik: Nan solratha…..
Aaranya: I said stop it ok  >:(
(Aaranya vegama anga irunthu kelambi poita)

Karthik: Iva oruthi cha  >:(
Rithika: Ada paavi nee ellam oru manushana :o
Karthik: Neeya? Nee enna panura inga? ::)
Rithi: Naa enna panuna unakenna da eruma maadu >:(
Karthik: Athu sari apo nan kelamburen >:(
Rithi: Adei nilluda paavam da aarani ???
Karthik: Adiye nee enaku frnda illa avaluku frnda? >:(
Rithi: Ithula unaku oru doubtu vera ::)   koduma sir ithu >:(
Karthik: Pinna irukatha? :D
Rithi: Aama avala ene venam nu sollura :(
Karthik: Love varanum la :(
Rithi: Apo ava mela unaku love illa apdi thane? ::)
Karthik: Aama 8)
Rithi: Ada erumaye >:(  nee ellam uruptu sabba mudila da :-X
Karthik: Ene d?
Rithi: Nan oru question kekava?
Karthik: Kekathana vidava pora kelu :P
Rithi: Annaiku unga veetuku unga maama oda frndu paiyan vanthirunthan la :)
Karthik: Aama nee ene d avana kekura :o
Rithi: Ada cha erumaye un buthi pohuthu paaru >:(
Karthik: Sari vidu vidu :)
Rithi: Avan anga aarani kita pesitu irunthan la apo nee ene tension aa iruntha ::)
Karthik: Athu avan yarnu munna pinna theriyathu la aprm ava pesum pothu nan careful aa irunthen ::)
Rithi: Ava amma appa ku illatha akkara unaku ene da? :-[
Karthik: Athu nan ava maama la :)
Rithi: Maamava irunthu kilichitalum >:(
Karthik: Ene d :o
Rithi: Unaku antha paiyan mela rmba porama vanthuchula ;D
Karthik: Illa ye rmba illa but lighta
Rithi: He he he
Karthik: Sirikatha d
Rithi: Ithuku peru than possessive aa irukurathu da tube lighte
Karthik:????
Rithi: Mulikatha kanna nondiruven ava mela unaku irunthathu paasam plus love da dubakur mandaya?
Karthik: Apdiya d?
Rithi: Enna nopdiya d?  athan avala thiti anupitiye aprm unaku love vantha enna pona enna putukita enakenna?
Karthik: Enna d ipdi solra?
Rithi: Vera epdi eruma sollanum? Paavam  rmba azhuthukite poita
Karthik: Adiye enaku help panu d?
Rithi:  Help aa serruppu >:( odiru ponnungana unga ishtathuku pesuvinga aprm helpu gulpu nu vantha naanga seyanuma poda poda 8)
Adi paavi nan epadi ipdi ellam pesunen? :o
Rithi: Nee pesalanalum nee panunathuku ithu than meaning >:(
Karthik: Pls d enaku enna panurathune puriyala help d ava mela love nu enaku sariya puriyala d  nee solrapo than enaku aaru pathi thinking varuthu ::)
Rithi: Sari sari polambatha mothala unga veetuku polam vaa anga pona than enna nadakuthunu therium ???
Karthik: Vaa vaa  ::)

(In Karthik’s Home)

Aarani Appa: Ene ma azhura? :(
Aarani: Onnum illa pa :'(
A.A: Nanum un vayasa kadanthu vanthavan than naan avasarapatu chinna vayasula un ammava kalyanam pani ava padipa naasamakiten  athu nala ava ipo evlo kashta paduranu paaru aana en ponnu  life la suyama ella mudivum edukanum nu than unna nalla padika vachen
En ponnu ipdi azhura alavuku entha thappum pana mata  enna achunu solluma :'(
Aarani: Appa  :'(
A.Appa: Azhathada thangam enna achunu sollu appa kita :(
Aarani: Appa karthik maama enna venam nu sollitan pa :'(
A.Appa: Karthik unna venam nu sollitana? :o Apo nee karthik a than virumbuniya? :o
Aarani: Aama pa :-[
A.Appa: Varatum avan kita enna kekuren nu paaru >:(
Aaru ma nithanama yosichu mudivu eduma avasarathula edukura mudivu ellam vethanai ya matum than tharum ma
Aarani: Illa pa nan mudivu eduthitan next week kula nama kelambalam :'(
A.Appa: Un ishtam ma appa epavum un kuda irupen :)
Aarani: Thanx pa :-[
A.Appa: Appa kita enna ma thanx nee azhathada :)
Aarani: sari pa :)

continue panalamaa.......... ::)



(intha Aarani, karthik, rithika ivangalam yarunu theriyanum na next epi la solren :D nan next epi la sollanum na cmnt nallatha varanum ::) cmnt varalana nan unga time a athuku mela waste pana vida maten :D ene naa nanum elutha maten ;D)   C u all soon in Next epi ;D (vithi irunthaal :P)
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: SaNviYa on May 25, 2017, 04:18:08 PM
Vipu story super da keep writing ipdiye  continue pannu I'm always support😁💞💝💝👌👌👏
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 26, 2017, 08:25:31 AM
Hi Sanvi Sis :D very happy to hear ur cmnt :D neenga oruthavangalavathu cmnt potingale ;D adutha epi thane potuta pochu :D

Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 26, 2017, 08:55:15 AM
Nenjamellam Kadhal Epi 2 ;D.....

(Karthik and Rithi Karthik oda veetuku vanthanga)

Rithi: Adei sothapidama nadanthuka ::)
Karthik: Engaluku therium 8)
Rithi: Oh theriuma apo nan kelamburan nee pesiko >:(
Karthik: Adiyei ambo nu vitutu pohama irudi :o
Rithi: Vaayku matum korachal illa. Unga maama vararu :D
A.Appa: Vaa Karthik vaama Rithi ene angaye nikuringa ulla vanga :D
Kaarthik enakoru help panuda nanga ooruku kelambanum ticket book panidu da
Karthik: Enna maama thidir nu :o
A.Appa: Inum 2week leave iruke ipo thidir nu kelamburinganu solringa :(
Karthik: Rithi enna pathutu nikura sollu d :-[
Rithi: Dei uncle ku enna velayo therila ethum urgenta irukalam la :)
Karthik: :o (adipaavi aapu vaikura time aa d ithu en vazhka prachana d)
Aarani: Appa :)
A.Appa: Solluda ma
Aarani: Appa kncm purchasing iruku pa velila pohanum hi Rithi ka
Epdi irukinga? Paathu rmba naal achu (Karthik a morachukitu sonna)
Rithi: Nan nallaruken ma nee epdi iruka? Work ellam epdi pohuthu?
Aarani: Good ka work also good :)
A.Appa: Aarani ma unaku inga place ellam avlo palakam illa nan Arjun a kuptu viduren avan kuda poitu vaa :)
Karthik: :o (hyoo namaku ethirave ellam kelamburangale) Arjun aa ::)
A.Appa: Aama Karthik ene kekura ???
Karthik: Illa maama arjun ku ene kashtam kuduthikitu  Rithi freeya than iruka ava kutitu pohatum :D
Rithi: :o (adapaavi un aaluku nan bodyguard aa en thalai eluthu irudi mavane nee matikita >:( :P) ya Aarani nee en kuda va nama polam ;D
Karthik: ??? (enna iva no nee Karthik kuda po nu soluvanu paatha ivale aajar avura oru vela nama vishayama than pesa poralo kadavule ::))
Aarani: Illa Rithi ka ungalauku ene shramam :)
Rithi: Aarani apdi ellam illa enakum kncm shopping pananum
So vaa polam :D
Aarani: Ok pa nanga kelamburom :)

(Rithika and Aarani kelambi poitanga)

A.Appa: Karthik marakama ticket book panidu enga moonu perukum :)
Karthik: Sari maama :)(ipo enna panurathu Aaru en moonja pathu kuda pesala ivala epdi cool pani love solli ipove kanna katuthe :-[)


Yarunga ivanga ellam??? Oru kutty kathai solren kelunga

Aarani amma ku oru akka oru thambi. Akka London la settled. Avanga kalyanam mudinja aprm intha family oda urave vitu pochu. Aarani amma 16 vayasulaye 20 vayasu Aarani appa va love pani marriage panikitanga( ithu illegal nalum village side la ipo vara ipdi nadanthukitu than irukuthu) kadhal mela iruntha aarvathula padipu pochu. Aarani ammaku kadasi thambi than Karthik. avangaluku kalayanam nadakum bothu Karthik ku 6 vayasu.
Aarani oda paatiku Aarani amma mela iruntha kobam lam adutha varsham Aarani porantha odane kaanama pochu
Aarani oda appa rmba porupa nadanthukitathaala Aarani paati veetulaye oru kudumbama irunthanga
Aarani valarum bothu oru frnda therinjan Karthik.  Aarani appa transfer la vera ooruku  mari pohum bothu Karthik a vitu pirinju pona Aarani.
19 varusham kuda irunthavana vititu vanthapo than ava Karthik a evlo miss panranu therinjukita athuve aprom love aa maridichi
But padipa mudichitu than Karthik kita sollanum nu wait pana. Nenacha mathiri padipa mudichi Karthik kita propose pana
But Karthik apo than work la join panirunthan. life la ethuvume inum saathikala nu oru varutham athoda kudave valanthava love nu solli vanthu nikura ithelam yosichu avan Aarani love a ethukama reject panan . but Aarani vidama avana suthikite vantha
inaiku ithuku mudivu katiyaganum nu Aarani ketapo than ivlo nadanthu Aarani ooruku kelambura vara kondu vanthu vitiruku
( ;D ;Dhe he he rmba rmba kutti katha la)

Ipdiye flash back pona ennaya  Karthik mobile ringtone present ku kondu vanthuchi


Karthik: iva enna kupdra Aaru kita pesirupalao. hey solludi :(
Rithi: kaarthik (ava voice lita azhura mathiri irunthichi) odane kelambi GH vaa :'(
Karthik: hey enachu d >:(
Rithi: enaku onnum illa Aarani ku.. :-[
Karthik: hey enachu Aaru ku Rithi.. :o
Rithi: pathatapadatha veeta onnum sollatha odane kelambi va tension avama :-[
Karthik: odane varen d  :(

(bike eduthutu kelambunen but mind fulla Aaru pathiye than thinking avaluku ethu aaha kudathunu pray pani kite vandi otunan 20 min la GH vanthutan)

(Rithi GH entrance la ninna)

Karthik: Rithi Aaru enga d :-[ (Rithi kan ellam kalangi irunthichu)
Rithi: Kaarthik tension aahatha Aarani in I.C.U :'(
Karthik: Rithi hey enachu d avaluku solli thola d :o
Rithi: Nanum Aaraniyum shopping mudichitu varum bothu bike accident agi car onnu avala mothiduchida :'((itha solli mudikum bothu Karthik Rithiya aranjutan)
Karthik: Eruma bike paathu ota matiya >:((Karthik kural azha start panichu) Aaru ku matum ethum aavatum unaya :'((kovama pesitu I.C.U noki ponanan)
(Rithi I.C.U kita pohum bothu thalaila kai vacha mathiri Karthik chair la irunthan. ava Karthik kita pona)

Rithi: Karthik Aaraniku onnum aavathuda :-[
Karthik: Avaluku matum ethum aachi unnaya :'( (avan kai mushti ellam irugiduchi)
Rithi: (adipaavi Aarani :o ivan character therinjum ennaya ithula korthu vitu vedika paakuriye  :-[ivanuku nama dagalati vela therinjithu ::) ohh myy gaad intha lovers pisasugalta irunthu enaya kaapathu :'()


Apdi ivanga dagalti vela ennava irukum? ::) ;D continue panikalam :P......
Athu ennanu Cmnt pathutu solluren :P ;D

Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: ReeNa on May 26, 2017, 09:49:49 AM
Hi vips

Apdi ivanga dagalti vela ennava irukum? ::)
 Rithi semma act pani...  Aarani and Karthik ah serthe vekiranga ;D

Karthik Rithiya aranjutan  :o....pavam rithi :'(   
(karthik, Aarani ya love panrane proof panratheke avanga pana thiyagam :P )
 
ohh myy gaad intha lovers pisasugalta irunthu enaya kaapathu
vipu sis neenga matum dhan kapatha mudium ;D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: MyNa on May 26, 2017, 01:25:30 PM
Vipurthi :D story superb sis..
Tom and jerry mathiri ivanga love mothal ah thodangiruku.. mothal la aarambichu nalla padiya mudinja happy.. Adutha part ku waiting ;) keep writting sis :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 26, 2017, 04:04:38 PM
Hi vips

Apdi ivanga dagalti vela ennava irukum? ::)
 Rithi semma act pani...  Aarani and Karthik ah serthe vekiranga ;D

Karthik Rithiya aranjutan  :o....pavam rithi :'(   
(karthik, Aarani ya love panrane proof panratheke avanga pana thiyagam :P )
 
ohh myy gaad intha lovers pisasugalta irunthu enaya kaapathu
vipu sis neenga matum dhan kapatha mudium ;D

Hi ree sis tnx for reading this story ;D Rithi than kaipulla :D lovers edayila siki sinna pinnama pora frnds ellarukum Rithi nelama than :D next epi on the way :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 26, 2017, 04:20:49 PM
Vipurthi :D story superb sis..
Tom and jerry mathiri ivanga love mothal ah thodangiruku.. mothal la aarambichu nalla padiya mudinja happy.. Adutha part ku waiting ;) keep writting sis :D


Hi Myna sis :D dank u sis :D nalla padiya mudichidalam :D enaku sogam pudikathu :D ivanga tom and jerry na naduvula matitu irkira ellarum yaru sis ;D next epi is on the way sis :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 27, 2017, 10:28:53 AM
Nenjamellam Kadhal epi 3.... ;D

(after 2hrs doctor I.C.U la irunthu velila varanga) Intha Dr. yarunu avanga per pathu mudinja guess  panikonga)

Rithika: Karthik Dr varangada :-[
Karthik: Dr ipo Aaru ku epdi iruku? :'(
Dr.Suba(Subi): neenga yaru sir avangaluku? ???
Karthik:  nan ava maama Dr.
Dr.Suba: Sir avanga nelama kncm critical than unconscious aa irukanga :(
Conscious thirumbalana rmba critical agidum so avanga kita pesi 1hr kula conscious ku kondu vara parunga avlo than solla mudium ::) (athu enna 1hr kanakunu avangale aprm solluvanga ;D)
Ini unga kai la than iruku

(Dr solli mudikum bothu Karthik I.C.U kula poyirunthan)

Rithika: Yemma nipatu avan poyi ara mani neram avuthu :P
Subi: En thalai eluthu :o >:(
Rithika: Enna oru performance d chellm ;D
Subi: Goyyale mandaya odachiruvan odiru >:( Nee oruthi pothum en usura vanga :(
Rithika: He he he ;D
Subi: Sirikathadi en chief ku matum ithu therinjichi nee than enaya vachi naalaiku soru podanum :-\ pathuko
Rithika: Subi chllm apdi ellam ethuvum aavathu. Apdi ethum aanalum palaya soru potunalum unaya vachi nan kaapathuran ;D ::)
Subi: Palaya sora eruma odidu :o >:(
Rithika: Subi nee Aarniku pota make up la avan ethum kandupudika matane? ???
Subi: Cha cha antha ponnu vaya thoranthu unmaya sonna matum than kandupudikalam. nan bandage suthura azhakuku intha hospitale adimai :D
Rithika: Apo un velaiku dismiss confirm ::)
Subi: Enadi olarura :o
Rithika: Ulla ponane oruthan avan sema tension party. Ithu ellam dagalti nu kandu pidichan un velaiku ula vaikama vidamatan ;D
Subi: Adipaavi :o krathagi >:( en chief vera 1hr la vanthuruvare antha pakki enna pannumo :( (ithan 1 hr kanaku :D)
Rithika: Aarani avana oru vali panama enthiruchi varamata ;D
Subi: Aandava vazhkaila attend pana kudatha ore call intha erumayoda call nu inaiku enaku puriya vachitiye :-\
Rithika: Va va act pani rmba tired aa irupa canteen polam ;)
Subi: En neram vanthu thola >:( :D


Ulla pona Karthik enna panuraru nu paapom


(ulla Aarani kaiya pudichikitu ukanthu irukaru)

Karthik: Aaru ma ethum pesuda :-[ Kanna thoranthu paruda :'(
Nan ini unna ethuvume solla maten da. Enakum unnaya rmba pidikum da un kita sollanum nu than veeta vanthan. Pls enthirichu paruda
Maama akka kita enna solluvan naan. Enthirichi paruda
Nan unna than love panren unna than kalayanam panuven :'(
Nee enthirikanum nu poi sollalada nan en manasula irukiratha than solluren :'(
Pls da enthirichi pAaruma enna :'( (avan thembi thembi azha start panan)

(lita Aarani ku unarvu vanthu kaiya asacha apo Karthik Aaraniya pathan ava kannu rendulayum thanni oda avana pathu kncm sathamave siricha)

Karthik: Aaruma unakum onnum aavalada nee polachuta da
En Aaruku ethuvum aavala :D (Aaraniya pathukite santhoshama sonnan)
Karthik: Nan odane Dr a kupiduren iruma
Aarani: Dei nillu nillu avangala disturb panatha paavam enaku katu pote avanga uyir poiduchi
Karthik: Aaru
Aarani: Yeah nan than da loosu maama ;D
Karthik: Nee enna sollura :o
Aarani:Accident la adipatu ICU la admit aanava pesura mathiriya iruku unaku  :P
Karthik: Apdina unaku :o
Aarani:Ethuvum avala iam perfectly alright venum na odi adi katava

(Karthik mugam ellam kobama mari Aaru pakathula vanthan)

Aarani:  :o (ayayo kncm overa ketutomo ckrm samali Aaru) enna adika poriya? >:(
Adida paapom nee oru adi adicha nan rendu adiya thirupi tharuvan >:(

(Aarani kita vantha Karthik sudden aa ninutan)

Aarani:  ::)(sabba ninutan illa en kannamum bun agirukum ini thairiyama pesu Aaru :D)
Enna shock aagita ini unaku mariyatha ellam kedayathu >:(
Nan olunga propose panapove ethukitu iruntha paravalla
Nee enaya azha vitu pathathuku ini mariyatha cancel >:(
Karthik: :o
Aarani: Apdi paatha kanna nondiruvan. Enakum accident aanathu unmathan but athu oru scratch matum than
Karthik: :o
Aarani: Nan than rithi ka ta ipdi ellam oru drama pana sonnen
Karthik:  :o (adiye rithi velila vanthu unnaya kolluran iru >:(. Iva over emotion kudukum pothe ushaara irunthirukanum but Dr. epdi sonnanga? ::))
Aarani: Dr.Suba rithi ka oda friend than so avangalayum nanga than othuka vachom ::)
Karthik: (ellam kootu kalavanigala apo hyoo namala nalla emathitalunga) :o
Aarani: Ginger eating monkey mathiri mulikama vaya thoranthu pesu >:(
Karthik: (epdi pesuvan d pesathanum thitura pesunum thitura nan enna panuvan)
Aarani:  ::)Oh unaku ithellam nanga epdi panom ethuku panom nu theriyanum la 8)

(Karthik aama nra mathiri thalaya mela keela aatunan)

Aarani: Apo oru flashback solren ketu thola 8)
Karthik:  ???(aandava vaay pesatha pulla poochinu nenacha intha kathu kathurale :-\)


Nama kuda enna flash back nu therinjukalam but kncm wait pananume
Ene na next epi la than sollalam
So ipo continue potuten…. ;D ;D

Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: MyNa on May 27, 2017, 03:43:24 PM
Intha doctor character enaku romba pidichiruku vipurthi :D kootu kalavanigala irukangale ellam ::) antha paiyana kathari kathari ala vitathuku yaruku enna aaga pogutho :o Flashback ku karthik oda serthu engalaiyum wait panna vachitinga :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 27, 2017, 05:39:24 PM
hi myna sis :D tnx sis :D aarani mathiri oru ponnu kita matikita karthik mathiri paiyan ellam azhuthe avanum ;D nama suba sis a think pani kathaila illuthu vitutan  :D (nalla vela avangaluku theriyathu ;D) type panum bothu uyire povuthu sis ;D ini fulla mudichitu mothama potuda planning :D paakalam sis :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: MyNa on May 29, 2017, 03:21:39 PM
Vanakam sis..
haha characters ellam superb..
full ah mudichitu upadate panna poringala illai epavum pola episode by episode ah sis ???
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: ReeNa on May 29, 2017, 03:37:09 PM
Wow  Vipu sis this story is super and fun to read 8). I like all the characters. Flash back enava irekom ???...sis seekirama update panunga. Intha mari  kootu kalavanigal namekum kidaicha nalla irekomla  ;D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: Sangi jasmi on May 29, 2017, 04:15:32 PM

nice story
my favorite name karthick
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 29, 2017, 08:44:01 PM
myna ss and ree ss ;D en kashta kaalam mrng la irunthu power cut :( ipo than came :D type mudinchu crctn pathutu post paniruven

hi sangi :D tnx unga fav name aa :P nice :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: Bena on May 29, 2017, 11:45:52 PM
Hey vipu...  ;D story semma... :-* romba days kalichu again oru story ah supera post panitinga :D am so hapie to read this lovely story... Semma frndsp and semma love...😘 seekrama next epi potrunga pls.. :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 30, 2017, 08:59:03 AM
Nenjamellam Kadha epi 4 ;D ;D

Ipo flashback polam vanga :D (sry rmba late flashback ayiduchi :D)


(Rithika and Aarani shopping kelambi ponanga shopping ellam mudiura vara Aarani mind fulla nithanama illa)

Rithi: Aarani nee shopping vanthathula irunthi sari illa :-\
Aarani: Rithi ka apdi ellam ethum illa normal than irukan :)
Rithi: Enakennamo sariya padala love la sikitiya :P
Aarani: Apdi…. Apdi ellam ethum ill akka :(
Rithi: Enamo sollura sari vaa polam :)

(rendu perum velila vanthanga Rithika ku call vara pesitu vantha but Aarani etho yosanai(enna yosanai ellam Karthik pathi than) la nadanthu vanthapo oru bike la mothi keela vilunthuta)

Rithi: Aarani :o
(Rithi itha pathutu pinnalaye odi vantha)

Rithi: Aarani ennachu :o
Aarani: Illa ka onnum illa :(
Bike owner: Ene ma kavanam la enga iruku vandi varatha kuda paaka matiya >:(
Aarani: Sry sir etho theriyama :(
Ene ma bike nala ok vera ethum vehicle la adipatiruntha >:(
Rithi: Yov eneya avale adipata shock la iruka nee vera inoru vandi nu bp ethama kelambu >:(
Bike owner: Iniyachum road pathu nadanga thalai eluthu  :o

(bike la vanthavar thitikite poitaru)

Rithi: Aarani adi patrukudi :o
Aarani: Akka chinna scratch than :)
Rithi: Illa illa va hospital polam :(
Aarani: Akka intha scratch ku hospital lam over ka :D
Rithi: (Rithi over acting odambuku agathu samali) :D  apdinu solriya sari vaa antha park la kncm irunthitu polam
Aarani: Sari ka :)

(rendu perum road cross pani pakathula iruntha park la poy irunthanga)
Rithi: ??? (iva kita enanu strt panrathu) (but yaro azhura mathiri ivaluku feel agi thirumbi paatha)

Aarani:  :'(
Rithi: Aarani ennachu adipatathu ethum valikutha :(
Aarani: Illa ka onnum illa (ava kanna thodachikite sonna) :-\
Rithi: Aprm ene azhura ipo varaikum athu ene nu enaku theriyathunu nee nenacha nee than fool >:(
Aarani: Rithi ka
Rithi: Enaku ellam therium nee Karthik kita beach la vachi pesitu pohum bothu nan pathen
Aarani: Akka :o
Rithi: Azhatha Aarani azhuthu ennaha pohuthu :-\
Aarani: Epdi ka solluven  Karthik enna venamnu sollitaru enaku itha epdi eduthukurathunu therila
Love panren nu therinja odane kuda nan solala apdi solliruntha en padipa kaati thalli vachiduvan nu than nithanama ellam yosichu propose panen
But avan enaku inga irukave pidikala enaku rmba hurting aa iruku
Oru ponnu poy love propose pana avlo cheap aa
Rithi: Apdi ellam illa Aarani :(
Aarani: Avan pesunathu ellame apdi than irunthichu :( :'(
Rithi: Aarani kncm avanayum consider panu papom ::)
Aarani: Epdi ka nan evlo kashta patenu theriuma? Love a maraikavum mudiyama sollavum mudiyama 3yrs evlo poratam :'(
Evlo aasaya poy en kadhala sonnen but oru varthaila love varala enna vitidu ipdi sollitan :'(
Rithi: Aarani nan enna solren nu oru 2min kepiya? Illaya ???
Aarani: Sollunga ka :(
Rithi: Karthik oda friend nan avana chinna vayasula irunthu pakuren
Avana pathi unaku innum sila vishayam puriyala athu than intha misudrstndg ku karanam
Avanuku avan unna love panratha velikata theriyala Aarani athu than avanoda love a unarave illa avan
Avanukula oru thayakkam life la ipo than oru step munnerirukan avanoda kanavugala avan mathikuran athuku matume  ipothaiku importance kudukanum nu nenaikuran
Aarani:  Athukaga love sonna ponnu kita apdi than pesuvangala
Rithi: Avan pesunathu thappu than but ipo avan purinjukitan :D
Aarani:  Enna solringa :o
Rithi: Aama antha loosu paya unnaya love panran ;D
Aarani:  >:(
Rithi: Yamma moraikatha unga hero sir unna love panran( avalum Karthik um pesunatha Aarani kita solra)
Rithi: Ipoyachum siri :D
Aarani:  Nan sirikirathu irukatum enaya azha vitu pathan la athuku punishment undu ;D
Rithi: ::) (iva enamo plan panita namala korthu vida munnadi scape aayira vendiyathu than)
Aarani:  Rithi akka apdi ellam s aava mudiyathu ;D
Rithi::o Aarani
Aarani:  Unga mind vc inga vara kekuthu ;D
Rithi: Aarani un bothaiku nan oorugaya aala vidu ma thaye :-\
Aarani:  Rithi ka apo neenga unga frnd ku than support la ena azhavitu pathathula ungaluku entha varuthamum illa la :(
Rithi: Sabba nee vera pesi savadikatha nee enamo mind la vachiruka atha apdiye sollu ???
Aarani:  Enaku accident nu solli oru drama pananum :D
Rithi: Enathu  :o
Aarani:  Aama unga frnd Suba akka kita pesi enaku help panunga :)
Avanga hospitalaye intha drama vachikalam
Rithi: Ithu avanuku therinjithu enaya antha hospitalaye adichu admit pana vachiduvane ::)
Athu matum illa intha Suba ennaya kaluvi kaluvi uthuva ipdi oru help panunu keta ::)
Aarani:  Pls Rithi ka intha oru help matum pls unga thangachi love kaga seya matingala :(
Rithi: Aana una sendimenta pesiye aapu vainga wait nan Subi kita pesi pakuren  :-\
(Rithika Dr.Suba ku call pananga)
Subi: Dr.Suba here
Rithi: Chllm nan yar nu sollu papom ;D
Subi: Enaku therinju enaya chllm nu kupdra ore oru eruma than enaku therium athu kuda kariyam avanum na than call panum ;D
Rithi: Subi chllm :(
Subi: Adiye ilukama vishayathuku vaa ;D
Rithi: Nan nee epdi irukanu keka than call panen ::)
Subi: Yaru neeya kekurav kenaya iruntha hansika thangachi than Rithika nu solluvadi >:(
Rithi: Chllm ennadi posukunu ipd sollita :o
Subi: Itha vida mellama sollata pinna ;D
Rithi: Subi chllm en nanbi d :D
Subi: Apo enamo aapu ready panita sollu ::)
Rithi: Enakoru help d chllm :-\
Subi: Nenachen saithan cycle la varuthe ennamo irukunu sollu ::) ;D

(Rithika Subi kita ellathayum solli help kekura)

Subi: Adiye enakuthan aapu nu paatha en hospital iluthu mooda idea panuriya :o
Rithi: Apdi ellam illa chllm un chief illatha time ethachum panu d :)
Subi: Antha pakki epo varum ne therilaye ithula nee vera villathanam pana solriye :-\
Mothama enaya anupidum d athu
Rithi: Un frnd ku intha oru help kuda panamatiya :(
Subi: Enaku thiruvodu confirm  ::) sari nan inga ellam visarichitu solli tholaikuren ???
Rithi: En chllm en pattu en bujji ;D :-*
Subi: Ada chi ipdi ellam sonna plan cancel 8)
Rithi: Endi konjunathuke ipdi solra ???
Subi: Nee konjuna adutha time itha vida periya aapa ready panuva  ;D ;D
Rithi: He he he he ;D
Subi: Nan ketitu solren phone a vai :D

(aprm enna ivanga hospital poy Dr.Suba kita thitu vangi aprm ellam arrange pani Karthik ku call pananga)

(Aarani elathayum Karthik kita solli mudicha
)

intha Karthik inum shocklaye nikuraru ;D avaru shock  korayatum next epi potuduran
ipo continue potukuren....... ;D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: ReeNa on May 30, 2017, 09:29:59 AM
Flashback late analum latest  ;D. Story interesting ah iruke sis  :D. Rithi character eneke pidichirke  ;D Karthik matuma shocklaye nikuraru..ippadi sudden ah end pani  :o engalaium shock aki wait pana vechitingle  :'( . waiting for next episode  8)
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: JeSiNa on May 30, 2017, 12:18:03 PM
Stroy Spr chlm... :-* nxt epi epo barum ::) sikiram update panu di maadu >:(
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Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 30, 2017, 01:00:44 PM
Hi bena tnx agn ;D adutha updt itho poduren

Ree ss ;D dank u sis :D neenga read panrathe periya vishayam :D antha rithi character than enakum fav :D inga irukira Rithika desingn la create panen story oda Rithi ya ;D

Jesi chllm :o nee epo aajar aaguna ;D next epi potuduren chllm ;D (intha eruma madu apdingura peru nama degree mathiri engaponalum pinnadiye varuthe  ::))

updt poda poren ;D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on May 30, 2017, 01:30:41 PM
Nenjamellam Kadhal last epi ;D

shock la irukira karthika nan thati elupitan vaanga aduthu enn nadakuthunu paakalam

Aarani: Epdi enga plan :D
Karthik: :-\ (hyoo enaya ipdi kalaichutalungale iva vera ketu ketu savadipale)

(apo kathavu open agura satham ketuthu)

Subi & Rithi: :o (thapana time la entry agitam pola)

(Subi and Rithi oruthara oruthar pathu kitanga Karthik ivanga rendu perayum pathu morachan)

Rithi: ::) (ayo ethachum samali Subi)
Subi: ::) (nee ethachum samali d eruma)
Rithi: Dr ivangala epo discharge panuvinga? ???
Karthik: Unnaya inga admit pana odane >:(
Subi & Rithi: :o
Subi: ICU la ivlo neram enna panringa Karthik? ::)
Karthik: Unga rendu perukum inga pakathu pakathula bed potu admit panitu pogalam nu waiting >:(
Rithi:  :-\ Subi va odiralam(Suba kathukita sona)
Subi: Adiye en velaiku ula vachiduvano :o
Rithi: Unaku athu inum santhegama so sad confirm ;D
Subi:  >:( Uanya eruma oosi pote kollanum (apdi sollikitu pakathula iruntha injection a eduthita)
Rithi: Inga paru no violence ithikellam nee Aarani ku than oosi podnum  :P
Aarani: Enaku illa :o
 ivanuku podunga enna azha vachathu ivanthan athu than ivlo vela pana vendiyatha pochu
Karthik: solluvadi solluva pona pohuthunu pesa vita rmba overa pesura >:(
Aarani: Enada soundu ::)
Karthik: Adiye adichu palla odachiruvan unaku adipatichinu nan bayanthu poy vandiya epdi otitu vanthen theriuma
Kncm miss ayiruntha nan than ICU la irunthirupan apo inum happya kalaichirupala >:(

(Karthik sollum bothu Aarani Karthik ku sema ara kuduthiruntha)

Rithi & Subi: :o
Rithi: ithuga rendum arayirathula spl mudichurukunga pola ???
Subi: ennadi sollura :o
Rithi: Aama d vanthone avan enaya aranjan ipo avane inga Aarani kita vangitu nikuran epdi pathalum en kanaku sariya pochu :D
Subi: Thu santhosa padura matera paru adiye ithuga motha irunthu strt panuthunga d >:(
Rithi: Aama la :o
Subi: hyoo ivala vachikitu :-\

(Karthik shock la ninutu irunthan)

Aarani: Unaku enna patha epdi theriyuthu en character pathi unaku enna therium
Unaku ethum aana nan happya irupena sollra unaya kollanum da >:(
Cha intha 3 yrs la una love panen paru enaya sollanum >:(
Karthik: :o
Subi: adiye enadi sanda perusavuthu :o
Rithi : ithunga sandayavathu perusavurathavathu kncm wait pani paru ipo oruthan epdi katchi maruvan nu ???

(Aarani vegama veliya poha pona but ava kaiya yaro iluthu pudichanga)

Karthik: Sorry d :(
Subi: :o
Rithi: vaaya polakatha nan than sonnen la ithellam apo apo pathu pathu palagiduchu :P
Subi: yarukum frnda irukalam but intha lovers ku frnda irukave kudathu :o
Rithi: crctu chllm ;D
Subi: lovers frnd oda frndavum iruka kudathu ::)
Rithi: adding enayave sollu velila va kalla vitu adikuran >:(
Subi: en swt hrt apdi ellam panapadathu :-*
Rithi: athu 8)

Sabba ivanga vera edaila :D love birds a parungaya

Aarani : kaiya viduda thadi maadu >:(
Karthik: Athan sry solrenla pls d 3yrs aa maamava urugi urugi love paniya chllm :-[
Aarani: Un srya thooki un thalaila podu >:(
Karthik: En chllm la :D
Aarani: Illa ::)
Rithi & Subi : ada cha niruthungaya >:(
Aarani & Karthik: :o
Rithi: kolantha pullaingala vida unga alapara thangala :-\
Subi: unga time mudinchiruchu ini velila poy sanda podunga >:(
En chief vera vanthidum
Rithi: crctu chellm ;D rendu perum mariyathaya odi poirunga >:(
Subi: enathu odipogatuma :o
Rithi: ada chi velila ponganu sonnen d karumam ::)
Subi: oh apdi sonniya :D
Aarani & Karthik: nee va chllm nama velila polam :D
Rithi: ithula matum ushaara irungaya rendu perum ;D
Ok Subi chllm nanum kelamburen tnx chllm ;D
Subi: chi ethuku tnx lam sollikitu adutha thadava epdium ithe mathiri vanthu nikathane pora :P
Rithi: en chllm enaya crcta purinju vachiruku:D
Subi: en thalai eluthula athan :-[
Aarani: thanks Subi ka and Rithi ka :D
Subi ka sry ungaluku rmba torture kudithuten la
Subi: nee vera ma iva itha vida perusave kuduthiruka nee jujubi than :D
Rithi: aama Aarani evlo adichalum Subi thanguva ene na ava romba nallava ;D
Karthik: tnx Rithi and Suba :D
Rithi: un 32 pallayum katunathu pothum kelambu kelambu >:(
Karthik: Endi thorathura ???
Rithi: Enna adi adicha eruma? Oru sry ketiya mnky mandaya  >:(
Karthik: Sry Rithi nee sonathum kncm tension agi adichuten d :(
Aarani: athu enna soundu ICU vara ketiche ;D
Aaru ethi vidatha aprm murunga marathula irunthu eranga mata :D
Karthik: Aamanda ipo nan vethaalama >:(
Subi: vethalatha kevala paduthathinga Karthik athu thala movie
Iva oru tharuthala ;D
Rithi: Ading ivale unaya 8)
Karthik: Aaru ma nama kelambuvoma ;D
Aarani: athuku ene nee ipo ipdi veka padura :o
Karthik: Illama inga nam rmce ku ore kootama irukula ;D
Subi: apo nama than karadygala Rithi ???
Rithi: dei karady mandaya nanga rendu perum unaku kootama >:(  Konnuduvan >:(
Karthik: Pinna illaya lovers a thaniya vititu povingala ingaye ninutu iruntha ::)
Subi: Adapaavigala ithu enna park aa mariyathaya 3 perum odidunga >:(
Karthik: Ha ha ha ok Suba nanga kelamburom c u soon :)
Subi: Ok Karthik and Aarani ungaluku en vazhthukkal ckrm invitation anupunga :D
Aarani: Kandipa Subi ka :D
Rithi: tnx Subi chllm ivlo periya risk eduthuruka un chief vanthiruntha nee matirupa :D
Subi: risku ellam enaku rusku Rithi chllm 8)
Rithi: apdina inoru help yosikuren ::)
Subi: yamma thaye aala vidu nan kelamburen poytu call panunga :-\ ;D
Karthik: Ok Suba bye :)

(Suba kelambunathum ivanga moonu perum kelambi veliya vanthutanga)

Rithi: ok nanum veeta kelamburan :D
Karthik: Enga odura veeta vanthitu po
Rithi: Ethuku anga yaru kaala vizha vaika plan panura ::)
Karthik: He he he ;D
Rithi: Aala viduda :o
Aarani: Akka neenga veeta vanga athu kedakuthu dubakur ;D
Karthik: Dubakura :o
Rithi: Aama da satti mandaya :P
Karthik: Me silent u come aana oru doubtu veeta enna solrathu ::)
Aarani: Nee thane solla pora ethachum solli samathika vai ;D
Karhik: Enathu naana :o
Rithi: Aama ;D
Karthik: Rithi ???
Rithi: Enaya pakatha nan intha aatathuku varala nan veetaye poran :-[
Karthik: Ipdi nanbana ambonu vitu poriye :-\
Rithi: :D sethan sekaru
Karthik: Endi sirikura
Rithi: Aarani nee outu :D
Karthik: Ennadi outu :o
Rithi: Aarani sonna nee thairiyama veeta pesuva nu nan sonnen illa nee baypduvanu athan 1000rs bet
Karthik: :o (adipaavigala enaya vachu bet kati veladirukalugale ithu theriyama nama vera aajar agitome) :o
Aarani: vaay kiliya pesa therium aana veeta pesa sonna pathungidu
Karthik: (ithan chance nu kanna pinnanu kathuvale) sry Aaru ma
Aarani: Adei
Karhik: en nelama ipdi matitu mulikurene
Aarani: he he he :D
Karthik: Enna sirikura
Aarani: Nan already appa kita sollitan
Karthik: Ennathu :o
Rithi: Cha ivan oruthan dei shocka kora
Karthik: Theliva sollu
Aarani: Nan appa kita pesitan :D veeta ellarum ok sollitanga
Karthik: Ithu eppo :o
Rithi: Dei Eee poidum vaaya cls panu :D
Karthik: Apo success
Aarani: Ha ha amada ;D
Rithi: Seri ellarum pathitu irupanga kelambalam
Karthik: Rithi epdi ponalum ellam kalaipanga d
Rithi: Athuku ???
Karthik: Nee munnadi po
Rithi: Oh neenga bike la vara enaya thorathuringala :D
Karthik: Cha cha apdi illana nee nambuviya ::)
Rithi: Sathiyama illada athuvum nee solli kandipa illa ;D
Karthik: Apo kelambu kaathu varatum ::)
Rithi: Athu sari Aarani ivan aalu oru mathiri paathu jakratha ;D
Karthik: Adding pure gold d nan >:(
Rithi: Nee than mechikanum ckrm vanthu serunga ennaya thaniya maati vitudathingada ;D

(Rithi bike eduthutu kelambita)

Karthik: Enna polama?
Aarani: Illa na kepiya :D
Karthik: Illa :P
Aarani: Aprm enna polam :D
Karthik: (ithuvaraikum evlo time rendu perum bike la poyirukom but ipo rmba vithyasamana feel enakula nan love panra ponnu nan kalyanam panika porava iva)
Aarani: (intha loosu kuda evlo time bike la pohum pothu enakula rmba happya irukum inaiku rmba uneasya iruku ene na ipo ivan manasulayum kadhal iruku athu enaku rmba puthusa iruku)
Aarani: Dei nillu
Karthik: Enna d
Aarani: Bike a nipatu
(avan bike a orama nipati enanu ketan)
Aarani: Ivlo naal la oru naal un bike la vantha enna nee thirumbi enna side kannadi la kuda pathathu illa ipo matum enna side kannadi thavira ethuvume un kannula theriyala pola ???
Karthik: Athu pona masam ithu intha masam :D
Aarani: Enna da
Karthik: Aama pona masam nee en akka oda ponnu matum than but intha masam nan kalayanam panika pora ponnu ::)
Aarani: Hyoo jollu vidurane :-[
Karthik: Adiye rmnce d >:(
Aarani: Ithuthan rmnce aa :D nan bayanthutan
Karthik: Podi  :(
Aarani::D
Karthik: Sry d unna rmba hurt paniten la  :( rmba azhuthirupa nu theriyuthu sry d
Aarani: Vidu vidu past is past :)
Karthik: Ene d unau enna pudichiruku? ::)
Aarani: Ipdi keta enna solla enaku solla therila
Life la oruthar kuda nama happya irupom apdi life long yaru kuda nan irupan na yosikama un peru solla thonuthu athan sollitan love a ;D
Aarani: :D
Karthik: Nan rmba lucky d ;D
Aarani: Apdiya sir epdi athu ::)
Karthik: Nama nesikiravangala vida namala nesikiravanga kedaikura ellarum lucky Karthik: so nanum lucky :D
Aarani: Sabba dei inum 19th centuary la irunthu velila varalaya nee ???
Karthik: Evlo feeling la pesuran cha ipdi kekuriye :(
Aarani: Enna peelingam peelingu >:(
Karthik: Ipdi niruthi vachu enna thitrahuku veetave polam :(
Aarani: Moonji ene konuthu ;D

(Karthik thalaya matha side thirupikitan)

Aarani: Adei :D
Karthik: Po angitu >:(
Aarani: Poiduvan da ???
Karthik: Po d po >:(
Aarani: Nan poren >:( (ava thirumbi poha ponapo Karthik ava kaiya pudichukitan)


(Rithi inga irunthirutha enna sollirupa :D Rithi mv: cha cha cha aana una kaiya pudichi rmnce panrathe ivanga velaya pochu  ithellam pathum en kannu pohama irukuthe) athe nelama than namakum ;D

(Karthik Aarani oruthara oruthar pathukitu nikuranga)

Karthik: inime enna vititu engayum pohatha :-\
Aarani: unna oru time vititu poy rmba kashta patuten da ini kandipa poha maten :D
Karthik: sry d luv u so much d ;D
Aarani:  (ava azhagana kathala solra mathiri Karthik nethiyila oru kiss kudutha)
Karthik: Aaru ma :P
Aarani: Dei enada oru mathiri vekam lam padura :o
Karthik: Therilaye :P
Aarani: Rithi ka sonna mathiri oru margama than iruka ::)
Karthik: Hey ava anga poy ara mani neram irukum la :o
Aarani: Aama da ???
Karthik: Inaiku kolla pora  :D maama vera nee enga nan enga nu thuruvi thuruvi keparu ;D
Aarani: Dei pavam da avanga :(
Karthik: Aama d ava enaku puriya vaikalana nan unna miss panirupen :D
Aarani: Rithi ka mathiri oru frnd kedaika nee punniyam panirukanum ;D
Karthik: Paaruda ::)
Aarani: Paathathellam pothum kelambalam :D
Karthik: Sari vaa ;)

(Karthik bike start pana Aarani eri iruntha Karthik odane side mirror valiya Aaraniya pathan)

Aarani: Dei kncm raodayum pathu otuda illa nejamave rendu perukum Subi ka ICU ready pana vendiyatha irukum ;D
Karthik: Ha ha ha :D life long intha journey thodarum athula ini nan matum illa neeyum irupa d ;)
Aarani: Aamada maama ;D (apdiye Karthik kalutha katikita)


"Nenjamellam kadhal kondu
Kathirunthavale
Unthan anbenum mazhayil
Nanaintha pinbe
Kadhalin mugavari kandu konden
Kai korthu naam vazhum vazhvile
En aayul mudintha pinnum
Ennul endrum nirainthirupaay
Neeyadi"


inum enna pakuringa story mudinchu avanga kelambi 1hr aachu :D avanga velaya paka avanga poytanga ;D thank u frnds for reading this story :D c u all soon :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: KrisH on May 30, 2017, 01:50:15 PM
story overu.....superu 8) 8) 8)
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: ReeNa on May 30, 2017, 02:15:46 PM
baby ma story super....made me smile. :)

oru chinna confusion...shock la irukira karthika :o..engaiyo keta mari iruke  ;D

inum enna pakuringa story mudinchu  :o avanga kelambi 1hr aachu  :'(

next story ke waiting vipz. 8) 
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: ரித்திகா on May 30, 2017, 02:52:12 PM
Aiyooo purthi .....Kathaiye padichi mudichi 10 mins aaguthu.....still
im keep laughing ...mudiyale d.....
semma po...enga iruntha ithana naal ....super ah eluthiruka....
chance eh illa....
intha kathaile nanum oru character sollumbothu
gethaathaan irunthathu....aana apo apo
comedy piece aakita...irunthaalum paravale chellam...
friendshiple ithalaam jagajamappa... ;D ;D ;D
 But antha friendship making me jealous... :) real life le
karthick maari n namba chella kutty Subu baby maari
friends illanaalum...reel life le nee eluthune story mulam...
romba happy da me....but purthi nerle naa irunta
ithavida athigamave subu kuttye konjiruppen...hahahaha...
...epdiyo comedy piece ahvum oru
nalla thozhiyaavum nanbanudaya kaadhale serthu vechachi....apdiye
rithiyode friendship pugalayum paaditta...ithuku mella enna venam....
apdiye rekka katti parakure maari irukuthu ;D ;D ;D ;D
enna ore oru feeling .......intha intha rithi pillai
than manam kavarntha manavaalen illame poitaan .... :'( :'(
athu mattum than purthi ...note my words baby ... next story
rithi manam kavarntha ...manavalen ..romba ellam venam
my darling SURYA maari iruntha pothum da...rmba ella aasai pada matten ;D ;D ;D
real le ketta Jyo aruvaale thukkitu vanthuruvanga... ;D ;D ;D
athaan reel le ketkuren ...hehehehehe...

To Reenzz baby...baby ma ..neenga rithiye pidikila sonnathaan
athisayam....coz coz coz baby i knew ...i like me so much ...
n i too love u so much ;)

~ !! Hi Purthi , Im Rithika !! ~
~ !! Naa Ithu naa solliye aaganum Purthi !! ~
~ !! Un story athu avlo azhaga !! ~
~ !! Inka Yevanum Ivvalo Azhakaa Oru..
~ !! Ivvalo Azhaga Paarthirukka Maattaanga..
~ !! And I am In Love With You n Ur Story ..!! ~
~ !! Munthinam Paarthene Parthathum Padithene !! ~
~ !! Purthiyin Kathaiyaale Nenjamum Ponn aanathe !! ~ ;) ;) ;)

  ;) ;) ;) awesome Da ...keep writing....
inum inum neraya eluthanum ....n im eagerly
waiting for read ur next story....


Hello excuse me ...Purthi Madam...
 enna inum bentha bentha mulichittu iruka...
 go go run run ....sattu buttunu ...next Story
 yosichi Update pannuma...waiting listle enaiyum serthu neraya
 per irukangada...!!!! ;D ;D ;) ;)
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: JeSiNa on May 30, 2017, 03:35:30 PM
 
Chlm :) stry sprr chlm adi thool ;D ithe maari neraiya stryz elutha vazhthugal :-*
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: MyNa on May 31, 2017, 09:23:32 AM
Vanakam sis.. Story superb :D
aana sikiram mudinjiduchunu oru chinna feelings ::)
starting la irunthu comedy romance friendship nu ellame semmaiya iruku unga story la :)
congrats sis.. waiting for ur next story..
keep writting ;).
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: SaNviYa on June 01, 2017, 10:15:39 PM
Hi vipu ma story awesome,fabulous,fantastic,nice,cute,semma ivlo days ah enga iruntha seekirama nxt story poduma and oru small request nxt story la enaku guest roll kidaikuma unoda 2 stories um nallarunthuchi da nxt story length ah podu da
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on June 01, 2017, 10:58:16 PM
baby ma story super....made me smile. :)

oru chinna confusion...shock la irukira karthika :o..engaiyo keta mari iruke  ;D

inum enna pakuringa story mudinchu  :o avanga kelambi 1hr aachu  :'(

next story ke waiting vipz. 8) 


Ree ss tnx for reading :D actually nama chat la pathurupinga :P next sory thane potiruvom ::)  ;D tnx agn sis  :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on June 01, 2017, 11:01:08 PM
Aiyooo purthi .....Kathaiye padichi mudichi 10 mins aaguthu.....still
im keep laughing ...mudiyale d.....
semma po...enga iruntha ithana naal ....super ah eluthiruka....
chance eh illa....
intha kathaile nanum oru character sollumbothu
gethaathaan irunthathu....aana apo apo
comedy piece aakita...irunthaalum paravale chellam...
friendshiple ithalaam jagajamappa... ;D ;D ;D
 But antha friendship making me jealous... :) real life le
karthick maari n namba chella kutty Subu baby maari
friends illanaalum...reel life le nee eluthune story mulam...
romba happy da me....but purthi nerle naa irunta
ithavida athigamave subu kuttye konjiruppen...hahahaha...
...epdiyo comedy piece ahvum oru
nalla thozhiyaavum nanbanudaya kaadhale serthu vechachi....apdiye
rithiyode friendship pugalayum paaditta...ithuku mella enna venam....
apdiye rekka katti parakure maari irukuthu ;D ;D ;D ;D
enna ore oru feeling .......intha intha rithi pillai
than manam kavarntha manavaalen illame poitaan .... :'( :'(
athu mattum than purthi ...note my words baby ... next story
rithi manam kavarntha ...manavalen ..romba ellam venam
my darling SURYA maari iruntha pothum da...rmba ella aasai pada matten ;D ;D ;D
real le ketta Jyo aruvaale thukkitu vanthuruvanga... ;D ;D ;D
athaan reel le ketkuren ...hehehehehe...

To Reenzz baby...baby ma ..neenga rithiye pidikila sonnathaan
athisayam....coz coz coz baby i knew ...i like me so much ...
n i too love u so much ;)

~ !! Hi Purthi , Im Rithika !! ~
~ !! Naa Ithu naa solliye aaganum Purthi !! ~
~ !! Un story athu avlo azhaga !! ~
~ !! Inka Yevanum Ivvalo Azhakaa Oru..
~ !! Ivvalo Azhaga Paarthirukka Maattaanga..
~ !! And I am In Love With You n Ur Story ..!! ~
~ !! Munthinam Paarthene Parthathum Padithene !! ~
~ !! Purthiyin Kathaiyaale Nenjamum Ponn aanathe !! ~ ;) ;) ;)

  ;) ;) ;) awesome Da ...keep writing....
inum inum neraya eluthanum ....n im eagerly
waiting for read ur next story....


Hello excuse me ...Purthi Madam...
 enna inum bentha bentha mulichittu iruka...
 go go run run ....sattu buttunu ...next Story
 yosichi Update pannuma...waiting listle enaiyum serthu neraya
 per irukangada...!!!! ;D ;D ;) ;)

Rithi ma ;D :o nee en story ke mini story cmnt panirukiya ;D tnx chellam ;D next story thane vachi senjiduran  ;D surya thane benum kondu varuvim wait panu ;D tnx da :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on June 01, 2017, 11:03:34 PM
 
Chlm :) stry sprr chlm adi thool ;D ithe maari neraiya stryz elutha vazhthugal :-*

Jesi chllm :-* adutha story ku baliaadu search panren :D ipo than neeyum vanthutiye eluthiduvan :P wait panu :D tnx chllm
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on June 01, 2017, 11:06:46 PM
Vanakam sis.. Story superb :D
aana sikiram mudinjiduchunu oru chinna feelings ::)
starting la irunthu comedy romance friendship nu ellame semmaiya iruku unga story la :)
congrats sis.. waiting for ur next story..
keep writting ;).


Myna ss tnx for reading ;D sis short story na shorta than mudiyanum :D next story thane eluthiduvom ::) tnx sis agn :D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on June 01, 2017, 11:10:06 PM
Hi vipu ma story awesome,fabulous,fantastic,nice,cute,semma ivlo days ah enga iruntha seekirama nxt story poduma and oru small request nxt story la enaku guest roll kidaikuma unoda 2 stories um nallarunthuchi da nxt story length ah podu da

Sanvi ss ;D happy to meet u agn :D ivlo naal inga than suthitu irunthan :P guest roll ethuku main rolle kudukalam ;D wait panunga poturuven ;D tnx for reading ss
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: JeSiNa on June 02, 2017, 12:57:51 AM
machi ne yosikurathukulla na senchi mudichiruven 8)
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: SaNviYa on June 12, 2017, 12:45:40 PM
Thank u vipu darl and last antha song entha movie la varum 
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: VipurThi on June 12, 2017, 01:16:02 PM
Hi sanvi ss ;D athu movie song illa :D enoda kavithai ;D
Title: Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
Post by: SaNviYa on June 12, 2017, 02:47:06 PM
Wow vipu sema kavithai