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!!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« on: May 25, 2017, 01:11:22 PM »
                                     
                                       


Aaranya(Aarani): Maaaaamaaaa :)
Karthik: ingayum vanthutale  :(
Aaranya: dai maams ene da odi oliyura? ???
Karthik: Mohiniya kanda odi oliyama sirichukite welcome panuvangala? :o
Aaranya: Apo nan avlo azhagunu solriya? ;D
Karthik: (Adada iva epdi ball potalum six adikurale) :o
Aaranya: Solluda maams ;D
Karthik: Aarani unaku oru thadava sonna puriyatha? Ene ipdi torture panra? Cha >:(
Aaranya: Apo unaku enna nejameve pidikalaya? :-\ Illa veeta enna solluvanganu bayapaduriya? :'(
Karthik: Enaku yarukum bayam illa ok enaku un mela love illa avlo than
Aaranya: So ithu than un mudiva? :-[
Karthik: Aama Aarani ::)
Aaranya: Ok ivlo naalum ungala kashtapaduthunathuku oru sry :-[  oru ponnu vanthu propose panurale nu enna neenga kevalama nenachiruntha kandipa u will feel for it :(
Karthik: Aarani apdi…
Aaranya: Thayavu senju pesa venam nan kelamburen :(
Karthik: Nan solratha…..
Aaranya: I said stop it ok  >:(
(Aaranya vegama anga irunthu kelambi poita)

Karthik: Iva oruthi cha  >:(
Rithika: Ada paavi nee ellam oru manushana :o
Karthik: Neeya? Nee enna panura inga? ::)
Rithi: Naa enna panuna unakenna da eruma maadu >:(
Karthik: Athu sari apo nan kelamburen >:(
Rithi: Adei nilluda paavam da aarani ???
Karthik: Adiye nee enaku frnda illa avaluku frnda? >:(
Rithi: Ithula unaku oru doubtu vera ::)   koduma sir ithu >:(
Karthik: Pinna irukatha? :D
Rithi: Aama avala ene venam nu sollura :(
Karthik: Love varanum la :(
Rithi: Apo ava mela unaku love illa apdi thane? ::)
Karthik: Aama 8)
Rithi: Ada erumaye >:(  nee ellam uruptu sabba mudila da :-X
Karthik: Ene d?
Rithi: Nan oru question kekava?
Karthik: Kekathana vidava pora kelu :P
Rithi: Annaiku unga veetuku unga maama oda frndu paiyan vanthirunthan la :)
Karthik: Aama nee ene d avana kekura :o
Rithi: Ada cha erumaye un buthi pohuthu paaru >:(
Karthik: Sari vidu vidu :)
Rithi: Avan anga aarani kita pesitu irunthan la apo nee ene tension aa iruntha ::)
Karthik: Athu avan yarnu munna pinna theriyathu la aprm ava pesum pothu nan careful aa irunthen ::)
Rithi: Ava amma appa ku illatha akkara unaku ene da? :-[
Karthik: Athu nan ava maama la :)
Rithi: Maamava irunthu kilichitalum >:(
Karthik: Ene d :o
Rithi: Unaku antha paiyan mela rmba porama vanthuchula ;D
Karthik: Illa ye rmba illa but lighta
Rithi: He he he
Karthik: Sirikatha d
Rithi: Ithuku peru than possessive aa irukurathu da tube lighte
Karthik:????
Rithi: Mulikatha kanna nondiruven ava mela unaku irunthathu paasam plus love da dubakur mandaya?
Karthik: Apdiya d?
Rithi: Enna nopdiya d?  athan avala thiti anupitiye aprm unaku love vantha enna pona enna putukita enakenna?
Karthik: Enna d ipdi solra?
Rithi: Vera epdi eruma sollanum? Paavam  rmba azhuthukite poita
Karthik: Adiye enaku help panu d?
Rithi:  Help aa serruppu >:( odiru ponnungana unga ishtathuku pesuvinga aprm helpu gulpu nu vantha naanga seyanuma poda poda 8)
Adi paavi nan epadi ipdi ellam pesunen? :o
Rithi: Nee pesalanalum nee panunathuku ithu than meaning >:(
Karthik: Pls d enaku enna panurathune puriyala help d ava mela love nu enaku sariya puriyala d  nee solrapo than enaku aaru pathi thinking varuthu ::)
Rithi: Sari sari polambatha mothala unga veetuku polam vaa anga pona than enna nadakuthunu therium ???
Karthik: Vaa vaa  ::)

(In Karthik’s Home)

Aarani Appa: Ene ma azhura? :(
Aarani: Onnum illa pa :'(
A.A: Nanum un vayasa kadanthu vanthavan than naan avasarapatu chinna vayasula un ammava kalyanam pani ava padipa naasamakiten  athu nala ava ipo evlo kashta paduranu paaru aana en ponnu  life la suyama ella mudivum edukanum nu than unna nalla padika vachen
En ponnu ipdi azhura alavuku entha thappum pana mata  enna achunu solluma :'(
Aarani: Appa  :'(
A.Appa: Azhathada thangam enna achunu sollu appa kita :(
Aarani: Appa karthik maama enna venam nu sollitan pa :'(
A.Appa: Karthik unna venam nu sollitana? :o Apo nee karthik a than virumbuniya? :o
Aarani: Aama pa :-[
A.Appa: Varatum avan kita enna kekuren nu paaru >:(
Aaru ma nithanama yosichu mudivu eduma avasarathula edukura mudivu ellam vethanai ya matum than tharum ma
Aarani: Illa pa nan mudivu eduthitan next week kula nama kelambalam :'(
A.Appa: Un ishtam ma appa epavum un kuda irupen :)
Aarani: Thanx pa :-[
A.Appa: Appa kita enna ma thanx nee azhathada :)
Aarani: sari pa :)

continue panalamaa.......... ::)



(intha Aarani, karthik, rithika ivangalam yarunu theriyanum na next epi la solren :D nan next epi la sollanum na cmnt nallatha varanum ::) cmnt varalana nan unga time a athuku mela waste pana vida maten :D ene naa nanum elutha maten ;D)   C u all soon in Next epi ;D (vithi irunthaal :P)
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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #1 on: May 25, 2017, 04:18:08 PM »
Vipu story super da keep writing ipdiye  continue pannu I'm always support😁💞💝💝👌👌👏

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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #2 on: May 26, 2017, 08:25:31 AM »
Hi Sanvi Sis :D very happy to hear ur cmnt :D neenga oruthavangalavathu cmnt potingale ;D adutha epi thane potuta pochu :D


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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #3 on: May 26, 2017, 08:55:15 AM »
Nenjamellam Kadhal Epi 2 ;D.....

(Karthik and Rithi Karthik oda veetuku vanthanga)

Rithi: Adei sothapidama nadanthuka ::)
Karthik: Engaluku therium 8)
Rithi: Oh theriuma apo nan kelamburan nee pesiko >:(
Karthik: Adiyei ambo nu vitutu pohama irudi :o
Rithi: Vaayku matum korachal illa. Unga maama vararu :D
A.Appa: Vaa Karthik vaama Rithi ene angaye nikuringa ulla vanga :D
Kaarthik enakoru help panuda nanga ooruku kelambanum ticket book panidu da
Karthik: Enna maama thidir nu :o
A.Appa: Inum 2week leave iruke ipo thidir nu kelamburinganu solringa :(
Karthik: Rithi enna pathutu nikura sollu d :-[
Rithi: Dei uncle ku enna velayo therila ethum urgenta irukalam la :)
Karthik: :o (adipaavi aapu vaikura time aa d ithu en vazhka prachana d)
Aarani: Appa :)
A.Appa: Solluda ma
Aarani: Appa kncm purchasing iruku pa velila pohanum hi Rithi ka
Epdi irukinga? Paathu rmba naal achu (Karthik a morachukitu sonna)
Rithi: Nan nallaruken ma nee epdi iruka? Work ellam epdi pohuthu?
Aarani: Good ka work also good :)
A.Appa: Aarani ma unaku inga place ellam avlo palakam illa nan Arjun a kuptu viduren avan kuda poitu vaa :)
Karthik: :o (hyoo namaku ethirave ellam kelamburangale) Arjun aa ::)
A.Appa: Aama Karthik ene kekura ???
Karthik: Illa maama arjun ku ene kashtam kuduthikitu  Rithi freeya than iruka ava kutitu pohatum :D
Rithi: :o (adapaavi un aaluku nan bodyguard aa en thalai eluthu irudi mavane nee matikita >:( :P) ya Aarani nee en kuda va nama polam ;D
Karthik: ??? (enna iva no nee Karthik kuda po nu soluvanu paatha ivale aajar avura oru vela nama vishayama than pesa poralo kadavule ::))
Aarani: Illa Rithi ka ungalauku ene shramam :)
Rithi: Aarani apdi ellam illa enakum kncm shopping pananum
So vaa polam :D
Aarani: Ok pa nanga kelamburom :)

(Rithika and Aarani kelambi poitanga)

A.Appa: Karthik marakama ticket book panidu enga moonu perukum :)
Karthik: Sari maama :)(ipo enna panurathu Aaru en moonja pathu kuda pesala ivala epdi cool pani love solli ipove kanna katuthe :-[)


Yarunga ivanga ellam??? Oru kutty kathai solren kelunga

Aarani amma ku oru akka oru thambi. Akka London la settled. Avanga kalyanam mudinja aprm intha family oda urave vitu pochu. Aarani amma 16 vayasulaye 20 vayasu Aarani appa va love pani marriage panikitanga( ithu illegal nalum village side la ipo vara ipdi nadanthukitu than irukuthu) kadhal mela iruntha aarvathula padipu pochu. Aarani ammaku kadasi thambi than Karthik. avangaluku kalayanam nadakum bothu Karthik ku 6 vayasu.
Aarani oda paatiku Aarani amma mela iruntha kobam lam adutha varsham Aarani porantha odane kaanama pochu
Aarani oda appa rmba porupa nadanthukitathaala Aarani paati veetulaye oru kudumbama irunthanga
Aarani valarum bothu oru frnda therinjan Karthik.  Aarani appa transfer la vera ooruku  mari pohum bothu Karthik a vitu pirinju pona Aarani.
19 varusham kuda irunthavana vititu vanthapo than ava Karthik a evlo miss panranu therinjukita athuve aprom love aa maridichi
But padipa mudichitu than Karthik kita sollanum nu wait pana. Nenacha mathiri padipa mudichi Karthik kita propose pana
But Karthik apo than work la join panirunthan. life la ethuvume inum saathikala nu oru varutham athoda kudave valanthava love nu solli vanthu nikura ithelam yosichu avan Aarani love a ethukama reject panan . but Aarani vidama avana suthikite vantha
inaiku ithuku mudivu katiyaganum nu Aarani ketapo than ivlo nadanthu Aarani ooruku kelambura vara kondu vanthu vitiruku
( ;D ;Dhe he he rmba rmba kutti katha la)

Ipdiye flash back pona ennaya  Karthik mobile ringtone present ku kondu vanthuchi


Karthik: iva enna kupdra Aaru kita pesirupalao. hey solludi :(
Rithi: kaarthik (ava voice lita azhura mathiri irunthichi) odane kelambi GH vaa :'(
Karthik: hey enachu d >:(
Rithi: enaku onnum illa Aarani ku.. :-[
Karthik: hey enachu Aaru ku Rithi.. :o
Rithi: pathatapadatha veeta onnum sollatha odane kelambi va tension avama :-[
Karthik: odane varen d  :(

(bike eduthutu kelambunen but mind fulla Aaru pathiye than thinking avaluku ethu aaha kudathunu pray pani kite vandi otunan 20 min la GH vanthutan)

(Rithi GH entrance la ninna)

Karthik: Rithi Aaru enga d :-[ (Rithi kan ellam kalangi irunthichu)
Rithi: Kaarthik tension aahatha Aarani in I.C.U :'(
Karthik: Rithi hey enachu d avaluku solli thola d :o
Rithi: Nanum Aaraniyum shopping mudichitu varum bothu bike accident agi car onnu avala mothiduchida :'((itha solli mudikum bothu Karthik Rithiya aranjutan)
Karthik: Eruma bike paathu ota matiya >:((Karthik kural azha start panichu) Aaru ku matum ethum aavatum unaya :'((kovama pesitu I.C.U noki ponanan)
(Rithi I.C.U kita pohum bothu thalaila kai vacha mathiri Karthik chair la irunthan. ava Karthik kita pona)

Rithi: Karthik Aaraniku onnum aavathuda :-[
Karthik: Avaluku matum ethum aachi unnaya :'( (avan kai mushti ellam irugiduchi)
Rithi: (adipaavi Aarani :o ivan character therinjum ennaya ithula korthu vitu vedika paakuriye  :-[ivanuku nama dagalati vela therinjithu ::) ohh myy gaad intha lovers pisasugalta irunthu enaya kaapathu :'()


Apdi ivanga dagalti vela ennava irukum? ::) ;D continue panikalam :P......
Athu ennanu Cmnt pathutu solluren :P ;D


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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #4 on: May 26, 2017, 09:49:49 AM »
Hi vips

Apdi ivanga dagalti vela ennava irukum? ::)
 Rithi semma act pani...  Aarani and Karthik ah serthe vekiranga ;D

Karthik Rithiya aranjutan  :o....pavam rithi :'(   
(karthik, Aarani ya love panrane proof panratheke avanga pana thiyagam :P )
 
ohh myy gaad intha lovers pisasugalta irunthu enaya kaapathu
vipu sis neenga matum dhan kapatha mudium ;D

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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #5 on: May 26, 2017, 01:25:30 PM »
Vipurthi :D story superb sis..
Tom and jerry mathiri ivanga love mothal ah thodangiruku.. mothal la aarambichu nalla padiya mudinja happy.. Adutha part ku waiting ;) keep writting sis :D

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« Reply #6 on: May 26, 2017, 04:04:38 PM »
Hi vips

Apdi ivanga dagalti vela ennava irukum? ::)
 Rithi semma act pani...  Aarani and Karthik ah serthe vekiranga ;D

Karthik Rithiya aranjutan  :o....pavam rithi :'(   
(karthik, Aarani ya love panrane proof panratheke avanga pana thiyagam :P )
 
ohh myy gaad intha lovers pisasugalta irunthu enaya kaapathu
vipu sis neenga matum dhan kapatha mudium ;D

Hi ree sis tnx for reading this story ;D Rithi than kaipulla :D lovers edayila siki sinna pinnama pora frnds ellarukum Rithi nelama than :D next epi on the way :D

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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #7 on: May 26, 2017, 04:20:49 PM »
Vipurthi :D story superb sis..
Tom and jerry mathiri ivanga love mothal ah thodangiruku.. mothal la aarambichu nalla padiya mudinja happy.. Adutha part ku waiting ;) keep writting sis :D


Hi Myna sis :D dank u sis :D nalla padiya mudichidalam :D enaku sogam pudikathu :D ivanga tom and jerry na naduvula matitu irkira ellarum yaru sis ;D next epi is on the way sis :D

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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #8 on: May 27, 2017, 10:28:53 AM »
Nenjamellam Kadhal epi 3.... ;D

(after 2hrs doctor I.C.U la irunthu velila varanga) Intha Dr. yarunu avanga per pathu mudinja guess  panikonga)

Rithika: Karthik Dr varangada :-[
Karthik: Dr ipo Aaru ku epdi iruku? :'(
Dr.Suba(Subi): neenga yaru sir avangaluku? ???
Karthik:  nan ava maama Dr.
Dr.Suba: Sir avanga nelama kncm critical than unconscious aa irukanga :(
Conscious thirumbalana rmba critical agidum so avanga kita pesi 1hr kula conscious ku kondu vara parunga avlo than solla mudium ::) (athu enna 1hr kanakunu avangale aprm solluvanga ;D)
Ini unga kai la than iruku

(Dr solli mudikum bothu Karthik I.C.U kula poyirunthan)

Rithika: Yemma nipatu avan poyi ara mani neram avuthu :P
Subi: En thalai eluthu :o >:(
Rithika: Enna oru performance d chellm ;D
Subi: Goyyale mandaya odachiruvan odiru >:( Nee oruthi pothum en usura vanga :(
Rithika: He he he ;D
Subi: Sirikathadi en chief ku matum ithu therinjichi nee than enaya vachi naalaiku soru podanum :-\ pathuko
Rithika: Subi chllm apdi ellam ethuvum aavathu. Apdi ethum aanalum palaya soru potunalum unaya vachi nan kaapathuran ;D ::)
Subi: Palaya sora eruma odidu :o >:(
Rithika: Subi nee Aarniku pota make up la avan ethum kandupudika matane? ???
Subi: Cha cha antha ponnu vaya thoranthu unmaya sonna matum than kandupudikalam. nan bandage suthura azhakuku intha hospitale adimai :D
Rithika: Apo un velaiku dismiss confirm ::)
Subi: Enadi olarura :o
Rithika: Ulla ponane oruthan avan sema tension party. Ithu ellam dagalti nu kandu pidichan un velaiku ula vaikama vidamatan ;D
Subi: Adipaavi :o krathagi >:( en chief vera 1hr la vanthuruvare antha pakki enna pannumo :( (ithan 1 hr kanaku :D)
Rithika: Aarani avana oru vali panama enthiruchi varamata ;D
Subi: Aandava vazhkaila attend pana kudatha ore call intha erumayoda call nu inaiku enaku puriya vachitiye :-\
Rithika: Va va act pani rmba tired aa irupa canteen polam ;)
Subi: En neram vanthu thola >:( :D


Ulla pona Karthik enna panuraru nu paapom


(ulla Aarani kaiya pudichikitu ukanthu irukaru)

Karthik: Aaru ma ethum pesuda :-[ Kanna thoranthu paruda :'(
Nan ini unna ethuvume solla maten da. Enakum unnaya rmba pidikum da un kita sollanum nu than veeta vanthan. Pls enthirichu paruda
Maama akka kita enna solluvan naan. Enthirichi paruda
Nan unna than love panren unna than kalayanam panuven :'(
Nee enthirikanum nu poi sollalada nan en manasula irukiratha than solluren :'(
Pls da enthirichi pAaruma enna :'( (avan thembi thembi azha start panan)

(lita Aarani ku unarvu vanthu kaiya asacha apo Karthik Aaraniya pathan ava kannu rendulayum thanni oda avana pathu kncm sathamave siricha)

Karthik: Aaruma unakum onnum aavalada nee polachuta da
En Aaruku ethuvum aavala :D (Aaraniya pathukite santhoshama sonnan)
Karthik: Nan odane Dr a kupiduren iruma
Aarani: Dei nillu nillu avangala disturb panatha paavam enaku katu pote avanga uyir poiduchi
Karthik: Aaru
Aarani: Yeah nan than da loosu maama ;D
Karthik: Nee enna sollura :o
Aarani:Accident la adipatu ICU la admit aanava pesura mathiriya iruku unaku  :P
Karthik: Apdina unaku :o
Aarani:Ethuvum avala iam perfectly alright venum na odi adi katava

(Karthik mugam ellam kobama mari Aaru pakathula vanthan)

Aarani:  :o (ayayo kncm overa ketutomo ckrm samali Aaru) enna adika poriya? >:(
Adida paapom nee oru adi adicha nan rendu adiya thirupi tharuvan >:(

(Aarani kita vantha Karthik sudden aa ninutan)

Aarani:  ::)(sabba ninutan illa en kannamum bun agirukum ini thairiyama pesu Aaru :D)
Enna shock aagita ini unaku mariyatha ellam kedayathu >:(
Nan olunga propose panapove ethukitu iruntha paravalla
Nee enaya azha vitu pathathuku ini mariyatha cancel >:(
Karthik: :o
Aarani: Apdi paatha kanna nondiruvan. Enakum accident aanathu unmathan but athu oru scratch matum than
Karthik: :o
Aarani: Nan than rithi ka ta ipdi ellam oru drama pana sonnen
Karthik:  :o (adiye rithi velila vanthu unnaya kolluran iru >:(. Iva over emotion kudukum pothe ushaara irunthirukanum but Dr. epdi sonnanga? ::))
Aarani: Dr.Suba rithi ka oda friend than so avangalayum nanga than othuka vachom ::)
Karthik: (ellam kootu kalavanigala apo hyoo namala nalla emathitalunga) :o
Aarani: Ginger eating monkey mathiri mulikama vaya thoranthu pesu >:(
Karthik: (epdi pesuvan d pesathanum thitura pesunum thitura nan enna panuvan)
Aarani:  ::)Oh unaku ithellam nanga epdi panom ethuku panom nu theriyanum la 8)

(Karthik aama nra mathiri thalaya mela keela aatunan)

Aarani: Apo oru flashback solren ketu thola 8)
Karthik:  ???(aandava vaay pesatha pulla poochinu nenacha intha kathu kathurale :-\)


Nama kuda enna flash back nu therinjukalam but kncm wait pananume
Ene na next epi la than sollalam
So ipo continue potuten…. ;D ;D

« Last Edit: May 27, 2017, 10:34:18 AM by VipurThi »

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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #9 on: May 27, 2017, 03:43:24 PM »
Intha doctor character enaku romba pidichiruku vipurthi :D kootu kalavanigala irukangale ellam ::) antha paiyana kathari kathari ala vitathuku yaruku enna aaga pogutho :o Flashback ku karthik oda serthu engalaiyum wait panna vachitinga :D

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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #10 on: May 27, 2017, 05:39:24 PM »
hi myna sis :D tnx sis :D aarani mathiri oru ponnu kita matikita karthik mathiri paiyan ellam azhuthe avanum ;D nama suba sis a think pani kathaila illuthu vitutan  :D (nalla vela avangaluku theriyathu ;D) type panum bothu uyire povuthu sis ;D ini fulla mudichitu mothama potuda planning :D paakalam sis :D

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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #11 on: May 29, 2017, 03:21:39 PM »
Vanakam sis..
haha characters ellam superb..
full ah mudichitu upadate panna poringala illai epavum pola episode by episode ah sis ???

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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #12 on: May 29, 2017, 03:37:09 PM »
Wow  Vipu sis this story is super and fun to read 8). I like all the characters. Flash back enava irekom ???...sis seekirama update panunga. Intha mari  kootu kalavanigal namekum kidaicha nalla irekomla  ;D

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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #13 on: May 29, 2017, 04:15:32 PM »

nice story
my favorite name karthick
« Last Edit: May 29, 2017, 08:01:49 PM by MysteRy »

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Re: !!! Nenjamellam Kadhal !!! (a short story)
« Reply #14 on: May 29, 2017, 08:44:01 PM »
myna ss and ree ss ;D en kashta kaalam mrng la irunthu power cut :( ipo than came :D type mudinchu crctn pathutu post paniruven

hi sangi :D tnx unga fav name aa :P nice :D