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~ Short Story : Vizhi Irandil Vizhundhenadi ~
« on: May 19, 2015, 10:41:51 PM »
Written by ♥ Mahe _krish ♥ ‬



Train la window seat la ukanthu
Janal vazhiya veliya iruka azhaga
Rasichitu vara sugame Thani
adhulayum namaku pudichavanga
Nama kuda Nama pakathulaye
Ukanthu Nama kaiya puduchukito
Nama thol la sanjikito vandha hmmm
Andha feeling solratha vida
anubavicha than puriyum. na ipo
Adha anubavichitu varen enaku
Puducha en chella ratchasi
en azhagu dhevadha enake enaku
matum sondhamana en wife madhu
Kuda  :D hmmm Ethana naal kanavu
Idhu theriyuma enaku ipo indha sec
Nijama mariduchu nu nenaikum podhe
Avlo happy ah iruku.  :D idho en
Pakathula Enna nerungi ukandhu
En kaiya puduchutu en thol la sanji
Kozhadha Mathiri thoongitu
varalaye Iva than enakulla kadhal
Nra varthaiku arthatha kuduthava
Enoda kavi.. Kavi madhura  :D

Ivala parkurathu ku muna vara
Kadhal adhu easy ah elarkum
kedachirum perusa adhula
mathavanga love na apdi ipdi ,
kedaikurathu kastam , apdi kedacha
Avanga than ulagathulaye romba
Lucky nu solrathu lam chuma nu than
Nenachen .Ana ivala en madhu ah
Partha naal la irundhu love oda
Artham enaku puriya aramichichu
Enoda lyf la ellame na nenachathu
Aasa pattathu than nadanthuchu
Puducha course vis.com paduchen
adhulaye En carrier um azhaga
enaku puducha Mathiri na
amachikiten ad direction adhu
Than en profession  :D thaniya flats
La staying appa amma native place
La irukanga .

Weekly once varuvanga yena
weekend la Matum than na available
Enoda lyf en profession profession
Profession adhu Matum than
Nanum adha than adhigam
virumburathunala enavo en lyf
Adhu kudave pochu apdi Poitu
irundha en lyf la than one day en
Madhu enter aana vanga en lyf la
Ena nadanthuchu nu parpom adhuku
Mudha na en name solave maranten
Sari ipo soliren en Peru nithish  :D

Nithish narration :

adhum oru week End than na en flats
la Bal cony la Ninu phone pesitu
irunthen en co Director kuda ad
shooting pathi Than . apo than opp la
irundha veetla Enaya parthu Yaro
action panuna Mathiri thonuchu na
phone pesite Ful ah turn pani andha
veeta parthen Anga oru ponnu ninu
ena parthu Kai Asachu action pani
sirichutu nina Enaku first ava enaya
than parthu Sirikurala nu therila
nanum suthi suthi parthen orutharum
ila . enavo therila Ava sirikuratha
Parkum podhu en Face layum
automatic ah siripu vara
Start aachu . na cal pesratha yum
Maranthu avalaye parthutu irunthen
En Kai la irundhu mble ah vittuten .

Me : oops  :o Ivlo neram Nama
Phonela la pesitu irunthom  :o hyo
Avala parthu en mble ah vittutene  :o

(Keela kunichu mble ah eduthen apo
Than gavanichen ava Ivlo neram
Sirichu action la pesitu irunthathu
Enoda flats ku keela irukura veetla
Balcony la ninu lolly pop saptutu
Irundha kuty paiyan kuda nu
therinjidhu )

Me : hyo apo Iva namala parthu
pesalaya Ivlo neram  :-\ nala vela
Badhil ku Nama action panirndha
Cmdy ah poidukum mble keela
Vizhundhathum nalathuku than pola  :P

(Na apdiye avanga rendu Perayum
Gavanika start panunen ava
Avana parthu lolly pop kudu nu ketka
Andha kuty paiyan Maten nu solla
Ava , ava kannalaye kenji konji
Avan kita pesitu irundha apovum
Avan Maten nu thalaya aata ava
kanna chinatha suruki
pls nu ava viral ah kuvichu avanuku
Muna action panuna fraction of
second la avlo exoressions ava
kannula katuna . andha kuty
Paiyan ena nenachano tuck nu avan
Vaai la vachirntha lolly pop ah eduthu
Avaluku Kudukra Mathiri ava
munadi neetunan odane ava
sirichutu ava kaiya neeti adha
vangikura madhiri action panuna
adha parthu na Sirichuten konjam
sathamave . ava tuck nu thirumbi
Parthuta na sirikuratha ava patha
Aparam kuda na sirikuratha stop
Panave ila . avala parthe sirichutu
Irunthen . ava enaya parthu ava
Iduupula oru kaiya vachi oru high
brow ah Matum thuki ena
moracha na tuck nu sirikuratha
Stop panitu avalaye kannedukama
Parthen ava parvaila andha sec
Avlo thimuru therinjithu unaku
manasula periya hero ah nu , ena
Parthu yen palla katra nra Mathiri
Oru Parvaya veesuna. Aparam
Avala na pakuren nu therinjum ava
Ena kandukama usual ponnu mathiri
vetka padama andha paiyan kuda
Konja neram konji pesi avanuku
Tata Kati flying kiss kuduthutu ava
Vetukulla poita. andha Otha parvaiku
Aparam ava kannu en side
thirumbave ila etharthama kuda .
Adhunalaye Ava enaku matha
Ponnunga kita irundhu dif ah therinja
Enaku avala pudichirnchu apove
Enaku therinjithu . anaiku Fula yen
Aduthu vandha one week ful ah
Avala andha parvaiya andha konjala
Enala nenaikama iruka mudila .

Adhuku aparam avala parkave daily
Eve balcony eh kedhi nu kedaka
Aramichen  ;) Ana avala parka than
Mudila apo than one day Terra's ku
Plants ku Thani vida ponen Anga
opp la ulla Terra's la ava . na
pakanum Pakanum nu theditu
irundha en Madhu kuti kuti
pasangaluku nadula Ukandhu sirichu
pesi keela kuninchu Edho ezhuthi
ezhuthi enavo panitu Irundha aparam
than gavanichen Ava andha kuty
pasangaluku tuition Soli kudukura
nratha. Romba dif ah Irundhuchu ava
tuition soli Kudukra Vitham kuda ava
thaniya chair potu Lam ukarala
pasangaluku nadula Pasangaloda
pasangala avanga kuda serthu
ukanthu oru amma Kozhainthaiku
epdi solli kudupangalo Apdi solli
kuduthutu irundha konjam kuda
moonji sulikuma koba padama
Solli kudutha adhe samayam ava kita
oru seriousness irundhuchu pasanga
Advantage eduthukadha alavuku .
anaiku oru vithama Therinja ponnu
inaiku Vera vithama Therinja

Enaku ava mela ulla interest adhigam
Aakuchu avaloda dif kind of roles .
Inum thevirama avala pathi therinjika
Aarvama irundhuchu adha implement
Pananum senjen apo than
therinjikiten ava oru private
matriculation scl la teacher nu
Veetuku ore ponnu andha area la
Elarukum fav na adhu kavi madhura
Than avaloda speciality eh ela age
Ppl kudavum pesuva adhum avanga
Age ku thangundha Mathiri Adhe
Samayam alavavum kuda . solla pona
Miss perfect nra alavuku sonanga
Apove therinju pochu avala love
Pana vaikurathuku romba kastam nu
, Sari idhu othu varathu vitra lam
nu kuda thonuchu . Ana adhutha sec
Eh ava en lyf la ilanratha enala
Othuka mudila adhuku aparam na
Decide paniten epdiyum avala en lyf
Partner ah aakikanum nu . adhunala
avala Follow panrathaye enoda main
job Ah mariduchu . profession
carrier edhume perusu ila avaluku
muna nu thona vachita . love vantha
ipdi namaku romba puducha visyam
kuda andha love ku munna secondary
Thing ah pogum nu apo than enaku
purinjithu . na avala pakurathu
Avalukaga balcony la wait panrathu
Elame theriyum avaluku . Ana ava
Suthama adhu edhayume kandukala
Aparam enakula thairiyatha vara
vachikitu ava kita nane Poitu
pesalam nu ponen .Ava scl la irundhu
Vetuku Poitu irundha nanum ava
kudave konja thooram nadandhu
Ponen silent ah ava enaya nimundhu
Oru parva partha nanum avala
Parthu smile panunen ava ena
Mathikave ila thirumbikita sari nu
Na pesalam nu yosichu ava kita hi
Sola vaaya thorandhen adhukula

Hiii kavi akka

Oru scl ponnu avala kupta

(Ava thirumbi parthu siricha )

Kavi madhura : oii  :D
She : akka Anga irundhu ungala
Thorathitu varen konjam medhuva
Nadandhu pazhagunga ka  :D

Kavi madhura : ha ha na Una Angaye
Gavanichirndha na un alavuku slow
Walk panirpen  :D
She : Ada ponga ka Ivlo vegama
Nadakurenga mudila  ::)

Kavi madhura : ha ha hmmm  :D sari
Inime indha Tym na Varum podhu
Pinala thirumbi pathute varen
She : yen

Kavi madhura : apo thane ne vandha
En vegatha korachika mudiyum  :D
She : apo neenga slow ah nadaka
Matenga nu solrenga

Kavi madhura : pazhagirchu  :D
She : akka nethu Nama partha
Sums than ka niraya ketrunthanga

Kavi madhura : app centum
confirm la
She : vandha solren ka  :P

Kavi madhura : apo centum ku
Kammi than Varum nra
She :  :D ena aala vidunga veedu
Vanthurchu Tata ka

Kavi madhura : hmm rytu  :D
 
(Ava again vegama nadaka start
Panita )

Me : (mmhum idhu velaikagadhu nana
Kalathula erangunathan undu )

hello
Kavi madhura :

Me : hellooo
Kavi madhura :

Me : helloloo
Kavi madhura :

Me : yenga ungala than nga
Kavi madhura : ufff hmm enkita
pesanuma la ? edha pathi pesa
porenga ok pesunga ena
pesanum solunga

(Ava kai kattukitu En side thirumbi
ninu en kanna parthu keta ava kita
Pesanum nu nenachen but ava
Ipdi ketpa nu expect panave ila )

Me : illanga na..
Kavi madhura : sari neenga ?

Me : ne... Neenga
Kavi madhura : mm na ?

Me : ( hyo epdi ponalum goal
poduralae ) adhu vanthu na..
Kavi madhura : hmm mela

Me :
Kavi madhura : ungaluku inum 5 mins
Than Tym

Me :
Kavi madhura : ok Tym over bye

(Ava solitu nadaka start panita )

Me : yenga nilunga
Kavi madhura : ipo ennnaaa ?

Me : Tym enanga
Kavi madhura :

(Ena oru luk vitutu thirumbi
nadaka start panita nanum
Pinalaye ponen apo opp la oruthar
Vantharu avara parthu ava siricha
Avarum Iva kita vanthu pesunaru
Na andha uncle ah pathathume 10
Step back . ava andha uncle kuda
Konjam neram pesitu ena pakura
Mathiri pinadi thirumbuna thirumbitu
Andha uncle kita again edho solla
Avarum ena oru parva patharu
aparam Enna Kai katitu Iva edho
Solla ena romba bayama pochu den
Ava avarkita solitu vetuku nadandhu
Poita andha uncle enaya parthu
Nadanthu vandharu )

Me : (oru vela chuma scene poduralo
Ena pathi sonna Mathiri Nama
Bayabadanum nu )

Na yosichutu irukum pothe avaru
En kita vantharu na avara
kandukatha Mathiri avara cross
Pani ponen apo avaru

He : thambi nilu pa
Me : yaru enayava sir

He : yen pa un veedu Enga unaku ?
Me : indha area than sir

He : hmm patha padicha paiyan
Mathiri therithu Ana enapa ipdi
Me : (adipavi nijamave enaya than
Maati vitiya apo  :o ) sirrr

He : ena pa idhuve last Tym ah
Irukatum
Me : sir neenga...

He : Tym 6.15 pa ena ponga indha
Kalathu pasanga Kai la oru watch
Kudava katta matinga
Me : ufff ohh rombaaa tnx sir

He : kavi than sonuchu ne Tym keta
Nu adhan baa sonen
Me : mmmm mmm ok sir na varen

(Apo namala pathi ava edhum
sollalaya chi nanthan bayanten
romba )

He : aparam thambi kavi en ponnu
Mathiri adhu kita edhum prachana
Panuna nu therinjithu ipo Mathiri
Pesitu iruka Maten hmmm purithu la
Me :  :o

(Aparam than therinjithu avaru
enaya warn pana than kuptutkaru
Nu apo ava enaya mati than vita pola )

Adhuku aparam Adutha naale ava
kita na pesanum nu mudivu pani
Epovum pola ava piñadiye ponen )

Me : hey madhu
Kavi madhura : aahhm madhu ?

Me : ama un Peru adhu thane
Kavi madhura : ila

Me : kavi madhura
Kavi madhura : haam ??

Me : teacher ah work panra
Kavi madhura :

Me : veetuku ore ponnu
Kavi madhura :

Me : eve Tym tuition teacher
Kavi madhura : mmm

Me : area motham chinavanga to
Periyavanga vara fav yaru nu keta
Kavi nu soluvanga
Kavi madhura : hmmmm

Me : aparam..
Kavi madhura : sari ipo eduku enaya
Pathi enkitaye solrenga nu na
Ketkanuma ??

Me : yenga enaku oru dbtu
Kavi madhura : ena ipo neenga sona
Info lam crct ah ilaya nu...

Me : cha cha adhulam crct than nu
Enake theriyum idhu Vera
Kavi madhura : verana ?

Me : ama ipo Ivlo theliva pesra apo
Anaikum idhu Mathiri direct ah enkita
Pesama edhuku un uncle kita ena
Mati vitta ? Ne ena sollanumo
Adha direct ah solirka vendiyathu
thane neeye
Kavi madhura : oh I c den ipo neenga
Enaya pathi sonna info lam epdi
Sonenga na sona Mathiri therila den
Epdi Enga vetuku vanthu ketengalo
Enaya pathi mathavanga kita edhuku
Neenga info collect panunenga

Me : ne enkita pesna thana na ketka
Mudiyum elarkitayum nala
Pesra Ana enkita Matum yen ipdi
Kavi madhura: ama neenga yaru

Me : naa nithish
Kavi madhura : oh ok nithish solunga
Neenga yaru ?
I mean enaku neenga yaru ?
En brother ah ??
En frnd ah ??
R en relative ah
Ila en cuisine ah ?
Atleast neenga en enemy ah ??
Solunga ipdi edhume endha uravume
Iladha ungakita na yen pesanum ?
Adhum na sirichu pesanum nu epdi
Expect panalam ? Solunga ?

Me : idhu vara ila Ana pudhusa
Urava yerpaduthikalam la ?
Kavi madhura : wat ?

Nithish : un lover ah  ;)
Kavi madhura :

(Edhume pesama ena parthu
moracha )

Me : sari andha alavuku vendam
at least un husband ah ??  ;)
Kavi madhura :

Me : ipdi edhume solama pona epdi
Edhavanthu ans panitu po
Kavi madhura : badhil solanuma

Me : hmmm ama
Kavi madhura: edhuku ? Ena badhil
uff neenga ena kelvi Kettutenga na
ans pana ?

Me : ok ipo ketkuren am in love wid u
ll u marry me ?
Idhuku ans panalam la ipo ?
Kavi madhura : thirumbavum
ketkuren neenga yaru solunga
neenga patuku varenga enaku body
Gourd Mathiri kudave nadapenga
aparam ethachum pesa try
panuvenga naalu vartha cross ques
Panuna odane bayanthu odirvenga
Inum minji pona unga veetu bal cony
La irundhu ena nottam viduvenga
Ilana na tuition solli kudukura vara
Motta madila ukandhu neengalum
Tuition padipenga Ivlo than neenga
Panrathu Ivlo than ungala pathi
Enaku theriyum idhula Edha vachu
Na ungaluku ans pana solunga

Me : madhu unmaya solanum na
Anaiku oru naal balcony la ungala
Parthu siruchen la anaiku than
First Tym ungala parthen adhuku
Aparam than ungala watch pana
Start panunen ungala pathi elame
Therinjikiten enaku ungala romba
Puduchu pochu den neenga solra
Elame sari than enaya pathi ungaluku
Theriyathu than na vandhu..
Kavi madhura : mmm theriyum Peru
Nithish work panrathu add director
Inga en veetuku opp flats la than
Irukenga

Me : ipo neenga yen ena pathi en
Kitave solrenga ?  :P
Kavi madhura : ungaluku Matum than
Idhulam seiya theriyum nu neenga
Nenachu peruma pattuka kudathula
Adhuku than  :D

Me :  :D
Kavi madhura : sari na varen bye

Ne : hello hello Enna idhu
Neenga inum ans solave ilaye
Kavi madhura : ellame namale pesna
Veetla amma appa ku vela ilama
Poidume so unga veetla vanthu
Pesa solunga en amma appa kita  :D

Me : ena pesa solanum  :P
Kavi madhura : haam unga amma
Kuda sanda poda ckrm unga veetu
Ponna Enga vetuku anupi vainga nu
Ketka solunga podhum  :D

Me : apo andha i lov u ??  :D
Kavi madhura : apdina  ;)

Me : madhuu pls
Kavi madhura : kalyanathuku
Aparam adhum enaku thonum podhu
Solren  ;)

(Ava solitu poita kadasi vara solave
Ila Enga mrge mudinju nanga
Honey moon eh kelambitom. Ipo vara
Iva solala Ana na avaluku oru gift
Kuduka poren ipovachum soluvala nu
Parpom )
 
Nithish : madhu

(Ava kannatha thati ezhupunan ava
Light ah kanna thorandhu partha )

Nithish : madhu unaku oru gift kuduka
Poren
Kavi madhura : adhuku yenga
thoongum podhu than gift kuduka
Thonuma ?  :D

Nithish: ama  ;)
Kavi madhura : sari kudunga  :D

Nithish: kudukanuma  :P
Kavi madhura : giftu giftuuu :)

Nithish: ok ok Ana adha kata than
Mudiyum

(Solite avan lap ah open pani oru
Video on panunan actually adhu oru
Add lolly pop kana add adhu first
Day nithish kavi ah parthapa
nadandha visyam adha apdiye ad
Ah design panirndhan )

Kavi madhura : ipdi than Ellam ad um
Shoot panrengala  :P ethurtha veedu
Bal cony la pakathu veetu garden la
nu ;)  :P
Nithish: ila idhu en madhu kaga en
madhu Ah na love pana start panuna
andha Nimisham precious ah
irukanum nu Nenachen adhukaga
than idhu Pudichirka ? :)

Kavi madhura : pudikalana ena
Panuvenga ? ;)
Nithish: pudikum nu thonudhu :)

Kavi madhura : actually neenga
Express panra alavuku na unga kita
Idhu vara love ah express panrathu
ila la nithu ?
Nithish : apdi ila Una vida na Una
Love panrathuku ne enaku vittu
Kudukura nu nenachu happy ah iruku
Madhu :)

Kavi madhura : Ana nithi ipo enaku
Express pananum nu thonudhu
Neenga ipdi lam panite irundha
kandipa na ungaluku vittu
kudukuratha stop panirven nu
thonudhu :)
Me : apo ipovachum...

Kavi madhura : lov u solanuma ? ;)
Me : thonudha solanum nu :)

Kavi madhura : therilaye ;)
Me : mmmm :) sari enaku thonudhu
I lov u ma dr madhu :)

Kavi madhura : nithu enaku ena
Thonudhu theriyuma ?
Me : solu ?

Kavi madhura : ungalala ipo mathiriye
Epovume na nesikapattu ungala
Vida konjam kammiya na ungala
Nesichikitu unga kuda serthu oru
50 , 60 varusham serthu
sandhosama vazha thonudhu :)
Me : 50 ,60 romba Kammi la

Kavi Madhura : ha ha apo oru 5
years extern panikalam ;)
Nithish : kuda oru 5 podhum ;)

Kavi madhura : :) Nithu
Nithish : mmm :)

Kavi madhura : i
Nithish : i ? ? ? :D

Kavi Madhura : I lyk u ;)  :P
Nithish : :) :)

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Re: ~ Short Story : Vizhi Irandil Vizhundhenadi ~
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2015, 10:54:14 PM »
Hahahaha..

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Re: ~ Short Story : Vizhi Irandil Vizhundhenadi ~
« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2015, 07:30:09 AM »
;D :P :P