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ENGLISH => POEMS => Topic started by: Mirage on April 20, 2017, 11:00:23 PM
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Words from the voice box never did know
They cut deep chasms causing hurts galore
It took me awhile to cease your pain
And make confessions my ego strained
I knew long after I pricked your heart
I should’ve done something just from the start
I wish to reciprocate the actual truth
The innermost forbidden fact, I deceived
Recapitulate my pretension, alter and make up
For all that I did miss, fearing I will miss
But the delusional optimism of “happily ever after”
Mocked at me every time I saw u falter
I therefore decided to live in my fantasy
Shrivel and wither my heart dead within me…
hope u guys like it ::) punctuation kandukadhinga >_<
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It is a very different poem or is it only me? Lol. Your creativity of writing that syncs to link with the choice of words goes hand in hand and related every line. I liked the entire poem, may be there can be a better title. I find that this poem is written in a very conscious or may be that it is inspired by someone to u etc😊 thanks for the share mirage😊may be if I have said anything wrong let me know😊
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Hi enigs.....thank you for sharing this poem.
When i read this poem the thing tht came to my mind is...how important words are.Good one sis..Creatively written.Keep writting sis.
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Tysm wave and reena sis...yes i wrote it for someone and ppl who know abt that will understand it better :) ty for your time and comments..i should have given a gist of what it was about ana tharale lol...i will tell u guys in pvt msg u will understand it better yes wave na title elam yosikala..no u haven't said anything wrong lol almost u guessed :D
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Nice poem mirage.