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Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #15 on: September 03, 2012, 04:05:37 PM »
Part VI
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Ippadi pala misunderstanding-ku apprum enakum Anuvukkum bond strong aayitu irukara mathiri irunthuchu. Avala paaka Vizag varattumanu ketten. Avanga relatives Hyderabad-la irukarathaagavum summer vacation varaporathaavum sonna. Kettavudane santhoshama irunthuchu. Naala count panna arambichen.


Antha naal vanthuchu. May 24th. Visaka expressla varathaavum coach S8num sonna. Avala paaka romba exciteda irunthen. Secunderabad stationla train varathuku munnadiye poiten. Vaazhkaila motha thadavaiya nimishamum vinaadiyum romba slowaa poratha irunthuchu.


Oru valiya train 5vathu platforathuku vanthuchu. S8 paathu odinen. Oru thoonuku pinnadi ninukittu irangara passengera paathen. Oru family, appa and 2 ponnunga irangunaanga. Oru ponnu ennaiya pathutu iruntha. atha kandukama thedikittu irunthen. Suddena thonuchu ivanga than Anu, Nidhiya irupangalo? Phone eduthu call panninen. Naan nenachathu correct. Phone edutha ponnu enakku muduka kaamichikitu ninutu irunthaa. sariya ava mugatha paaka mudiyala.


Ava phone eduththu hello sonna. Naan "ey pachha sudithaare, un kathalan pinnadi iruken". Suddena pinnadi thirumbi paathaa. Ava appadi oru alagu. Aala asaththura maathiri. Photola pathathavida romba alaga iruntha. Avaloda koonthal kaaththula alladikitu irunthuchu. Atha ava oorama othukkuna stylea paathukite irukalaam pola thonuchu. Ippadi oru devathaiya enaku koduthathuku kadavuluku nandri sonnen.


Naan pathatha paathu ava, "pothum enga relative veetuku porom. aprum meet pannalamnu" sonna. Avanga city buskaaga wait pannitu irunthanga. Naan konjam thali ninu en devathaiye paathutu irunthen. Aponu oru thollai. Oru kaaykari koodaiyoda oru amma help panna sonnanga. Naan koodaiya thooka thadumaaratha paathu Anuvum Nidhiyum sirika aarambichanga.


Avanga bus vanthuchu. Naanum antha busla erinen. pora valila thaan naan irukara idamum. Anuvuku pinnadi ava appa pakkathula ukkarnthen. Adakka odukama ethum panna irunthen. Anniku pathu driver vandiya vegamaa ootikitu irunthan.


Naan buslernthu irangi SMS anupinen. Anniku day shift irukarathaala tomm santhipomnu. 11 maniku call pannina. Next day Durgam Cheruvu kitte 4:30ku meet pannalamnu.


Next day, 25th may


Krishna nagar bus stopla wait pannikitu irunthen. 5 mani varaikum wait pannina ava varala. Innum 15 mins wait pannuvom, ava varatti veetuku polamnu decide panninen. Apo ava Nidhi koodayum ava cousin Priyavudavum vantha. Oru auto rickshawla Durgam Cheruvu ponom. Priya Nidh kooda Hitec Citya suthi paakarathaa solitu enga vitutu poita. Vivaram therinja ponnu. Manasukula avaluku thanks sonnen.


Anuva kootitu Durgam Cheruvukula ponen. Aduthtu vara pora thiruppangalum enaku therinjirukala.

Offline Gotham

Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #16 on: September 04, 2012, 10:39:47 AM »
Part VII (Anuvin Parvaiil)
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Anniku May 25. Naan Naniya paathen. Romba romba nalla paiyan. Ennaiyum en feelingsaiyum nalla purinjukitaan. En kaiya pudichikittu lake orama nadanthaan. Niraiya per jodiya ukkarnthirunthanga. Ellorum love birds than.


Kaaliya bench ethum kedakala. Kadaisa othukupurama oru bench irunthuchu. Nani anga ukkaralamnu sonnan. But Priya enna warn panniruntha. Jaakirathaiya iruka solli. so nan hesitate panninnen. 'Ingeye lawnla ukkaralamnu sonnen'. Avanum oknu solitan. Romba neram ennaya paathutu irunthaan. Oru lovely parvai. Avana paathu sirichu office pathi ketten. Athelaam aprum pesalaamnu sollitaan.


Naan romba alaga irukenu sonnan. Enaku bayangara vekkama pochu. Thanksnu sonnen. En benchla poi ukkaralamnu sonnanu theriyathu. Aana konja neram kalichu enaku anga poi ukkaranumnu thonuchu. Naalanju pasanga elloraiyum kindal pannitu galatta pannikitu vanthaanga. Nani avangala paakala. Enaku tensiona pochu. Naan Nanikite benchla poi ukkaralamnu sonnen. Anga poitom. Konja neram time spend panninen. Nani enna pathiye pesinan. Naan evlo alaga irukenu. Enna soap use panrenu. Oru kolantha mathiri irunthuchu avan seyal. Avana entha situationleyum miss panida koodathunu mudivu panninen.


Apprum 4 times hyderabadla meet panninom.


June 7th. Vizag thirumba oru naal thaan irunthuchu. Naniya vittutu poromngaratha ennala digest panna mudiyala. Munadi naal thaan Jublee hills la irukara templela meet panninom. Oru alagana greeting card kuduthaan. Kannelaam thanniyoda good bye sonnen.


June 8th. Secunderabad-ku purapattom. Naan, Nidhi and Priya moonu perum reservation status check panratha solli sikirame station poitom. Nani vanthaan. Naanum avanum one hr pesinom. Priyavum Nidhiyum water bottle vangarenu poitaanga. Appavum relativesum varum pothu avanga correcta call panninanga.


Kannila neeroda avan ena vittu pirinju ponaan. Next day, Vizag vanthu senthom. Avana koopitu vanthutathaa sonen. Avana paaathathuku aprum enga relationship innum strong anatha thonuchu. Avana marupadiyum paakanum pola irunthuchu.  Every month end en parents enga thaatha paatiya paaka villageku povaanga. So apo paakalamnu mudivu panninom. Avan Vizag vanthaan. en friend oruthan kooda stay panninan. Niraiya idatha suthi paathom.


Sep 29th. Avanoda 3rd visit. Apo theriyathu athu than avana naan lasta meet panna porenu...


Aduthu..


Offline Gotham

Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #17 on: September 05, 2012, 09:03:57 AM »
Part VIII
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(Anu parvaiyil)


Nanga rendu perum en friendoda bikela Rishikonda ponom. Anga oru paaraiyila ukkarnthutu kadalaiye paathutu irunthom. Engala mathiriye niraiye per anga sight seeingku vanthirunthanga. Yaaro enna uththu paakara mathiri irunthuchu. yarnu theriyala. Naanum Naniyum antha idaththa vitu kelambitom.


(Naniyin Parvaiyil)


Enga moonavathu santhippuku pin nan Hyderabad vanthuten. Vela konjam adhigama irunthathaala Anukite adhigama pesa mudinjathille. Ava konjam tensiona irukara mathiri irunthuchu.


Oru valiya enga projecta successfulla release panninathuku aprum free time kedachuthu. Anuvuku call panninen. Oru male voice ketuchu. Wrong numbero? Check paninen. Ava number thaan. Thirumba try pannina athe aal than eduthaan. Ava pera sonna kannapinanu thita arambichitan.


Ithu Anu number thaanum ava thaan mobilea kuduthanum sonnan. Enaku onum puriyala. Ethuku avan kite mobila kudukanum. Avan Anuvoda lovernum sonnan. Ulagame idinju viluntha mathiri irunthuchu. Ethachum playa irukumo?


Naan avaloda friendnu introduce pannikitu avala en kooda pesa sonnen. Avan ketta varthaiyileye thita aarambichitan. Naan phonea vachiten.


Anu enna kandipa ematha maata. Ivan poi solraan. Avala eppadi contact panrathunu theriala. Vizag polamanu yosichu next dayku ticket book panniten. Konjam clothes eduthukittu railway station poghum  pothu Anu call pannina. Enna maraka muyarchikarathavum, ava anupina cards gifts elathaiyum thirupi kuduthunum sonna. Shock ayiten. Manasu sukku noorachu.


Aanalum Vizag poganumnu kelambiten. Nera ava friend Mohan veetuku ponen. Yaro oru puthu aalu kooda avala paathatha sonnan. Enga pathanu keten. Bheemlinu sonnan. Thanimaiyana idaththukaaga lovers Bheemliku povanganu kelvipatiruken. Again shocka irunthuchu.


Mohan mobile vaangi Anuku call panninen. Phonea edutha. Enna ethirpakala. Than kalyanam pannika poravanoda restaurantla irukaratha solli phonea cut pannita. backgroundla oru paiyan voiceum athuku Anu sirikarathum ketuchu. Angeye rendu naal irunthen. Kadaisiya avala beachla paaka mudinjathu.


Avala meet pannapo sleevless tops and Jeanla iruntha. Oru thadava ketapo modern dress pudikathunu solliruntha. But ipo western outfitla iruka. Enga kathala pathi ketapo kandukave ille. ini paaka pidikalenum pesa pidikalenum sollitaa. Ennamo theriyala en kannula thanni vanthuchu.


Ethuvume pesama antha idatha vittu kilambinen.


-Nani


Nani elutharatha niruthitu kanna moodinan. Avan wife padichu pathutu ivlo thaananu ketta. Ille innum eluthanum oru part irukkunu sonnan. Mudichitu unaku kaambikarenu sonnan.


Final part-la...

Offline Gotham

Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #18 on: September 05, 2012, 01:16:51 PM »
Part IX (Anuvin parvaiyil)
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Oct 5, 2008. En vaazhkaiyila mosamana naal. Anniku thaan Naniyoda nambikaiya poyaakinen. Ponnu venamnu sonnathum boys ponnungala niraiya thitarathun en innum sila per kolai varaikum poirukanganu kelvipatiruken. Aana Nani appadi pata psycho ille. Atleast enna verupanu nenachen. But kannula thanniyoda oru varthai kooda pesama idatha vittu poitaan.


Enna nane nalla thitikiten. Lifela periya paavatha panniten. Aana enaku vera vazhi theriyala.


Last time, naanum avanum Rishikondala irukum pothu yaro watch panra mathiri feel panninen. Athanala antha idatha vittu kelambitom. Athoda vilaivugal adutha naal en mama Manu veetuku vantha pothu therinjuthu. Eppadi padikarenu ketapo nalla padikarenu sonnen. Apprum en friends pathi visarichar. En kekararnu puriyala. Elorum nalla irukanganu sonnen.


Thidirnu un boyfriend eppadi irukanu ketaar. Inga than irukaana ile ooruku poitaananu ketaar. Naan ketatha ennaleye namba mudiyala. Aana avarukku ellame therinjirunthuchu. Naanga first meet pannathulernthu last meet pannina varaikum. Avaroda friend thaan hyderabad-leyum Rishikondaleyum engala paartharam. En parentsta solla venaamnu kenja arambichen.


Un parents evlo periya aalunga theriyuma. Ippadi nee paninathu therinja enna aaghum theriyumanu kekka aarambichar. Entha questionkum enkite answer ille. Kadaisiya sonnar. 'Nee innum kolantha ile. adichu valaka. Unake puriyanum. Nee avana kalyanam pannikita un parents uyirodave iruka matanga. Nee than mudivu pannanum'. Sollitu poitaar. Enna panrathunu theriyama naan ala arambichen.


Anniku evening en amma enkite vanthu enoda teacher oruthara pathathaavum enna avanga romba perumaiya pesunanganum sonnanga. Avar enna kadaisiya 10thla thaan paarthaar. Enna solrathunu theriyala. Ennala Naniya vitutum iruka mudiyathu. Ellam ennala thaan. Naan thaan Nani manasula aasaiya valathen. Naan than avana Hyderabadla meet paninen. Intha prachanaiyelam yosikama irunthathu en thappu thaan.


Kadaisiya en kaadhala thiyagam panna decide panninen. Nan porumaiya sonna Nani kepanu thonala. En parentsa meet panni convince panna try pannuvaan. Appadi nadantha en maama avana uyiroda vida maataar. So avane enna hate pannanumnu yosichen. En mamava en boyfriend maathiri nadika sonen. En friendsa meet panni ena pathi thappa Nanikite solla sonnen. Mohanum sonna mathiriye senjan. Naan thaan avan nambikaiya posukinava. Oru pair western casual outfit vaanginen. Naan ithuku munnadi potathille.


Enna athula pathathum Nani acharyama pathaan. But adhigama worry panna vera visayam irunthathaala avan concentrate pannala. Enna evlo love panranum evlo nesikaraanum sonnan. Appadiye avana katti pudichitu azhanumnu thonuchu. Aana mudiyala. Manasa kallakitu avana thuchchama pesinen. Kannula neeroda avan ponathuku aprum ennala control panna mudiyala. Appadiye beachla ala aarambichiten.


Naan than ulagathuleye most unlucky girl. Naan panninathu thappa correcta theriyathu. But Nani vida nan en parentsa choose panninen. En parents othuka mataanganu ille. Eppadiyachum convince panirukalaam. Still naan avasarapattu decide panniten. Ipo naan naane illatha oru vaazhkaiya vaazhuren. Kalyanam aayiduchu. Still en feelingsa purinjuka yaarumilla. Nan panina paavathuku intha vaazhkai thevai thaan.


Ella ponnungalukum solrathu ennana. oruthara love panrathuku munnadi unga parentsa convince pana mudiyumanu yosinga. Anavasyama aduthavar emotionsoda velyadatheenga. Ellorum Nani mathiri iruka matanga. Sila per tharkolaiyum pannikalam ille kolai kooda seyyalaam.


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Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #19 on: September 05, 2012, 05:47:32 PM »
:) :) Advise Lam Super  :) :)

But Intha Kaalathila Yaaru Atheilam Parkuranga  :P :P

Love Vanthaley Ellam Maranthu Poirum  :P :P

Later Thanae Ithulam Yosikirangal  8) 8)

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Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #20 on: September 05, 2012, 06:04:49 PM »
Unmai than. Athukaaga antha kathaiyila irukaratha nan matha mudiyuma?

Kadhalukku than kannilaiye

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Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #21 on: September 05, 2012, 06:13:47 PM »
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Kadhalukku than kannilaiye

Yenathu Kann Illiyea  :o :o :o

Appo Parthu Uddanea Love Varuthu Silla Pearuku  :P :P

   Athu Epdi?? 

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Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #22 on: September 05, 2012, 06:24:33 PM »
Deivame vittudunga.

Kadhaluku ellame iruku konjam adhigamavum iruku. Ok?

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Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #24 on: September 10, 2012, 07:04:09 AM »
adade..interestinga poitu irundha story ippadi love failure aagite.
gotham theerpa maathunga.


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Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #25 on: September 10, 2012, 08:57:26 AM »
Anu


Ithu en kathaina mathalaam. yaar eluthiya kathaiyo? Original author line-a maatha koodathille. :)


Naan kathai eluthina rendu perum serra mathiri elutharen :D

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Re: Tholaipesi Natpu
« Reply #26 on: December 03, 2012, 02:38:00 AM »
gotham remba supera irruku thodanthu elluthunga machi
நான் நேசிக்கும் நண்பர்கள் என்னை மறந்தாலும் என்னை நேசித்த நண்பர்களை நான் மறப்பதில்லை..